FF- Shaadi Mubarak! IMP NOTE pg. 83 - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hey Afiya

Awesome update yaar''loved it.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Waise bahot time lete ho yaar ap ek part dene mein.😳 Please next part thoda sa jaldi dena😊, Missed Shadi mubarak yaar. 😭 loved lehar's parents.😃 They are very sweet. Preeti & Sashanks convo was discrined beautifully.👏 Loved Arjun & Arohi here. Arohi defending Hindi films where as Arjun defending Hollywood Film 😛''Nice one,'.loved reading it,⭐️

So now khanak has actually made it possible she is taking to Shaan 😉 & they both are so lost in their thoughts that they didn't get to know ki others already left.😲 Wohhaaa that's something intrusting & khatarnaak,😉 matlab next update will be full on Shanak (yiiipeee)

Waiting for the next part'''jaldi dena, 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Love 😊

Pranjal.

Pranjal! Waise bohot time lete ho app ek comment dene mein 😉 was missing your comments very much! Will try to update very soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT.FINALLY ARE WONDERFUL AND FANTASTIC JODI SHANAK ARE STARTING THEIR TALKS.LOVED IT.
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Posted: 14 years ago
luvved it afiya...sorry 4 being late...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update Afiya👏...I like how the couples are interacting😃...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey all! Thanks for the comments :) Here's a long update for ya!

Part 6 -

Taxi!, uugh TAXI! Khanak hollered while waving her hands, god stupid Australia, koi bhi taxi nahin hai!

Shaan and Khanak were trying for the past ten minutes to find a taxi

Just than a taxi pulled up to them
Oye Pajji! Lift chahiye? The taxi driver said enthusiastically.


Yes! Shaan exclaimed while he held the door out for Khanak


Aap Hindustani ho? Khanak asked.

Haan jee, Punjab se, aur aap? He asked.


Delhi, aur yeh Mumbai se hain, Khanak said pointing at Shaan


Oh ji, very good. Kaha jaana hain? He asked.


Jee, Marriot Hotel, Khanak answered.


The car ride was filled with silence

*Khanak thinking to herself* God, this Shaan is the King of awkward silences, and I thought he was opening up, Khanak pouted.


Toh aap dono ki Shaadi kab hui? The taxi driver asked.


Kya?! Shaan and Khanak both looked bewildered.


Hum Shaadi shuda nahi hain, Shaan said.


Ohh, toh phir sagaai kab hui? He asked.


Nahi, hum yahaan apni dost ki shaadi ke liye aaye hain, Khanak answered.


Accha, ab samaj mein aaya.
Oh worry not ji, shadi hui nahi to ho jaayega! Kyun! the taxi driver smirked.

Kaisa aadmi hain yaar? Shaan thought to himself while Khanak ignored the comment.


The taxi driver turned on the radio, Hai Junoon from New York started to play

Hindi gaana?! Australia mein? Khanak asked surprised.



Jee Haan, yahan Australia mein Hum Desi Radio hain, bohot bariya radio! He chuckled.



Khanak noticed that Shaan was singing along to the song

Tum gaate ho? Khanak asked.


Haan, college mein thodasa gaata tha, Shaan answered remembering all the fun he had in college. Guitar bhi bajati thi main, he said.


Toh abb kyun rokh dee? Khanak asked.


Woh, pata nahi… I just don't do it anymore… He answered.


Shaan had grown quiet again

Well, don't stop singing, now! You sing well! Khanak said.


Shaan smiled and hummed along, when they had reached her hotel


Thank you bhaisaab, kitne hui? Khanak asked.


Khanak, don't worry I got it, Shaan said.


What? No it's fine no formalities dude, Khanak said.


No, he's got to drop me off too, it's okay, Shaan said.


Well erm, okay… Again thanks for the ride, see you later Shaan! Khanak said.


Bye Khanak, Shaan waved goodbye.


Abb kahan jaana hai, paaji? The driver asked.


Hilton Hotel, he answered.


They drove around, while Shaan thought to himself


*Flashback to Shaan's music festival in college*


Shaan, Shaan, Shaan the crowd roared! Ab hamare college ki Jaan, Shaantanu Khandelwal! The MC exclaimed.
Hua Hain Maan Bawara started to play in the back. Shaan walks on stage "Dil ka maamla hai, dil ne suljhaaya hain, kuch pyaar vyaar isne, tere aas paas paya hain…." The crowd yells, and cheers Shaan on, Arjun, Shashank and Abeer are singing along as Shaan calls them on stage "Hua hain maan bawara, bawara, maan bawara… aa pyaar mein… *Shaan winks at Natasha, who is standing in the front of the crowd cheering him on" *End of Flashback*

Shaan jerks back to reality, his eyes are moist with tears at the sudden memory of Natasha, when the taxi stops in front of the hotel

Oye, paaji, hum pochgaye hain, The taxi driver said.


Hmm *Shaan wipes away his tears* Kitne huay? He asked.


At the hotel room

*Shaan walks into the room* Oye Khotey! Kidhar thay yaar, do you know what time it is, you had Shashank and me worried! Arjun exclaimed.


Shaan mumbled something, guys I'm tired, I'm going to bed, Goodnight, he said.


What's his problem? Shashank asked.


I don't know, *Arjun shrugged and yawned* I'm going to bed too, kal subha 8 baje uthna hai, remember, He said.


8 baje!! You expect me to wake up at 8! Who wakes up at that ungodly hour? Uugh vacation pe aaya hoon, aur itna subha uthna parega! Shashank whined.


*Arjun smirked* And you want to own a business one day? When will office hours start, noon? Arjun laughed.


What's that supposed to mean?! Shashank asked.


Kuch nahi beta, sonay jaa, Arjun said jokingly.


Breakfast, at the house Abeer and Leher rented

Where were you guys yesterday, you totally ditched Shaan and me, Khanak said


Mat pooch yaar, uss idiot Arjun ne poora raat kharab kar diya! He said Bollywood films are stupid and impractical! Arohi exclaimed.


Oh really, I've never heard anyone say that before, Khanak said sarcastically


I know! Arohi yelled.


*Khanak shook her head*, Preeti why did you ditch us, you never ditch anyone! Khanak said.


Sorry Khanak, Shashank and I went out for a walk just to talk to each other and stuff, you know it's been a while since we've seen each other, Preeti said.


Ohh I gotcha, Khanak winked at Preeti.


And I was attacked by the family *Leher yawns* god marriages are so stressful, by the way Khanak everyone loved the lehenga you designed for me, it really was beautiful, you're an incredible friend, Leher said.


Aww, okay I forgive you all! By the way did you guys know that Shaan sings? Khanak said.


*The guys walk in* Sings? Duude he was our college's personal rockstar! Shashank exclaimed.


Kya awaaz thi, Kya style tha…, Arjun said using flamboyant gestures.


Oye, nautanki bandh kar! Abeer laughed.


But seriously man, you were amazing, spectacular, mindblowing… Shashank said.


Cut it out guys! Shaan laughed.


Everyone heads to the backyard for breakfast , Abeer pulls up a chair next to Leher

Shaan, you should sing at our sangeet! Leher said.


Oh I don't know… I don't sing much anymore, Shaan said


Abeer looked at Leher and Leher quickly said…

I understand, Leher smiled.


Well, looks like we're all done eating, Leher why don't we give them a tour of the house? Abeer said.


Everyone gets up for the tour, Arjun and Arohi ignore each other, making an effort to look at opposite directions, Shashank and Preeti walk close by while Shaan, Khanak, Abeer and Leher walk together

And from here *Abeer points at the large glass doors* you could see the ocean!


*The gang finishes up the tour* Arohi squeals, God the architecture of this house is amazing! Just like the one in Zindagi Na Milegi Dobara! She said.


*Arjun rolled his eyes* I like the house too, especially the game room! He said.


I know, we're gonna have loads of fun there! Abeer exclaimed.


*Preeti thinks to herself* Boys!


Everyone heads to the living room

So there are two floors, and four bedrooms, so they'll be two to a room, Girls on the top floor, and guys on the first floor, Leher said. Sound good?



And Shaan, we can room together, we have things to catch up on anyway, Abeer said while Shaan nodded.


Oh stop acting, you know you want to be with Leher Bhabhi! Shashank joked.


Shashank, stop joking! Preeti said.


Abeer, do you think it's smart having these two sharing a room? Shaan asked while pointing at Shashank and Arjun.


What nonsense yaar, we love each other, we're homies, we're down for life, Kyun Shanky? Arjun grinned.


*Shashank pointed at Arjun* Bilqul! I love this man! Shaan tu apni aap ki chinta kar, we're gonna be fineee, he said.


*Everyone laughed* Shaan whispered to Abeer, dekh te hain kitni der ek doosre ke saath shaanti se reh paayega.


Toh phir, Leher I guess I'll be with you, and Khanak you can be with Arohi, Preeti said.


Cool! Arohi exclaimed.


*Khanak was texting her fiance, and perks up as she hears her name* Wait, sorry, what just happened? Khanak asked.


We're gonna be roomies! Arohi exclaimed.


Oh god no! Yaar, yeh museebat meri sar pe kaise aagayi.
Dimaagh khayegi apni filmi baton se! Khanak said.

*Arohi looks fakely hurt* Oh come on, you know you love meee, Arohi said.


*Khanak laughed* Yeah I do, but irritate me and I'm throwing your stuff out of that ginormous glass door we just saw! Khanak said.


Everyone laughed, and relaxed in the living room


Here's the picture of the house they're staying at:




Their living room:



Thanks to Simi for the picture :)

And the patio area:





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Posted: 14 years ago
hei afiya,
nice update..
so shaan sings n khanak noticed that..
he was a star in his college days..
he is reminded abt natasha..
stop him feeling bad for natasha soon n just let her be a part of his past..
the house tour was gr8..
enjoyed it..
khanak texting her fiance..break up her relation with him soon..he is just with her for her money..
do continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Afiya!!
You are welcome to share any of the pics!!:D
Lovely update...liked the way the driver was questioning both of them..and Shaan spontaneously breaking out into song!! Very nice touch!!
Will he sing at the sangeet??
Love, Simi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ye ghar mein shift ho rahe from hotel is is ...

It will be fun to see how everyone adjusts ...

Shadi kab hain?

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simiv

Hi Afiya!!

You are welcome to share any of the pics!!:D
Lovely update...liked the way the driver was questioning both of them..and Shaan spontaneously breaking out into song!! Very nice touch!!
Will he sing at the sangeet??
Love, Simi



Will he?? 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely house.. nice update.. so Shaan started to sing again when Khanak asked.. good.. and now he is defo going to sing in the Sangeet.. waiting for that...

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