skipped golden shanak scenes...3rd pt updt on pg 8

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sarah_zeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

heii reena got yorr pm.. cudn't reply in time coz i haven't got on this forum for long due to my exams.. just love yorr updates.. love shanak.. wish cud see these precious moments on screen.. but yorr description is no less.. I can actually visualize them being so adorable while executing these scenes..

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SHANAKFAN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: sarah_zeen
heii reena got yorr pm.. cudn't reply in time coz i haven't got on this forum for long due to my exams.. just love yorr updates.. love shanak.. wish cud see these precious moments on screen.. but yorr description is no less.. I can actually visualize them being so adorable while executing these scenes..

thanks 4 appreciating sara...🤗

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Trupti Pednekar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Frist of all Sorry Reena for late reply today i came on IF 😳 ... This was an Cutest part loved it... Shanak convo was best... I want them back yaar...

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SHANAKFAN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Trupti.P
Frist of all Sorry Reena for late reply today i came on IF 😳 ... This was an Cutest part loved it... Shanak convo was best... I want them back yaar...

hey trupti we all really want them back...😔

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SHANAKFAN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: RB81

disha wat did u think of our shanak??
r they machine r human??😃

hey ramani dear...just get that confirmation from dishu..she knows it better...🤣🤣

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snigdhanagar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

hey reena when will u writet 3rd part eagarly waiting for dat...

plz asap...😛

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SHANAKFAN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

THIRD SHANAK SCENE...❤️
again sorry 4 delaying d update...

( Romantic shanak scenes...)❤️😍

This 3rd scene is consist of two scenes...

only want to say...before reading it just think of shaan n khanak n their way of delievering d dialogues n their gestures too...

1st scene...

(shaan jim se aata hai...living room mein madhvi n sunil chai (tea) pee rahein hain...)

shaan : hey mom!!! hey dad!!! good morning...

madhvi : goodmoring beta...

sunil : good morning shaan!!!..jim se aa rahe ho...

shaan : yaa dad..waise khanak kahaan hai...

madhvi : aur kahaan hogi.. kitchen mein...main to thak gayi hoon usey samjhakar... beta ab tum hi usey samjhao...usey aaram karna chahiye...

sunil : madhvi uska jo mann karta hai usey karne do...waise bhi woh samajhdaar hai usey kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi usey acchi tarah pata hai...

madhvi : haan sunil!!! but usey aaram bhi toh karna chahiye...

shaan : don't worry mom main usey samjha dunga...

(shaan khanak se milney ke liye kitchen mein jata hai...aur khanak aata gundhna shuru karti hai aur apne aap se baatein kar rahi hai...)

khanak : aaj mein shantanu ke liye parathe banaongi..waise bhi aaj kal apna bilkul khayal nahi rakhte.. jab dekho to woh sandwitch aur pizza khate hain...bhagwaan jaane office mein bhi thik se khana khate hain ya nahi...mera bus chale to main office jaake unhe acche se khane khila ke aaoo...par nahi unhe to sirf meri fikra rehti hai ...nahi khanak aisa bilkul nahi chalega..bus kuch din maine dhyaan kya nahi diya kitney kamzor ho gaye hain mere shantanu...

(ye sunte hi shaan apni aanhein band karke ek pyari si smile deta hai ...)

shaan : meri budthal...iss waqt bhi mere baarein mein soch rahi hai...

khanak : chalo khanak jaldi se kaam khatm karo shantanu aate hi honge..aur aate hi aise oongli dikhakar bolenge khanak tumhe kaha tha na maine koi kaam nahi karna...jaise main pregnant nahi bimaar ho gayi hoon..uff..par mere budthal ko kaun samjhaye...

(shaan mann hi mann hasna shuru karta hai...)

shaan : ahem..

(khanak samne dekhti hai..aur chup ho jaati hai...shaan khanak ke piche aakar use hug karta hai aur khanak ke kandhe par apna face rakta hai..)

shaan : so madam apne aap se kya baat kar rahi thi tum...

khanak : main !!! nahi to ...

shaan : accha !!!! iska matlab aaj kal main tumhare mann ki awaazein sunne laga hoon..aur madam waise tum ne budthal kise bola..

(khanak haste huye...)

khanak : shantanu aapke kaan kuch zyada hi bajne lage hain...

shaan : accha!!! mere kaan zyaada bajne lage hain..abhi batata hoon..

khanak : dekhiye shantanu aapki koi masti nahi chalegi..warna mein!!!

shaan : warna tum kya??? khanak...

(shaan khanak ko anpi taraf ghoomata hai..aur khanak ke gaalo par haath ferte huye kehta hai...)

shaan : haan khanak...main sun raha hoon..warna tum kya??? ...

(khanak sharma ke apni aankein niche karti hai...)

khanak : shantanu...

shaan : hmmm...bolo khanak..

khanak : shantanu dekhiye koi aa jaayega...aap jayiye..

shaan : toh aa jaane do ..

khanak : shantanu...

(shaan khanak ke honthon (lips) pe oongli (finger) rakhta hai...)

shaan : shhh...chup...

(shaan khanak ko jaise hi kiss karne jaata hai...tabhi hamare harilal ki entry hoti hai...)

khanak : shantanu..hari bha..

(shaan hadbada jata hai ...aur woh haath mein belan lete huye kehta hai..)

shaan : khanak..tumhe aaj mein sikhata hoon parate kaise banate hain...

(khanak shaan ki haan mein haan milati hai..aur mann hi mann hasti hai shaan ko belan ke saath dekhkar...)

harilal : woh sahab ko ek aur chai chahiye...

khanak : ek minute haribha...mein abhi deti hoon...aap lekar jaayiye..

(harilal chai lekar jata hai...aur khanak jor-jor se hasna shuru kar deti hai...)

khanak : badey keh rahe the aa jane do kisiko...mein nahi darta...hahahahahaha..

(shaan belan ko rakhta hai...)

shaan : khanak tum hasna band karo pehle...

(khanak shaan ko chidane lagti hai...)

khanak : shantanu..aap belan ke saath bohat acche lag rahe the..to kya keh rahe the aap..mujhe parathe banana sikhayenge...jara dekhun to sahi kaise banate hai parathe...

shaan : khanak bass ho gaya abb hasna band karo...aur iss harilal ke bacche ko toh main...tumhe pata hai ye harilal ka baccha hi hamare pyar ka sabse bada dushman hai...jab dekho disturb karne aa jaata hai..poora mood kharab kar diya...

(khanak hasna band karti hai..)

khanak : shantanu..haribha ki kya galti hai..woh to apna kaam kar rahe the..woh to aap hi ho jo kahi bhi shuru ho jaate hai..

shaan : waah kya zamana aa gaya hai...thik hai toh chalo mere saath, mujhe meri galti sudharni hai...

khanak : kahaan???

shaan : hamare room mein...

khanak : shantanu aap bhi na..abb jayiye...

shaan : khanak ek kiss do na..plzzz

khanak : shantanu aap ja rahe ho ya nahi...

shaan : arey mujhpe gussa...gussa to mujhe karna chahiye ki tum yahaan kaam kar rahi ho...

khanak : shantanu main hamesha to aaram nahi kar sakti na...plzz mujhe karne dijiye na..

(shaan smile karne lagta hai...)

shaan : thik hai magar zyada nahi...ok..

khanak : shantanu main zyada kuch nahi karungi...

(shaan jaane lagta hai..aur ek baar piche mud kar dekhta hai..)

shaan : khanak!!!

khanak : haan shantanu...

(shantanu khanak ko flying kiss deta hai...n khanak sharmate huye usey pakad leti hai...aur phir woh shaan ko flying kiss deti hai...aur shaan usey pakadta hai...aur apni aankehin band kar leta hai...)

shaan : khanak jab tumhara kaam kathm ho jaaye to kya mere liye ek coffee laaoogi..

(khanak apna seer hilate huye haan kehti hai..)

shaan : ok den ..but no zyada kaam...

(shaan kitchen se baahar aate huye apne aap se kehta hai...)

shaan : kahank main bhi shantanu khandelwaal hoon...kiss to main tum se lekar hi rahunga...aise nahi to waise hi sahi...

(thodi der baad khanak apne room mein coffee lekar aati hai...shaan apni guitar ke saath sofe par baitha hai...)

khanak : shantanu ye lijiye aapki coffee...

shaan : thanks khanak...yahaan mere pass aakar baitho...

(khanak shaan ke pass aakar baith jaati hai...shaan coffee pita hai aur thodi si coffee rakh deta hai...)

shaan : waise khanak coffee puri fiki thi ...tum chaho toh taste kar lo...

khanak : shantanu ye sab poorane penthrein hai..ab aap mujhe kahenge tum pikar dekho aur fir mere pine ke baad main kahungi ki arey ismey to shakkar hai, fir aap coffee pikar kahenge arey haan shakkar to ab thik hai...kyunki tum ne jo coffee pi...rehne dijiye shantanu mujhe sab pata hai...

(shaan smile karne lagta hai...)

shaan : khanak main sach keh raha hoon...tum ek baar try to karo...

(khanak coffee taste karti hai...shaan khanak ke pass dekhta hai...n wait kar raha hai khanak ke reaction ke liye...khanak coffee pitey hi muh bannati hai...)

khanak : shantanu...

shaan : haan khanak...

khanak : aapne pehle kyun nahi bataya...ismey to sach mein shakkar nahi hai...aur aapne itni kadvi coffee kaise pee li...mujhe bolna chahiye tha na shantanu...

(shaan apna ek haath piche se khanak ke kandhe par rakhta hai aur ussey apne pass leta hai...khanak shaan ki taraf dekhti hai aur fir apna sir shaan ke kandhe par rakhti hai...)

shaan : accha toh mujhe pehle bolna chahiye tha...

khanak : haan...

(shaan ek naughty si smile dete huye...)

shaan : khanak thodi der pehle kehne ki koshish ki thi...magar tumhe to mujh par yakin hi nahi hua...

(khanak ka sir ab bhi shaan ke kandhe par hai...aur ab woh apna haath shaan ke chest par rakhti hai..)

khanak : woh aap hamesha kuch na kuch masti karte ho...toh maine socha iss baar bhi ...

shaan : iss baar bhi kya????...main masti kar raha hoon...

khanak : hmmm...

shaan : thik hai..toh ab tumhe sazaa milegi...

(khanak shaan ki taraf dekhti hai...)

khanak : sazaa...

shaan : haan...sazaa toh milegi...

khanak : kya???

shaan : hmmm!!!!! tum mujhe kiss karogi...

(khanak ye sunte hi...shaan ko halke se apne haath se chest par maarti hai...)

shaan : oouucchhh!!!!..khanak ye kya hai??? tum toh apne pati ko maar rahi ho...

khanak : shantanu... aap ko toh bas mauka chahiye ...aur haan issey maarna nahi kahte...

shaan : accha!!!! ..to kya kehte hai..

khanak : pyaar se maarna kehte hai...

(shaan khanak ko smile dete huye...)

shaan : accha...mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha...

khanak : ab toh pata chal gaya na...

shaan : haan... mrs. khanak shantanu khandelwaal...

(shaan kuch sochta hai...aur khanak ke tummy par haath lagata hai...)

khanak : ab kya hua shantanu...ye kya shuru ho gaya aapka...

shaan : arey apne baby se baath karne ja raha hoon...

khanak : accha...abb jake baby ki yaad aayi aapko...

shaan : arey main kabhi bhi hamare baby se baath kar sakta hoon...

(shaan khanak ki taraf dekhta hai ...)

shaan : waise khanak tumhe pata hai...main hamare baby ko tumse zyaada pyaar kar sakta hoon iss waqt..

khanak : kya matlab???? aap mujhse zyaada baby ko pyaar kar sakte hain...

shaan : haan khanak...jis tarah main baby ko pyaar dunga waise tum de hi nahi sakti...

khanak : shantanu aap rehne dijiye...main maa hoon..aur mujhse zyaada pyaar baby ko uske papa bhi nahi de sakte...aur aap bhul rahe hain woh iss waqt mere bhitar hai..

shaan : jaanta hoon...but trust me khanak...main tumhe abhi dikha sakta hoon...

khanak : accha!!!! woh kaise??? jara main bhi toh dekhun...

shaan : thik hai..jaisa main karunga tum karke bataoo...

khanak : thik hai...

(shaan zhukta hai...aur khanak ki tummy ko kiss karta hai...)

khanak : shantanu kya chal raha hai...

shaan : dekho khanak maine abhi hamare baby ko pyaar kiya...kiss deke...abb tum baby ko aise hi pyaar karke dikhaoo...

(khanak shaan ki taraf dekhti hai,fir tummy ki taraf dekhti hai...aur shaan smile karna shuru karta hai...)

khanak : shantanu...aap bohat hoshiyaar ho...

shaan : chalo atlast tum ne maana toh sahi ki main hoshiyaar hoon...tum to aise hi mujhe budthal kehti rehti ho...

(khanak apni tummy pe haath rakhti hai...aur baby se baat karti hai..)

khanak : sorry baccha filhaal aapki mummy aapko papa jaise pyaar nahi kar sakti...

(shaan khanak ke haath par haath rakhta hai jo khanak ne apne tummy par rakha tha...)

shaan : nahi baccha...aisa bilkul nahi hai...mummy bhi aapko same waise pyaar kar sakti hai jaise papa ne kiya...bus thoda tariqa alag hoga magar pyaar wahi hoga jo mummy aapko dena chahati hai...

(khanak shaan ki taraf dekhti hai...aur shaan anpna haath khanak ke gaal par rakhta hai..)

shaan : haan khanak..tum bhi hamari baby ko waisa hi pyaar kar sakti ho jaise maine kiya...

khanak : woh kaise shantanu...

shaan : bas beech main kissi ki jarurat hogi jo tumhara pyaar hamare baby tak pohanchaye...

khanak : matlab...

shaan : dekho tum mujhe kiss karna aur fir main baby ko kiss karunga...toh ho gaya na...tumhara pyaar baby tak pohanch jayega...aur believe me main 100 % tumhara diya hua pyaar hamare baby ko dunga...

(khanak smile karne lagti hai...)

khanak : shantanu main aapko jo budthal bolati hoon woh ek dum barabar hai...waise maan lijiye ki main aapko jo pyaar dungi baby ke liye, toh kya gaurantee hai ki aap baby ko utna hi pyaar denge...

shaan : madam...aazma ke dekh lo...

(khanak sharma jaati hai...aur fir shaan ki taraf dekhti hai...shaan smile karte huye...)

shaan : soch lo khanak.. bilkul bhi ghaate ka sauda nahi hai...

(khanak shaan ke pass aati hai aur ussey ek gaal pe kiss kart hai...shaan smile karne lagta hai...)

shaan : chalo toh ab baby ko kiss diya jaaye...

(shaan zhukta hai aut khanak ki tummy ko kiss karta hai...aur fir apna kaan khanak ki tummy ko lagata hai..)

shaan : hey baccha aapko mummy ka pyaar mila????...kya?..accha!!!...

khanak : kya hua????

shaan : arey khanak baby keh raha hai..mummy ne thik se pyaar nahi bheja..to fir se bhejne ko bola hai...kiss...

(khanak shaan ki taraf dekhti hai...)

khanak : accha...aisa kahaan baby ne...

shaan : hhhmmm...chalo fir se do...

(shaan apna dusra gaal aage karta hai...)

shaan : common...khanak...

(khanak smile karte huye...shaan ke dusre gaal par kaske kiss karti hai...aur shaan smile karne lagta hai...)

shaan : wah..ye hota hai kiss...wait main baby ko deta hoon...

(shaan zhukta hai aur fir se khanak ki tummy ko kiss karta hai...khanak hasne lagti hai...)

khanak : ooouucch shantanu..mujhe gudhudi ho rahi hai...

(shaan apna kaan fir se khanak ki tummy par rakhta hai...)

shaan : so baby ab bolo aaptak mummy ka pyaar pohancha...ok!!!!

(shaan khanak ke chehre ke samne apna chehra lata hai...)

khanak : ab kya hua shantanu...iss baar to maine aache se diya tha...

shaan : haan!!! but iss baar lips pe chahiye...

khanak : abb ye bhi aapko baby ne kahaan...

(shaan khanak ke chehre ke aur karib jaata hai...)

shaan : nahi..ye to baby ke papa ko chahiye...baby ko toh mummy ka pyaar mil gaya na...

(khanak apni palko ko niche karti hai..)

shaan : khanak meri taraf dekho...

(shaan khanak ke chehre ko apne haathon se pakadta hai,aur khanak ke dono gaal par kiss karta hai...fir khanak ko maathe par chumta hai..aur dheere dheere apna naak khanak ki naak ko touch karte huye apna maatha khanak ke maathe ko touch karta hai...dono gehri saasein lete hai ..shaan ke haathon ki ooonglia (fingers)khanak ke baalon (hairs) mein hai aur khanak ke haath shaan ke back par hai...fir shaan apne hoothon(lips) ko khanak ke hoothon se touch karta hai..aur kiss karta hai...)❤️

scene khatam...just feel it yaaron...😍

2nd scene...

(shanak bedroom scene...)😆

(shaan soya hua hai... khanak room mein aati hain aur room ke parde kholti hai...)

khanak : kaise bacchon jaise soye huye hain...

(khanak shaan ke pass aake baithti hai...aur shaan ko mathe par kis karti hai...shaan smile deta hai...aur apni aankhein band hi rakhta hai...)

shaan : khanak ab gaal par bhi de do...

(khanak shaan ke pass dekhti hai..)

khanak : shantanu abb bohat hogaya chaliye uth jayiye..waise aap ab tak kaise soye huye hai..jana nahi hai aapko ...

shaan : nahi khanak...aaj thoda late jaana hai...

(shaan khanak ko pakkad leta hai...)

khanak : shantanu chodiye mujhe...aur jaldi se naha lijiye...

shaan : naha lunga khanak...tum mere pass hi raho na...

khanak : shantanu dekhiye koi aa jayega...darwaaza bhi khula hai...aur ab ye mat kahiye ki aa jane do...dekha hai maine haribha se bhi aap kitna darrte ho...

(khanak hasne lagti hai...)

shaan : khanak main koi darta varta nahi hoon...

khanak : accha!!

shaan : woh to main ye sochta hoon ki tumhe koi pareshaani na ho...

khanak : aacha..matlab aap mere baare mein sochte hain...aur khud ka kya???

(shaan khanak ko apne aur pass karta hai..)

shaan : agar sawaal mera hai to tum se accha kaun jaanta hai ki main kitna besharam hoon...

(khanak sharma jaati hai aur shaan ki aankhein band kar deti hai...shaan khaank ka haath apni aankhon se hatata hai...)

shaan : khanak jab dekho tum meri aankhein band kar deti ho...

khanak : taki aap aage koi besharmi waali harqat na karo...

shaan : accha!! abhi batata hoon tumhe...

(sunil shaan ko bulane lagta hai...)

sunil : shaan...shaan...

(shaan disturb ho jaata hai... aur khanak hasne lagti hai...)

shaan : khanak tum hasna band karo ...aur ye dad bhi na..hamesha wrong timing pe hi bulate hai...

khanak : koi wrong timing nahi hai shantanu...chaliye uthjaayiye aur naha lijiye...main aapke liye chai lekar aati hoon...

(shaan khanak ki taraf dekhta hai...)

khanak : aap nahane ja rahein hain ya nahi..

shaan : ok...ja raha hun...

(shaan nahane jaata hui...khanak shaan ke liye chai lane jati hai..shaan washroom se towel mein bahar aata hai...aur khanak shaan ke liye chai lekar aa rahi hai...madhvi living room se khanak ko dekhti hai...)

madhvi : khanak..

khanak : ji mummy ji...

madhvi : beta tum se kuch poochna tha...

khanak : mummyji..ye chai main shantanu ko dekar aati hoon...

madhvi : ok khanak..tum mere room mein hi aa jaana..

khanak : ji...

(shaan ye sun leta hai...aur usey pata chal jaata hai ki khanak aa rahi hai..so woh washroom mein fir se chala jaata hai aur towel nikaal ke bed par rakhta hai...khanak room mein aati hai...)

khanak : shantanu...shantanu...aap andar ho...

(shaan andar smile karte huye...)

shaan : haan khanak...

khanak : accha shantanu maine aapke liye chai layi hai...aap pee lijiyega..mein jaa rahi hoon...

shaan : arey khanak..kahaan ja rahiho...

khanak : woh mummyji ne mujhe bulaya hai...

shaan : arey khanak sunno...

khanak : haan shantanu...

shaan : shayad main apna towel wahi bhool gaya hoon dekho jara...

khanak : arey haan!!! yahi bistar par hai..

shaan : jara dena to sahi...

(khanak towel utthati hai...)

khanak : shantanu ye towel toh geela hai...

shaan : koi baat nahi khanak...mujhe chale ga...

khanak : nahi shantanu main aapko dusra towel deti hoon...

(shaan apne aap se bat karta hai...)

shaan : arey khanak koi bhi towel leke aa jao...

(khanak washroom ka door knock karti hai...)

khanak : shantanu ye lijiye...

(shaan door open karta hai...aur khanak ka haath pakad ke usey andar khinch leta hai...)

khanak : shantanu...ye kya kar rahe hain aap...chodiye mujhe...main fisal jaaoongi...

(shaan khanak ko apni baahon mein pakad leta hai...khanak apni aankhein band kar leti hai...)

shaan : aisey kaise gir jaaoogi main hoon na tumhe sambhalne ke liye...

khanak : shantanu ye towel to pahaniye...

shaan : ye lo aise baat kar rahi ho jaise kabhi mujhe bina towel ke dekha nahi...

khanak : aap jab tak towel pehente nahi main apni aankhein nahi kholungi...

shaan : accha lao...

(shaan towel pehenta hai...)

shaan : chalo ab aankhein khol do...

khanak : shantanu aap ye kaisi harkate kar rahein hain...ab aap papa banne waale hain...

(shaan khanak ko kas kar pakadta hai...)

shaan : madam agar aisi harkate nahi karta toh aaj papa kaise banta...

khanak : shantanu aap bohat besharam ho gaye hain...

shaan : tumhare pyaar mein khanak...

khanak : dekhiye shantanu koi aayega to kya sochega hamare baare mein...plzz mujhe jaane dijiye...upper se darwaaza bhi khula hai...

shaan : arey kisiko thodi pata hai ki hum dono andar hain...

khanak : dekhiye shantanu mummyji ne mujhe bulaya hai...mujhe jaane dijiye...

shaan : dekho khanak main tumhara pati hoon...so pehle pati ki pooja aur phir kaam dooja...

khanak : ye kaisi pooja hai shantanu...plzz ...mujhe jaane dijiye...

(khanak apne aap ko shantanu se choodane ki koshish karti hai...)

shaan : khanak tum mujhse door nahi ja paoogi...

khanak : shantanu aap jaante hain na main pregnant hoon...

shaan : arey khanak pregnant ho bimaar thodi ho...yaad hai tumne hi kahaan tha...

khanak : shantanu aap din badin bacche hote ja rahe ho...

(shaan khanak ke pass ane lagtahai...)

khanak : shantanu...

shaan : shhh

(khanak apna chehra shaan ke chehre se ghuma deti hai...shaan apne haath se khanak ke chehre ko phir se apne chehre ki taraf lata hai...shaan khanak ko kiss karne jaata hai...aur khanak ghoom jaati hai...shaan khanak ke baalon (hairs) ko apne haath se haathate huye unhe aage ki taraf rakhta hai...khanak apni aankhein band kar leti hai...shaan khanak ke kareeb jata hai...aur phir khanak ki gardan (neck) ko kiss karta hai...khanak ke chehre par halki si smile aa jati hai...phir shaan khanak ka dupatta (odhani) nikaal deta hai ...aur gardan se hote huye anpni oongliyaan(fingers)khanak ke peet (back) par fairne lagta hai... khanak apne dono haathon se apna dress pakad leti hai...shaan khanak ke peet par kiss karta hai...aur tabhi sunil ki shanak ke room mein entry hoti hai...)

sunil : shaan!..shaan!!!!..shaan...

(shaan aur khanak dono apni aankhein kholte hai...khanak shaan ki taraf ghoom jaati hai...aur dono gadbada jaate hain...)

khanak : shantanu!!!!...ada...

shaan : khanak...

khanak : shantanu!!..ab hum kya karenge...

shaan : ek minute khanak chup raho tum kuch bhi mat bolna main sambhaal lunga...

khanak : par shantanu...

shaan : khanak shhh!!!!

(shaan khanak ko chup karata hai...)

sunil : shaan kya tum andar ho...

shaan : ji dad!!!...kuch kaam tha aapko...main naha raha hoon...

sunil : haan beta...darasal tumhare signatures chahiye the khuch important documents par...zara jaldi karo..mujhe office ke liye late ho raha hai...

(shaan khanak se kehta hai...)

shaan : ek kaam karta hoon bahar jaake sign kardeta hoon...tum yahi rehna aur awaaz bilkul bhi mat karna...thik hai...

khanak : thik hai...

(tabhi sunil apne aap se...)

sunil : arey ye mere haath mein kya lag gaya hai...ab haath dhona padega...yahi dho leta hoon waise bhi shaan bahar aane hi wala hai...

(ye sunte hi shaan aur khanak dono ghabra jaate hain...khanak roni surat banati hai...)

khanak : shantanu...ab kya hoga...sab aap ki wajah se...

shaan : arey khanak tum tension mat lo...main kuch karta hoon...aur dheere bolo...

khanak : shantanu kuch kariye...

shaan : dad main abhi abhi aaya hoon nahane ke liye...mujhe time lagega..aap ek kaam kijiye aap mujhe documents andar dijiye,main yahi sign kar deta hoon...

sunil : thik hai beta...lagta hai mujhe haath dhone ke liye apne room mein hi jaana padega...ye lo papers...

(shaan thoda sa door open karke papers leta hai aur sign karke deta hai...sunil papers leke room se bahar jaane lagta hai...)

khanak : shantanu dekhiye na ada gaye kya???

(shaan thoda sa door open karta hai...)

shaan : oohhh!!! dad gaye...

(shaan aur khanak dono rahat ki saans lete hai...phir khanak shaan ek dusre ki taraf dekte hai aur hasne lagte hai...)

shaan : khanak tum kitna darr gayi thi...

khanak : accha ji main darr gayi thi ...aur aap!!! aap ka chehra toh dekhne layalk ho gaya tha...

(shaan khanak ko pakadta hai...)

shaan : ye dad bhi na jab dekho wrong time pe aa jaate hai..kitna aacha romantic mood tha sab kharaab kar diya...

khanak : abb chodiye mujhe aur bahar chaliye..ya yahi andar rehne ka iraada hai aaj...

(shaan khanak ki taraf hi dekh raha hai...aur madhvi ki entry hoti hai room mein...)

madhvi : khanak!!!!!..khanak...

(khanak ke muh se galti se nikal jata hai...)

khanak : ji mummy ji!!!!

(shaan khanak ek dusre ke paas dekhne lagte hai...)

shaan : khanak tumne jawaab kyun diya mom ko...

khanak : shantanu...woh galti si nikal gaya...ab kya hoga...

madhvi : arey khanak tumhe kahaan tha na maine aane ke liye,tum aayi nahi!!!! so maine socha kyun na main hi chali jaoo...

(shaan apne sir pe haath lagata hai...)

shaan : yaar iss ghar mein sirf ek hi room hai jahaan har koi ghumne aa jaata hai...

khanak : shantanu maine kahaan tha aapse bahar chaliye lekin aap sunte kahaan hai..

shaan : aur tum tumhe kisne kahaan tha bolne ke liye "ji mummy ji"...

khanak : shantanu pehle ye sochiye ki ab kya karein...

shaan : ok ...mom se poocho ki kya kaam hai...

khanak : mummy ji...aapko mujhse kuch kaam tha..

madhvi : haan khanak...main soch rahi thi ki hum shopping chalte hain..kyunki ab tumhe bhi aisey dress pehenne chahiye jo bohat jyada comfortable ho,aur jismey tumhe koi taqleef na ho..aur waise bhi ab tumhe tumhare dress toh tight hote honge!!!!!

(shaan khanak ke pass dekhne lagta hai...)

khanak : shantanu aap kya dekh rahein hai aise...

shaan : arey khanak dekh raha hoon ki tumhare dress tumhe kitne tight ho rahein hai...

khanak : shantanu!!! aap bhi na..pehle ye sochiye ki humein kya karna hai...

madhvi : khanak kya soch rahi ho..jaldi se aa jao...phir hum shopping jaayenge...

(shaan kuch sochta hai aur khanak se kehta hai...)

shaan : jaisa jaisa main bolta hoon tum mom se waisa hi kehna thik hai

khanak : thik hai...

shaan : mom se kaho ki main tumhe shopping le jaane waala hoon shaam ko...

khanak : mumyji..darasal shantanu aaj mujhe shopping le jaane waale hain...

madhvi : shaan tumhe shopping le jaane waala hai...arey ye toh bohat acchi baat hai...chalo accha hi hai.. waise khanak mujhe bohat khushi ho rahi hai ki shaan apni responsibility kitne acche se nibha raha hai...

(shaan ye sunte hi khanak ke pass proudly dekhne lagta hai...aur khanak shaan ko chidhane lagti hai...)

shaan : dekha!!!...

khanak : rehne dijiye shaantanu...

madhvi : waise khanak tum itni der se andar kya kar rahi ho...

khanak : shantanu...

shaan : khanak mom se kaho naha rahi ho...

khanak : naha rahi hoon mummy ji...

madhvi : kya????..naha rahi ho...

khanak : ji...

madhvi : khanak abhi niche to tum naha ke hi aayi thi na...aur abb phir se nahane ke liye...

shaan : mom se kaho ki mera mann kar raha tha phir se nahane ka...

(khanak bina soche yahi bolti hai...)

khanak : woh mummyji mera phir se mann kar raha tha nahane ka...

madhvi : nahane ka mann karta hai baar baar...beta tum thik to ho na...pregnancy mein aise bhi mann karta hai ye to pehli baar suna hai...

(khanak apni aankhein band kar leti hai,aur sir par apna haath maar leti hai aur phir khanak shaan ki taraf gusse se dekhti hai...)

khanak : shantanu..aap ne mujhse ye kya bulva diya...

shaan : arey khanak maine thodi koi jaan bujh kar bolne bola tha...mere dimmag mein jo aaya woh hi bola tumhe bolne ke liye...

khanak : ab mummyiji pata nahi kya sochengi...

(madhvi apne aap se baat karne lagti hai...ussi beech sunil wahaan se gujarte huye madhvi ko apne aap se baat karte huye dekhta hai...)

sunil : arey madhvi tum thik toh ho naah.. apne aap se kya baat kar rahi ho????

(sunil hasne lagta hai...sunil ko aaya hua dekh shaan aur khanak tension mein aa jaate hain...)

shaan : oh no dad fir se!!!!!...

khanak : shantanu.. abb kya hoga????

shaan : pata nahi khanak...

khanak : mujhe darr lag raha hai shantanu...sab aapki wajah se...

madhvi : sunil..aapko pata hai..khanak ka mann baar baar nahane ka kar raha hai...

sunil : arey madhvi agar khanak ko nahane ka mann kar raha hai toh issmey problem kya hai...

madhvi : arey yahi toh problem hai..

sunil : kya matlab?????

madhvi : aapko yaad hai jab main pregnant thi toh mera mann bohat kuch khane ka karta tha..usually pregnant ladies ko sone ka mann kiya karta hai...but khanak ka mann toh nahane ka karta hai...

sunil : haan madhvi..mujhe acche se yaad hai tum kaise mujhe ghumaya karti thi...baccho ki tarah zidh kiya karti thi ye khana hai woh khana hai...

madhvi : sunil...

(ye sunte hi shaan aur khanak hasne lagte hain...khanak shaan ki taraf dekhti hai...)

khanak : yahaan farak sirf itna hai ki meri jagah aap baccho ki tarah zidh karte hain...

shaan : accha...akela main zidh karta hoon...

khanak : shhh.. shantanu dheere...

sunil : madhvi magar woh din bhi kya din the na...

(madhvi smile karne lagti hai...)

sunil : tumhe yaad hai madhvi..jab shaan hone waala tha tum kitni zidh kiya karti thi..isiliye shaan itna ziddhi hai...

(ye sunte hi khanak apne muh par haath rakh kar shaan ki taraf dekh kar hasne lagti hai...)

shaan : bohat hassi aa rahi hai tumhe ..ruko ek baar bahar nikalne do...

khanak : shantanu...ada bilkul thik keh rahein hain...aap bohat ziddhi ho...

shaan : accha ...woh main tumhe baad mein batata hoon...

(sunil ki baat sunte hi madhvi...)

madhvi : sunil!!! behave urself...kuch bhi mat boliye...khanak sunegi toh kya sochegi...

sunil : khanak...ab khanak yahaan kahaan hai...

madhvi : sunil itni der se main aapse kya keh rahi hoon...aur khanak andar naha rahi hai..

(shaan aur khanak andar pareshaan...)

khanak : shantanu ab kya hoga????

shaan : pata nahi khanak...

sunil : khanak naha rahi hai..nahi nahi madhvi tumhe koi galatfehmi huyi hai...andar khanak nahi hai...

madhvi : accha agar andar khanak nahi hai ,toh phir kaun hai...aur maine kisse baat ki...

sunil : nahi madhvi...khanak andar ho hi nahi sakti..

madhvi : accha kyun nahi ho sakti..

sunil : kyunki andar shaan hai...

madhvi : shaan?????

(ye sunte hi shaan khanak apni apni aankhein band kar lete hain...)

sunil : haan!!! shaan...kyunki main abhi 2 minute pehle shaan se sign leke gaya hoon..

madhvi : aacha..aur main pichle 2 minute se khanak se baat kar rahi hoon...yakin nahi aa raha hai na..wait abhi batati hoon andar kaun hai..

sunil : haan zara main bhi toh dekhun...kaun hai...

madhvi : khanak zara apne ada ko batao ki tum andar ho...khanak...kanak..

(sunil hass raha hai...shaan aur khanak ek dusre ke pass dekh rahe hain...)

sunil : dekha maine kahaan tha na andar khanak nahi hai...agar hoti toh awaaz deti ..ruko abb dekho main shaan ko awaaz deta hoon..shaan ..shaan...

madhvi : kyun kya hua sunil..di awaaz shaan ne...

sunil : arey to andar hai kaun...

madhvi : khanak!!!!

sunil : nahi shaan !!!!

madhvi : maine kahaan khanak...khanak...

(dono ka zhagda sunte hi shaan bolta hai ...)

shaan : mom dad !!!! hum dono andar hai...

(ye sunte hi sunil madhvi dono chup ho jaate hain aur ek dusre ke pass dekhne lagte hai...phir ek dusre ko smile dete hain...)

madhvi : sunil maine inn dono ko barabar naam diya hai RLB's..(romantic love birds )

(sunil haste huye...)

sunil : madhvi kabhi kabhi sochta hoon ki hamara shaan itna romantic kaise...

madhvi : aap par jo gaya hai...chaliye office jaane ke liye ab late nahi ho raha hai aapko..

sunil : haan...shaan hum ja rahe hain aur darwaaza bhi band kar rahe hain..ab bahar aa sakte ho dono..

madhvi : sunil...ab bas bhi karo...

(madhvi sunil haste huye door band karte...aur shaan khanak bahar aa jaate hain...)

khanak : shantanu sab aapki wajah se...aapko pata hai ab mujhe kitni sharam aayegi ada aur mummyji ke samne jaane se...ab toh main unke samne bhi nahi jaa sakti...

shaan : arey khanak aisi koi baat nahi hai...waise dekho hum iss baat se darr rahe the ki mom dad ko pata chala toh...but jab unhe pata chal hi gaya hai toh ab kis baat ki sharam...

khanak : shantanu aap to besharam ho ...main nahi..

shaan : accha toh main besharam...thik hai abb main tumhe apni besharmi dikhata hoon...

(shaan khanak ke kareeb aata hai...aur khanak ko dekhta rehta hai...khanak sharma jaati hai...)

khanak : shantanu...aap aise mat dekhiye...

shaan : arey ab maine to kuch kiya bhi nahi...sirf tummhe dekh raha hoon...ab iss baat par bhi problem...

(khanak smile karti hai...)

khanak : aap aise dekhte ho toh main aapse nazrein nahi mila paati...

(shaan smile karta hai..)

shaan : accha...woh kyun???

khanak : shantanu...

(khanak shantanu ko hug karti hai...aur shaan khanak ko apni baahon mein bhar leta hai...)

scene khatam...😉

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wid lots of luv❤️ n hugs🤗...
REEna...😊

Edited by SHANAKFAN - 14 years ago

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Awesome👏

gurl it was shanaklicious😍

romance hi romance😉

the coffee part and the kiss was very cute😉

wow... baby ko pyar dena ka bauhat cute way hai😛

shaan burthal nai sach main bara hoshyaar hai

waise rite he hari bha har jaga aajata hai

cuming to the bedroom part or i shd say the rest room part😆

it was fun to read cute and at the same time hilarious😆😍
😍
but i must say the situation was handled pretty well till sunavi both were there

but pyar kiya to darna kya at last bata hi diya

but it was fab the conv the romance... loved it

i must say these are the golden moments.

continue soon.

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SHANAKFAN

@SHANAKFAN

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: IF_rida
Awesome👏

gurl it was shanaklicious😍

romance hi romance😉

the coffee part and the kiss was very cute😉

wow... baby ko pyar dena ka bauhat cute way hai😛

shaan burthal nai sach main bara hoshyaar hai

waise rite he hari bha har jaga aajata hai

cuming to the bedroom part or i shd say the rest room part😆

it was fun to read cute and at the same time hilarious😆😍
😍
but i must say the situation was handled pretty well till sunavi both were there

but pyar kiya to darna kya at last bata hi diya

but it was fab the conv the romance... loved it

i must say these are the golden moments.

continue soon.