skipped golden shanak scenes...3rd pt updt on pg 8

Hey friends as we all know that due to this channel revamp...our RBO ended...
so right now i m thinking about some shanak scenes specially during pregnancy period...don't know whether u all like it or not but just trying something different from my side...as this is my first time so just bear wid it...

We missed some shanak scenes due to shortage of time ...everything is just fast forwarded...
we miss scenes like...

1) Jab shaan ko pata chalta hai ki woh papa banne wala hai...so shanak ka conversation n unka reaction..

2) Kaise shaan khanak ka khayaal rakhta hai during d pregnancy period specially khanak ki tablets,khanak ka khaana,khanak ko regular check up ke liye le jana,khanak ko walk ke liye le jana n den godi mein uthakar weight ko lekar khanak ko chidana...

3) Pregnancy ki situation mein bhi shanak ka romance...

4) Kaise shaan n khanak ka apne do cute angels se baat karna jab woh apne mom ke andar the...specially shaan n khanak ka reaction jab dono ka apne mom ko kick maarna...

5) Kaise labour pains ke time khanak ka baiee..ke jagah shantanu..shantanu...chillana n shaan ki haalat kharaab kar dena tension se...

6) N finally shanak ke haathon mein apne do cute angels ka aana n unhe dekhkar shaan n khanak ki aankhon mein aansoo aa jana n den shanak ka apne do cute angels ko chumna...

hey friends we really missed these scenes don't u think so????? everthing skipped...but anyways now im updating d first scene n hoping u all like it...so here comes d 1st scene...


(Khanak behosh ho jaati hai shaan ki baahon mein...)

SHAAN : khanak...khanak...kya hua tumhe...khanak..

SUNIL : shaan khanak ko apne room mein le jao...aur akshay tum dr.ko call karo jaldi..

AKSHAY : ji dad..

(sab pareshaan hain...dr.aati hai n check up shuru karti hai...room mein madhvi ,sunil,akshay n shaan sab tension mein...)

Dr. : sab thik hai ,tension ki koi baat nahi...

SHAAN : Dr. khanak ko kya hua... usey aachanak se chakkar kyun aaya...sab kuch thik to hai na...

Dr. : arey shantanu kitne sawaal,have patience sab kuch thik hai aur haan ab aap ko khanak ka jyaada khayaal rakhna padega...

SHAAN : khanak ko kya hua hai Dr...

Dr. : (Smile karte huye) filhaal to kuch nahi hua but agle kuch mahino mein ho jaayega...shantanu aap papa banne waale ho...

SHAAN : kyaaa????? mein papaa bannne waala hun...( he started jumping) Ohhh my god mein papa banne waala hun...

(sab bohat khush hai...they started hugging each other...N khanak ab bhi behosh hai...)

SHAAN : mom aapne suna mein papa banne wala hun...

MADHVI : haan beta ..aur mein dadi...

(shaan apne mom dad ke galey lagta hai...n den akshay shaan ko galey lagakar usey congratulate karta hai...)

AKSHAY : chote tune to mujhse pehle hi no. laga diya...

Dr. : khanak ko jaldi hi hosh aa jaayega...but ab aap sab ko uska bohat khayaal rakhna padega...

MADHVI : don't worry dr. hum khanak ka pura khayaal rakhenge...

( dr. chali jaati hai n akshay n shaan mehmaano ko see off kehne chale jaatey hai...)

KHANAK : ( hosh mein aati hai)...mummy ji..ada...

MADHAVI : khanak latey raho beta...

KHANAK : mujhe kya hua tha...

SUNIL : beta tumne toh hume darra hi diya tha...par abb sab thik hai...

MADHVI : thank u so much khanak...

KHANAK : Thank u kiss baat ke liye ...ulta mujhe aap se sorry kehna chahiye meri wajah se saari party kharaab ho gayi...aap sab kitne pareshaan ho gaye honge na...

SUNIL : beta ye kaisi baat kar rahi ho... hamare liye tumse jyada important kuch bhi nahi hai...

MADHVI :aur tum nahi jaanti khanak tumne hume woh khusi di hai jiske sapne hum ab tak dekh rahe the...hum dada-dadi banne waale hain..aur tum mom...

( ye sunte hi khanak sharma jaati hai...aur uski nazarein shantanu ko dhoondne lagti hain...)

KHANAK : ada.. mummyji...shantanu kahaan hain..

SUNIL : beta woh sab mehmaan jaa rahe the toh unhe see off kehne gaya hai...tumhe pata hai woh toh ye khabar sunte hi ucchalne kudne lag gaya,mano uski khushi ka toh koi thikhana hi nahi hai...

MADHVI : mein jaanti hoon shaan ko iss waqt aisa lag raha hoga ki woh kab yahaan tumhare pass aayega...

(shaan bhagtey huye aata hai n apne room mein enter karta hai)

SUNIL : madhvi mujhe lagta hai abb hume chalna chahiye...

MADHVI : haan sunil...khanak ...beta apna khayaal rakhna...

SHAAN : don't worry mom mein hoon na khanak ka khayaal rakhne ke liye...

MADHVI : shaan mere D.I.L ko bilkul bhi pareshaan mat karna samjhe...

SHAAN : ya mom...bye mom...bye dad...

(jaise hi sunil madhvi bahar jaate hain shaan door band kar deta hai...n khanak bed se utth jaati hai..shaan khanak ke pass aata hai,khanak sharma jaati hai...aur shaan khanak ko hug karta hai...)

KHANAK : shantanu main kab se aapka intezaar kar rahi thi,kitni der laga di aapne...

SHAAN : sorry khanak...par tum nahi jaanti main khud tumse milne ke liye kitna betaab tha..aisa lag raha tha ki daud ke tumhare pass aaoon aur tumhe apni baahoon main bharr lu...

(shanak ka hug khatam hota hai...)

SHAAN : (shaan khaank ko apni baahoon mein utta leta hai)khanak aaj main bohat khush hoon...mein papa banne wala hoon...khanak...ohh khanak...

KHANAK : shantanu...shantanu...plz...mujhe niche uttariye na...

SHAAN : nahi ek baar tumhare tarah plzz bolo...aur waise bhi ye tumhari sazaa hai ...yaad hai maine tumse kahaan tha baad mein inn sabka badla lunga...tumne chori chupe mere liye surprise birthday party jo rakhi thi...

KHANAK :accha baba...plijjj mujhe niche uttariye na...

SHAAN : Thik hai par ek kiss dena padega...

KHANAK : shantanu aap bhi na...thik hai...par pehle mujhe niche uttariye...

(shaan khanak ko bed par rakhta hai fir apni oongliyon se khaank ki zulfe jo hamesha ki tarah uske chehre pe aati hai unhe piche karta hai, khanak sharma jaati hai aur apne haath se shaan ki aankhein band karti hai aur shaan ko gaal par kiss karti hai...)

SHAAN : pata hai khanak tumne aaj meri jaan nikaal di thi...mein bata nahi sakta mujh par kya biti jab tum behosh ho gayi thi...aur fir ye papa banne ki khabar ...tumhe kiss tarah thank u kahoon...tumne aaj mujhe mere janamdin par sabse pyaara tohfa diya hai...thank u khaank...thank u so much...

(shaan khanak ko mathe par kiss karta hai aur khanak ki aankein bharr jaati hain...)

SHAAN : khanak...abb inn aansuoo..ka kya kaam hai ...

KHANAK : shantanu ye to khushi ke aansu hain..

(shaan khanak ke aansu pounchata hai)

KHANAK : shantanu aapne mummiji aur ada ko dekha woh kitne khush hain na...

SHAAN : haan khanak...mom n dad ko toh iss waqt aisa lag raha hoga ki baby kab aayega aur woh kab uske saath khelenge...

KHANAK : aur aap kitne khush hain ..hhhmmm..

SHAAN : main kitna khush hoon...main ...hhmmm...ek tarika hai batane ka...bataooo..

( shaan khanak ke karib aane lagta hai)

KHANAK : nahi...shantanu...mujhe pata chal gaya ki aap kitne khush hain...

SHAAN : arey nahi main batata hoon na tumhe...

KHANAK : shantanu... aap bhi na...bass romance karne ka bahana chahiye..aap ab papa banne wale hain...

SHAAN : arey to aisa kisne kahaan hai ki jo papa banne waale hote hai woh hone waali mummy se romance nahi kar sakte...waah matlab tum mujhe abhi se apne se alag kar rahi ho,fir toh baby aane ke baad tum mujhe bhul hi jaooogi...

KHANAK : nahi shantanu aap acche se jaantey hain ki khanak par sabse pehla haq shanatanu ka hai...aur hamesha shantanu ka hi rahega...

(khanak ki aankhein bharr jaati hain)

SHAAN : arey khanak main to mazaaq kar raha tha ...tum bhi na...fir se ye aansooo...

KHANAK : par mein mazaaq nahi kar rahi thi shantanu...

SHAAN : jaanta hoon khanak...tum sabse zyaada pyaar mujhse hi karti ho...but main tumse waada karta hoon ki mein hamare baby ko bohat pyaar dunga...aur baby ki mummy ko bhi...

KHANAK : shantanu sab kuch kitna accha lag raha hai na...kuch mahino baad hamare haanthon mein ek nanhi si jaan hogi...jo hume mummy aur papa bana degi...

SHAAN : haan...khanak...hamare pyaar ki nishani...actually "SHANAK ke pyaar ki nishani"...

( aur fir dono ek dusre ko hug karte hain...tight waala hug...)

scene khatam...😉

hoping u all like it...n if not den also plijjj like it...afterall mera first attempt hain...

will soon update d next shanak scene...

luv u all 🤗...n badly missing RBO n SHANAK...😭

I din see tM's name n started ommentin...
Nw I knw its you...
Muuuaahhh to you for this mind blowing piece...

Awww...
I wish we got see all these scenes...😃

Khair...
Awesome work...
This is how the K family n Shanak would hv behaved...
Anyways we ll get to see em in rbO-3 for sure...😊

Badmash shaan n cute khanak...
n their cute angels...😃

Awww... sooo cute...
I was jumpin n smilin n laghing while reading this,,,,,
Plz continue with baaki skipped scenes... in this thread only...
We all will decide together their baby names...

Awesome job...
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

awww it was beautiful

loved loveddd it dear gosh i wish this happened dear this made me all emotional now .wish we could have see such awesome shanak scene u wrote amazingly dear loved the conversationa alot .waiting for the next one keep writing so that we can imagine things which we havent seens miss them badly😭

... Wish we could see these scenes... Missing them so so so so much... ...

hai shanakfan,
dont know know ur name..
ur first attempt is simply adorable..
i so loved it..
first u listed the scenes that we missed..
as we would have loved to see those..
so missing RBO/shanak/yasharan..
the scene u detailed was superb..
i picturised evrything in my mind..
wonderful..
🤗🤗🤗for giving this..
will wait for the next episode..😃

I hv edited my comment Reenu...
Read it again...😃

Hey Shanakfan (sorry I don't know ur name)

You & your attempt both are simply adorable…..*hugs* 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

I just loved your writing,,,,,,Please continue this…..ur language & writing style…..Wow I mean imagined the whole sence frame to frame. 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

I so wanted to know the next sences which u described……I wish Rbo band nahi hota…..😔 we have missed so much yaar all because of Star network & Star One. ...anyways we can live the further story with ur touch & magic. 😊 I was actually smiling throughout reading the whole part. U are too good 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Please Please continue this…..dont stop….u & ur story are awesome⭐️ 👍🏼

Waiting for the next part 😳

Love

Pranjal.

Hey u r priya right??

hey im Reena...not priya...😉...n thanks to all who appreciate my work...🤗 u all really boost me up so now thinking i can also write...😃😎...luv u all ...muaahhh...n will definitely update d next scene sooner...