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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
hei reena,
the way u bring out the scenes we could really imagine it frame by frame..
kitchen wala ya bedroom wala ya bathroom wala..
they r awesome..
i play it with karan n yashu..
they live in the scenes u have penned..
wonderful reena..
keep going..
we look forward to ur scenes..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
SUPERB Part๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘v๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Full of shanak romanceโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

haaye kaash... yeh sab RBO mein b dekhne ko milta... baby ko kiss dene wala scene was tooo good yaar!!!!

and dis HAri ba always kabab me haddi... wrong timing

I m still laughing yaar... its really very very hilarious๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Truly dedicated to RBO golden moments.

Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Hi Reena, loved it! thanks for the update...๐Ÿ‘ xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
@manita ,khushi,aussiegal n Ramani...thanks a lot dear 4 appreciating my work...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
hey loved it reena no one can beat u...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
very cute & romantic update
shaan is sooo naughty bt i lyk that, even khanak ko bhi to achha lagta hai yeh wala shaan...hehe & luvd the coffee scene

khanak : shantanu aap ye kaisi harkate kar rahein hain...ab aap papa banne waale hain...

(shaan khanak ko kas kar pakadta hai...)

shaan : madam agar aisi harkate nahi karta toh aaj papa kaise banta...

khanak : shantanu aap bohat besharam ho gaye hain...

shaan :
tumhare pyaar mein khanak... โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ

dnt worry about the long scenes cz shanak k saath to 1hour ka scene bhi bohot short lagta hai...even i luv this looong scenes๐Ÿ‘
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Hey Reena

Fantastic Writing โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆBeautiful.๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Awesome Once again. I waited for it yaar.๐Ÿ˜ณ But Seems u have forgottan to update this. Waise nahi chalega aisa.๐Ÿ˜ณ I am gussa on you.๐Ÿ˜ก Yaar your sences are like Watching Shanak together again.๐Ÿ˜ Coz ur dialogue writing is Exactly matches With the Style of Dialogue Delivery Of Yasharan.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Isiliye I also end up Drolling over them,๐Ÿ˜ & I keep reading the update again & again to get the feel that I am watching my Favrate RBO again.๐Ÿ˜

Waise u don't need totell ur readres to imagine KT &YM as Shanak while reading the update.๐Ÿ˜Š Coz u don't know but ur Writing has that Magic & it holds the Reader that update Padhate waqt Shanak pura Sence perform karte hue nazar aate hain that too frame by frame.๐Ÿ˜ The each & every sence u described was awesome.๐Ÿ‘ Phir chahe who Kitchen ho Bedroom Sence ho ya Bathroom Sence ho.๐Ÿ˜Š u have created magic with your writing,โญ๏ธ Specially u showed us the two completely different sinarios having Same love care & affection.๐Ÿ˜ณ Loved Kitchen talk later Distrubed With Hari Bha's entry & Bathroom Fiyasco was hilarious. โ€ฆLoved it.๐Ÿ‘

Waise don't try to cutshort your updates.๐Ÿ˜ก Waise bhi ye padhane ke baad bhi mujhe aisa hi lagta hain ki kaash thoda aur lamba hota.๐Ÿ˜’ So don't you dare giving us Chota update. Love ur Writing ,,,,Bless u dear.๐Ÿ˜Š

Waise madam ye monthly Installments Nahi challenge. I want regular updates.๐Ÿ˜‰ *u can imagine my Stomping my foot in frount of you for regular updates* ๐Ÿ˜ณSo I hope agla sence jaldi milega.๐Ÿ˜Š Waise Sorry forgot to Ask you how are you Felling now.๐Ÿ˜Š Hope that was not the reason for delay. I am sure you are perfectly allright now,๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ but Please take care & Aise hi Khubsurat Shanak Updates dete rahiye. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Waiting for the next partโ€ฆโ€ฆ..Jaldi dena.๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Love

Pranjal.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

hey loved it reena no one can beat u...๐Ÿ˜Š



hey dear snigdha thanks so much 4 ur comment...just trying my level best to fulfill ur expectations which ur having in me...n
@ purvi thanks so much dear...

luv u all...๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: shonai

very cute & romantic update

shaan is sooo naughty bt i lyk that, even khanak ko bhi to achha lagta hai yeh wala shaan...hehe & luvd the coffee scene

khanak : shantanu aap ye kaisi harkate kar rahein hain...ab aap papa banne waale hain...

(shaan khanak ko kas kar pakadta hai...)

shaan : madam agar aisi harkate nahi karta toh aaj papa kaise banta...

khanak : shantanu aap bohat besharam ho gaye hain...

shaan :
tumhare pyaar mein khanak... โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ

dnt worry about the long scenes cz shanak k saath to 1hour ka scene bhi bohot short lagta hai...even i luv this looong scenes๐Ÿ‘
update soon


thanks so much dear 4 appreciating my work...n ya even i like these lines chosen by u...thodi besharmi wale dialogues to hone chahiye otherwise feel kahaan se aayega...๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hey Reena

Fantastic Writing '''Beautiful.๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Awesome Once again. I waited for it yaar.๐Ÿ˜ณ But Seems u have forgottan to update this. Waise nahi chalega aisa.๐Ÿ˜ณ I am gussa on you.๐Ÿ˜ก Yaar your sences are like Watching Shanak together again.๐Ÿ˜ Coz ur dialogue writing is Exactly matches With the Style of Dialogue Delivery Of Yasharan.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Isiliye I also end up Drolling over them,๐Ÿ˜ & I keep reading the update again & again to get the feel that I am watching my Favrate RBO again.๐Ÿ˜

Waise u don't need totell ur readres to imagine KT &YM as Shanak while reading the update.๐Ÿ˜Š Coz u don't know but ur Writing has that Magic & it holds the Reader that update Padhate waqt Shanak pura Sence perform karte hue nazar aate hain that too frame by frame.๐Ÿ˜ The each & every sence u described was awesome.๐Ÿ‘ Phir chahe who Kitchen ho Bedroom Sence ho ya Bathroom Sence ho.๐Ÿ˜Š u have created magic with your writing,โญ๏ธ Specially u showed us the two completely different sinarios having Same love care & affection.๐Ÿ˜ณ Loved Kitchen talk later Distrubed With Hari Bha's entry & Bathroom Fiyasco was hilarious. 'Loved it.๐Ÿ‘

Waise don't try to cutshort your updates.๐Ÿ˜ก Waise bhi ye padhane ke baad bhi mujhe aisa hi lagta hain ki kaash thoda aur lamba hota.๐Ÿ˜’ So don't you dare giving us Chota update. Love ur Writing ,,,,Bless u dear.๐Ÿ˜Š

Waise madam ye monthly Installments Nahi challenge. I want regular updates.๐Ÿ˜‰ *u can imagine my Stomping my foot in frount of you for regular updates* ๐Ÿ˜ณSo I hope agla sence jaldi milega.๐Ÿ˜Š Waise Sorry forgot to Ask you how are you Felling now.๐Ÿ˜Š Hope that was not the reason for delay. I am sure you are perfectly allright now,๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ but Please take care & Aise hi Khubsurat Shanak Updates dete rahiye. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Waiting for the next part''..Jaldi dena.๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Love

Pranjal.



hey firstly a big hug๐Ÿค— to u pranjal...n thaks so much 4 d appreciation๐Ÿ˜Š...BTW ur long long feedback's really justifying by long long scenes...๐Ÿ˜†...but really ur feedback really boost me up 4 writing d next scene...
"I waited for it yaar.๐Ÿ˜ณ But Seems u have forgottan to update this. Waise nahi chalega aisa.๐Ÿ˜ณ I am gussa on you.๐Ÿ˜ก"

hey i already apologies 4 d delay yaar...so don't b angry wid me.๐Ÿ˜ญ..

"Waise u don't need totell ur readres to imagine KT &YM as Shanak while reading the update.๐Ÿ˜Š
"


oops...sorry...now onwards not at all going to mention it...b'coz i know it in ur mind shanak is already there...๐Ÿ˜†

"Waise don't try to cutshort your updates.๐Ÿ˜ก
"


ok...ur wish granted...will not try to take short cuts otherwise i know will get this

n yes now im fine dear...thanks 4 ur concern...


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