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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#421

updating soon kah kar kahan chali gayi??

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623341

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Posted: 14 years ago

#422

w8 she is coming!

Edited by ..Aisha.. - 14 years ago

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deepalisawant99

@deepalisawant99

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Posted: 14 years ago

#423

Awesum update tia..
Finally shaan proposed khanak for marriage.. Wow amazing description...
Can't wait for shanak to get married..
Update next part..
Am waiting..

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minnu345

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Posted: 14 years ago

#424

hey tia finally u updated😊

but the wait is worth it😉

it was simply beautiful👏

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IF_rida

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Posted: 14 years ago

#425

Awesome tia👏👏

Glad that the vacations turned out to be the best one and gud that the hotel project was almost completed and about to start.

So the family is cuming... even better ti decide for wedding. Finally she's not upset at megha.

That's true wid a over flowing closet gurls dont find anything to wear for a occasion... i was confused tha y didn't she wore the emerald green sari.😕.. well gud dat she didn't wore at the haldi.😊

The tried and tested lines part was fab... i laughed out loud reading those lines.😆😆

The chasing part was superb... fun to read and imagine... u've penned amazingly.👍🏼
Her giggles the most natural thing ad the most obvious reason to be caught. Luved it he gave the count to 20 and wen he said run faster khanak.😃

Imagining them at the banister i was enjoying even more. We knew he can and wanted him to catch her. 🥳 Wht he got was the most expected thing and i luved it. As always it has to be passionate.☺️

Luved the part "I love you so much babe" he said softly. "I love you too" she said lifting her eyes and looking at him." "More then anything in the world." "You're my one and only." 😍

Rashi alwayz land up at the wrong moment chalo thankfully she closed the door.

Penned beautifully abt the haldi part.

Shoo shweet... "i missed u" "i was gone only for 5 minutes"... haye😍

Imaging her in a emerald green saree ... wohoo... she must 've luked breath taking beautiful.
Obvious they both will luv wht they saw.😉

Fab... the way u've described the arrangements at beach even more luvly it was the place where he took her on the first date. 👏

The song is beautiful ... 👍🏼

Yipee... he finally proposed her 🥳

Beautiful line ... wht ever he said while proposing her touched my heart. U've amazing writing skills i've read the line 5 times still want to read it.😍

Superb he swung her around and they again said i love you.😍

Continue very soon... waiting eagerly.

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shaan_khanak

@shaan_khanak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#426

Wow what an great part. Please update the next part soon

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iluvmanar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#427

thanks tia..4 this superb update..just luvved it...

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shalini_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#428

amazing tia... the way Shaan proposed.. awesome...

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#429

hei tia,
that was an awesome updte..
really shaan is too good..seeing her closet which has dresses for 10 n her worry of not having a dress to wear..
him keeping his mouth shut without any comment..wonderful..
him saying she looks sexy even with nun's dresses being fully covered..he is something..
radha,ricky wedding..awesome..here again u made the mistake in name..here her cousin is lavanya.seeing radha's vidaai khanak feeling emotional n shaan assuring her..so cute..
their date afterr wedding..splendid..so romantic..he asked her to dress in the green saree in which she looks sexy..n she wore that just for him..aay..haaye..
the set up in the beach n shaan's song..moment of bliss..
finally shaan going down on his knees n asking whether she'll marry him..haay..haae...i died..superb tia..
i forgot to mention abt their challenge n their deep passionate kiss..rashi entered at the wrong time..teasing them for their lovey-dovey dialogues..LOL!!!
continue soon..