FF- Compltly Ur's FF COMPLETD on pg 83! MODNOTE PAGE 85 - Page 45

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey
beautiful update.. They r getting engaged..wow.. Story moving on very beautifully.. Luved da concept frm HAHK nd khanak won it..awesum.. Your story is simple yet beautiful..
Hey i hav sent u a pm regarding ur fb questn.. Do read nd rply back..
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Posted: 14 years ago
just luvved it tia..pla update ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it. I have a Facebook id: soniya Nimavat. Update next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!!! what a beautiful update
"Shaan," Khanak said softly. "You know what I love most about when you touch me?" Shaan's eyes grew wide. "I love when you trail kisses along my neck and bite my earlobe." Shaan gulped, transfixed by Khanak's breathless sexy voice. "And I love when I take my hands and..." tia, dear, let her finish her sentence...(uff!!! kitni besharam hoon main yar!😳...lolzzz)

updete soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Everytime, I read so much of nice-nice stuff...my heart starts beating hard thinking that some twist is round the corner...

All through the update I kept worrying for her parents / his parents / something to happen !!...lol...

well written
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Posted: 14 years ago
hayeee that was such a lovely update .read both the updates today and it was worth the wait goshhh the way he proposed marraige to her was the best part sighsss was so blisss shaan siging song and going on his knees and proposing marriage to her sighsss deaddd deaddd it was shanaklious and the way khanak reacted having tears of joy and her accepting the proposal shanak dancing in blisss was a lovely moment was so imagining every thing like that sighsss beautiful loved the hide and seek game and the way it ended it was hott

coming to this update lajawaab goshhh brilliant dear .the realtives dropping in and the way khanak making every one know abt the ring was funny and all going mad abt the proposl it was such a lovely moment ,shaan father having tears in his eyes was an emotional moment gosh too gud dear and the hum aap ke hai kaun sequence was lovely was so imagining it the pillow thing was amazing and the way khanak won was even more awesome those words made shaan mad i guess.loved loved every bit of it waiting for the next dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei tia,
lovely update..
so their house is full of guests now..
aria came over there..that must be a pleasant surprise..
khanak doing nautanki to show the engagement ring that shaan put on..
wow!!!shaan is a gentleman..really he talked with her dad n asked her hand for marriage before he proposed her..so lovely..shaan's dad getting emotional seeing this..awesome..
shaan talking through eyes to ask her to come out when he leave for office n kissing her..poor shaan..
the game they played was quite funny..loved it..shaan's dad really wooed his mom with shayari..superb..
khanak playing with him n won the game..that was little cheating..but ok..
she made him sing in front of everyone for her..n he did do..
wat was that she left incomplete?hope u say abt that in the next update..
waiting for it..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Tia,

Loved the last update…….it was fantastic. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Wow Shaan finally proposed to Khanak 😍& he had taken a permission from her dad before proposing her⭐️,,,,he is cute yaar. Their families are here. Loved the innocence in khanak's character potraid by you. Poor girl was tring so hard to Showcase her ring but no body took a mark 😉& love her exictment & joy after priya finally recognize her ring. SHE is So cute yaar.😛

Loved their Isshro Isshro mein……loved their eye contect.😉 Shaan is a real badmash. He knows very well how to prove his point & make his way around. 😳 Waise thank u for Aria's entry. Ab mazaa aayega as she is going to tease Shaan & Khanak a lot. Loved their convo. U made it do real.👏

Loved the pillo game….Full on HAHK style.👏 Khanak is a noughty girl she won by cheating & loved the way u dis cribbed Shaan's expression.😆 & Specially when Shaan mimic Khanak's Mom after loosing the game.🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Loved your Choice of Songs & Shayaris. 👏Wow they are getting engaged after Ishaan came…..Yipeee I am exicted ….Waise are you planning to link up Aria & Ishaan ?? 😉……….just asking as I have that feeling.😳

Chalo waiting for the next part ……….Jaldi dena….Dont make us wait more 🤗 🤗 🤗

Love

Pranjal.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Very well written!!! looking forward to the next update!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey i just love this FF its so beautifully written and the story is amazing...last update was awesome ...update the next part soon...

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