FF- Compltly Ur's FF COMPLETD on pg 83! MODNOTE PAGE 85 - Page 33

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow this was superb a it was a lil bit emotional but it was awesome ... i hope they reunite soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Tia,

Thanks for giving us two long updates …loved them 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

It was awewome……fantastic…..👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Hey love ur writing.⭐️ U are just too good wheather it is emotional or romantic...u described it so well 👏…..u show us the campltete different Side of Shaan & Khanak. Sorry couldn't comment yesterday as was extremely busy.😳

Part 17

Well what to say about this fab update,,,,,,Khanak calls her Bro & he assure her about Aria's condition, Khanak decided to leave in the next flight, she tries to call kabir. But that idiot is not available 😡……Shaan is a sweet heart he is taking care of khanak. Khanak is still under the shock as she is just not able to understand the Reasion behind Aria commiting suicide …..Shaan consoles her & helps her in packing,,,,,,(ur part really moved me) loved their convo on the airport. 👏

After Reaching Vancouver khanak gets real shock as there she cames to know the reason behind Aria in hospital.😲 Ishaan is also there with her. Khanak doesn't call shaan . she even didn't bother to answer his call 😔 . she is just sending her msg in one liners (that's really bad)😡 she is behaving as if she don't belive in love any more. All this while she takes a good care Of Aria,,,,,,& she is Ok now( thank u as I loved this character.)😊 I feel sad after reading that in gape of 15 days she just received his call once.😒

Khanak talk with her Dad & wanted him to give Kabir a tuff time by not singing him again.😉 Aria is ok now & she wants Khanak to go back to Mumbai,,,,& assure her that she will take care (😉hey why I am feeling that u are going to pair up Aria & Ishaan ,,,,,,,,Well I don't mind I find them both adorable😉). Finally she is back to Mumbai. & she doesn't bother to iform Shaan. Bechaara he is really missing her & after Aria incidence she is least bothered about him.😒 Finally Shaan gets to know that she is back & left for the office without meeting him. When he goes to meet her ……he is super happy to see her back but khanak gave hin the Shock of his life 😲(I really hated her for a while😡). Poor shaan khanak is punishing him for the crime which he didn't commited. Shaan gets real upset by her behaviou & leave her cabin.😔

Part 18

Shaan is not showing any intrest in her neither she si regrating what she have done.😭 Shaan is upset coz Khanak is camparing him with that Kabir,.😡 She is feeling that if after 7 years of relation ship Kabit Ditch Aria…..than she & Shaan are together only for 5 mths ( nonsence logic)😡 Khanak is preparing her self to work only for 6 weeks with Shaan & than back to Vancouver. Both are making them selves busy to shun the thoughts away they are having about each other (u have beautifully described it)👏 ⭐️

Loved the part where Shaan & Khanak gets stuck in the elevator,😉Shaans assistant notices some indiffrance in between them,.😳 After Elevator gets stuck ……loved their actions, gestures & their convo …..it was awesome.👏 Both are blaming each other. Loved the part speciall ur lines relating to Stripping was fab 😆 😉…….(i had a best time reading it,,,,,,I was smiling like an idiot in the office while reading this) Khanka falls asleep on shaan shoulder, Shaan takes care of her.😍

Khanak is regrating her behaviour…..atleast she have started thinking about it 😊…..Khanak goes to Shaan cabin to discuss some work. Gets upset seeing Megha there. Also Shaan gave her a royal ignore….She feels like crying. It is unbarable for her to handel Shaans haterad.😭...Loved ur detailing 👏 👏

Well Tia sweetheart I am rubbing my hands in excitement.,…..as I just love ur promos……something intrusting is in store……Hmmm……I am loving it.😉 😉

Waiting for the next part I want more updates today……..Please please please 😳

Love

Pranjal.,

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey,

its too good , the way u explain the feelings and waiting for next part after the promo
Edited by ashwanth - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
2 long updates.. but sad ones... hopefully the promos and the upcoming updates are full of Shanak and their romance..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abhaylover

As she kissed him , he pushed me away , i was shocked seeing the reaction going through the face ... i love you shaan !!!!!!!

Why do I think that it was Megha who kissed him and said "ILU to Shaan"

but i love her only her !!!!!!

And shaan pushed her off saying he loves only Khanak😆

I dark she was sitting tear's were on her face was i meant nthing to u y din u tell me this b4 marriage was ...-

And this line is Aria's part !!

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Posted: 14 years ago
hei tia,
wonderful updates..
PART 17
shaan being her support system till she leave to canada..
but in the worry abt aria she gloriously didnt call him..
after knowing abt aria's reason for trying to kill herself how could she come to a general conclusion n avoid him like that..
he tried to reach her many times but she never cared..she behaved selfish..
she was good with aria..she was there for her during her most needed moment..
even when aria asked her to go to shaan she tried to avoid it n want to stay back..
is that all she had for shaan??not at all fair on the part of khanak..
after returning too she gave a damn to him..she didnt even bothered to let him know that she is back..
shaan came to know abt her arrival from rashi the next morning and he rushed to see her..but she left to office..
when he went all excited to meet her the way she talked to him all cold..wish to give her a tight slap n bring her back to senses..
really khanak avoided him like this..
poor shaan..he was worried abt khanak n the way she did is not at all fair..n she even compared him to kabir..that was a blow below the belt..
he let out his emotion saying that she'll regret her decision n decided to avoid her even if its tough for him..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei tia,
comments for PART 18
both of them hurting themselves in the act of trying to forget the other..
but as shaan said he didnt want this but khanak is Ms.stubborn ahluwalia..
both avoiding the other by indulging in work the whole time to exhaust themselves..
poor both couldnt sleep even..
still jealous of megha..isn't it khanak??
u dont want him to be with means y does it bother who is with him khanak..
thankfully both got stuck in the lift..
but as mani questioned is it just physical for her..the way behaved is like that..
we know shaan is mature in this relationship..but khanak..throw light on that..
waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
where is tonight's quota of update for us tia??
make it soon..
--Tia-- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
he me back - manita- thnx for raising a doubt this was needed first of all khanak is not the mature 1 in my stry and is not taking relation ship seriously becoz she is stubborn !!! the r "just" gf n bf but shaan feel's and khanak too got it this was the thing that kabeer in 7 years did that for aria and shanak din even last for 6 month's ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wowww tia...
Loved the war declared!!! I see red!!! It is such a beautiful and yet dangerous path that you chose to take my dear Khanak... but then life itself is unpredictable to kya hum jeena chod denge? Shaan's stance is right!!
But then again Khanak's fears are not totally baseless.. fear is something which can sow the seeds of destruction. She needs help... sigh I am sure even if he is angry Shaan will help... something my sutradhaar has in store 😉
Beautifully penned.. the emotions and the situation everything...
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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