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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi1989

first of all hatts off girl for a brilliant piece of writing .it was breathtaking dear .wowww had to caught up with 4 updates it was amazing loved each one more than the previous .man this story is turning lovely dear,

chap 9: the way khanak was making shaan jealous and all being around with him and shaan all red seeing them and khanak leaving all alone with the sunny and not turning up soon and the panic in the cousine and shaan and the rest searching her and finally she turns up when shaan comes .he goes to her room and the convo they have their and he telling her taht she is not going anywhere alone except with him and kissing her hayeee deaddd😍😍😍 superb update .each and every time they end kissing up hehe love it

chap 10 .khaank all ready looking hott and shaan dumbstruck seeing her the flash back in which u reveled wht happened the nite superb description the morning how shaan felt and all wonderful dear .and khanak in the party getting all drunk shaan watching from far off them coming to her and catching her each time she falls and the way they escape from the crowd and walk and she seeing a pool wanting to get into and shaan having to loose himself .they going in the water and khanak talking her heart out and the the things that happend deaddd dear pool romance was so hottt loved it .loved the way the two melted into each other and shaan realising there is something that was way beyond wht he was thing .hayeee too gud super hott

chap 11. khanak trying to avoid him that morning and shaan reminding her of the meet with isaac and later durning their returns he was asking her abt the things which happened last night and he didnt want to give in this time and khanak telling him that their is nothing between them and shaan telling her that he d feeling their is something and he wants to give it a try and give her 5 days to decide and all .how she felt while he departed and he kissed her softly biding byeee hayeee lovely and she seem to be lost in his thoughts the rest 5 days and then she wanted to talk to her friend .loved the way she poured out her heart and crying and letting her feeling known and her friends suggesting not to let it gow he was indeed made for her .loveddd ittt

chap 12 hayeee was dead reading this superb again the flight khanak expecting him to pick up but he didnt the anxitey .his sis picking him up reaching shaan office feeling all good looking at it but couldnt meet him as he was bust in a meeting .khanak feeling mesriable abt it going with rashi to see the city .shaan calling her up that was sweet convo and telling her he will be home soon and khanak wanting to leave early so tht she was get ready before he come she dress up for him shaan comes knocked of his feet seeing her .pulling her but again come back to senses and asking her the reply for his question loved his pestering her and when he was abt to leave she telling him yes that she does want to give it a try and the events that followed where blisss by god that was one hottt one loveddd ittt so much cant wait for the next hayeee off to my shanak land

awww thnx alot !!! hehee chapter 12 is nothing ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abhaylover

awww thnx alot !!! hehee chapter 12 is nothing ;)


Like really...😉
are u serious...

Me super Khush...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey guys it's me !!! with a update umm hawt update not that hawt ;)

Shaan came down the stairs and stood infront of Khanak. She tilted her head to look up at him and gave him a smile. "Would you like to have dinner with me tonite Khanak? Shaan asked. Taking a strand of hair that was falling in her face and pushing it behind her ear. Khanak gave him a big smile. "Are you asking me on a date Mr. Singhania" she teased. "Yes, I am Miss Ahluwalia" Shaan teased back. "Alright, so where are you taking me on our first official date?" she asked excitedly. "Hmm..Shaan said walking around her with his hands behind him pretending to really think about it. Well there's a really good Dhaba close by, they have the best butter chicken. We could go there." "Dhaba?!" Khanak said slowly making a face. "Butter Chicken" she repeated "You're taking me to a Dhaba" she asked slowly with a confused look on her face. "Sure, why not" Shaan said turning away from her so that she wouldn't see his mischievous smile. "Don't worry you'll really like it." "I need to make a quick phone call. I'll meet you back here in 5 minutes." Khanak stared after him still shocked. Shaan was taking her to a Dhaba for their first date. She really knew how to pick them she thought to herself. Grabbing her own phone she sent a quick text to Aria who had been texting her all day wanting to find out how everything went.

"Ready?" Shaan asked as he came down the stairs. "I guess" Khanak said half heartedly. They walked to Shaan's car and Shaan went around and opened Khanak's door for her. Thanks she said smiling at him. Mumbai traffic was as busy as it was every night but Khanak didn't mind it. She loved spending the time with Shaan. Every once in awhile he would reach over and grab her hand and kiss it gently or he would laugh at something she had said and she would feel goosebumps travel up her arm. She loved his laugh. Shaan and Khanak kept up a steady conversation throughout the drive. Shaan asked her about her cousins and about the rest of the Goa trip. He talked about the project he had been so wrapped up in. When Khanak watched him talk about work she noticed he grew so passionate about it. She knew he loved it. Listening to his deep voice that would sometimes grow husky when he looked over at her, made her tingly all over. For once it wasn't Khanak doing all the talking, she liked that Shaan was opening up to her.

They pulled up outside a modern looking building. Khanak looked at Shaan with surprise. Shaan just smiled at her, got out and passed the keys to a valet and went around to the other side to open the door for Khanak. "I thought we were going to a Dhaba' she questioned. Grabbing her hand he led her to the front entrance. "Do you really think I would take you to Dhaba for our first date?" Please what kind of guy do you think I am?!" We'll save the Dhaba for our second date" he joked. Besides you looked way too good in that dress to waste it on a Dhaba." He laughed as Khanak swatted him on the arm.

They walked in and Khanak was instantly reminded of the time she spent in Tuscany. "Welcome to Indigo" a hostess greeted them at the door. "Mr Singhania, so nice to see you again a man that Khanak assumed was the manager said. " I'll take you to your table." He led Shaan and Khanak through the beautifully designed room with dark furnishings and candle lit tables. He walked them outside to a beautiful terrace and then to a candle lit table. Shaan held out her chair for her. "If you need anything please let me know. Your server should be with you shortly" he said as he poured wine into their glasses. Khanak tasted the wine and smiled appreciatively. "I thought you're like that one" Shaan said tasting some himself.

Khanak looked around and took in the ambiance, the candles, black tablecloths and linens, the greenery. She almost felt like she was on a terrace in Rome. "This is so romantic" she said dreamily to Shaan. Shaan smiled. "I'm glad you like" it he said. "I come here more for the food, it's great but I knew you would appreciate the ambiance. Sorry it's all I could think of on short notice." "That project had me completely occupied the past few days." "I wanted to make our first date special for you." "It's great, Khanak said smiling at him. "I love it." Dinner itself was delicious but the time they spent together was amazing. They laughed and talked. Khanak found herself thinking that even though she had met Shaan just a short time ago she felt more comfortable with Shaan then she did with some people she'd known for years.

They didn't realize how long they'd been their until Shaan glanced at his watch. 3 1/2 hours he thought and he'd enjoyed every second of it. "Shall we get going?" he asked Khanak. "Sure" she said smiling. As they left Khanak caught a glimpse of the two of them in a mirror they passed, We look good together she thought to herself smiling, Shaan glanced at her and looked at her questioningly. She just shook her head. Neither one wanted the evening to end as they got into Shaan's car. "Do you want to go for a walk on the beach?" he asked suddenly. "Yes" Khanak answered they drove in silence, content Shaan holding Khanak's hand as he drove. The Radio played:

Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,
Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,
Bheege bheege sapno ka jaise khat hai,
Haii..
Geeli geeli chahat ki jaise lat hai,
Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,
Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan…
Soche dil ki aisa kaash ho,
Tujhko ek nazar meri talash ho,
Jaise khwab hai ankhon mein basse meri,
Waise needon pe silvate pade teri,
Bheege bheege armaano ki rahad hai,
Haii
Geeli geeli khwahish bhi to behad hai,
Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,
Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan..
mar jawaan..hoo…
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They pulled up to the beach and got out with Khanak catching Shaan's hand in hers. "I can't believe it's so quiet here. Aren't the beaches always bustling in Mumbai?" she asked. " It is but this strip of the beach for some reason isn't as busy. I come here sometimes if I have something on my mind and just need to think." Khanak just looked up at Shaan. There were a lot of layers to Shaan Singhania that she was slowly learning about. Suddenly she let go of Shaan's hand and twirled around. "I love listening to the waves" she said looking out at the ocean. "I think it's so calming and soothing" she added closing her eyes and taking a deep breath. Shaan looked down at Khanak, her eyes were closed, the wind blowing softly in her hair, a small smile playing on her lips. He didn't think he's seen anything more beautiful then Khanak right now. Khanak opened her eyes and saw Shaan staring down at her. "What" she asked lifting her eyebrows at him. Nothing he said shaking his head. "You're beautiful he said softly glancing at her. Khanak found herself blushing. "Thanks" she whispered. He stopped and tilted her face up to his and gave her a soft gentle kiss and then he pulled her close to him and held her tightly to him. She wrapped her arms around his waist and pressed her face into his chest, feeling the steady beat of heart. They stayed like that for a while.

'I think we better get going Khanak said softly. I's my first day at the office tomorrow so I need to get there on time. I've got to make a good impression on my business partner. Don't want him thinking I'm slacking on the job." Well you let me know if he gives you a hard time, I'll have a talk with him Shaan tease. In the car with the soft music playing Shaan whistled softly to himself. "Khanak, I usually go into the office at 9:00. Do you want to come in with me?" he asked. When he got no reply he looked over and saw that Khanak was asleep. He felt bad for keeping her out so late but he wouldn't have changed a thing about their first date. As they pulled up to the driveway Shaan saw that Khanak was still fast asleep. He went around to her side and scooped her up in his arms. She didn't stir. He carried her up the stairs to her room and laid her down on her bed. He slipped off her shoes and pulled up her duvet to cover her. She looked so innocent he thought as he moved her hair away from her face. She stirred and smiled in her sleep. shaanft for the office. The driver will drop you off when you're ready. Hope you had sweet dreams. Shaan

Khanak inhaled the fragrance of the rose and then danced around the room. Khanak, stop wasting time she stopped and chastised herself. Today is your first day on the job and you're already late. She took a quick shower and then put on a pair of grey straight legged trousers and a camisole with a slightly see through lilac chiffon short sleeved blouse that had tiny crystal buttons going up the front. She grabbed a fitted short jacket to throw over the outfit. Her hair was half down and the rest was pinned up with a crystal hair clip. She looked professional and damn sexy. Going downstairs she saw Rashi having breakfast. Khanak grabbed herself a cup of coffee and piece of toast. She rushed out saying a quick bye to Rashi.

"Mr. Sharma I need last months sales reports on my desk this afternoon; said Shaan as he leaned over his desk talking to his sales manager. "We'll go over them after I've had a look and then..." Shaan's voice started to trail off as he noticed something or rather someone outside the large window of his office. It was Khanak looking hot as hell talking to his assistant. "Sir, I'll have everything ready for you by noon " he heard Mr. Sharma say. "Huh," Shaan said loking back at him. "Oh yes that's fine" he said snapping out of his daze. He heard a knock on his door and as Mr. Sharma left Khanak walked in "good morning" she said cheerfully. "Good morning" Shaan answered back. Khanak looked Shaan up and down and felt a shiver travel up her spine. It should be against the law to be this good looking she thought to herself looking at his fitted light grey suit and light blue dress shirt. "Did you sleep well?" he asked slowly coming closer to her. "Very well" she answered as she felt him put his hand on her hip and pull her closer. "You look so sexy" he whispered kissing her neck. "Shaan!" she pushed him away. "We're at work! Have some shame!" "You're the boss and I'm your business partner for a very important project." "We should establish some boundaries." "Khanak Ahluwalia and boundaries!' Shaan scoffed. "This from the girl who trespassed into someone's backyard, went swimming in their pool and made out with m..." "Shaan!!! SHH!!she said interrupting him quickly. "I was drunk! Must you announce the incident to the world" "Khanak, my door is shut no one can hear us" he answered reaching for her again. "Don't I even get a good morning kiss?' he asked pouting and giving her a puppy dog face. Khanak glanced back at the big window. "No everyone can see us." "No they can't, he said that's a one way window only we can see out no one can see us." "Oh" Khanak said. "But, no, still there must be boundaries" she said pushing away from him again. FINE BOUNDARIES! Shaan said rolling his eyes.

"So do you want to go see the hotel we are now owners of" Shaan asked. "Yes, I have so many ideas I can't wait to start" Khanak said excitedly. "We can go check it out now, but just a warning it's vacant and in pretty bad condition. We've got some work ahead of us" he warned "Okay give me half an hour. I'll get settled in my office and we can go." Shaan agreed and walked Khanak to her office which was next to his. On her desk sat a beautiful crystal vase filled with even more beautiful red roses. "There's 23 in there" he said. "And you got the 24th one this morning with my note." Khanak smiled a happy smile. "They're beautiful" she said. "So you like them." he asked. She nodded. "So don't you think 24 roses warrant a kiss.?" Khanak looked at him. "OUT, Shaan,OUT" and she pushed him to the door. "Fine, Fine I'm going" he said as she shut the door behind him and leaned against it smiling.

An hour later they arrived at the hotel. From the outside Khanak thought it didn't look too bad. Not great but not falling down. Inside was a whole different story. "Oh my gosh" she said as she walked through the mess. It was falling apart. The foyer looked like it had been half demolished. The paint was peeling, pillars lay on the ground. It was in shambles. "You saw potential in this?" she said coughing because of the dust. "I know it looks bad, but seriously we can make this amazing." Then he started listing off some of his ideas. As she listened to him she caught some of his excitement too. She grabbed her sketch pad and started making some sketches and notes.

She was surprised to find that Shaan and her agreed on a lot of aspects when it came to the hotel. They spent 5 hours there going from floor to floor breaking only for a quick lunch. Khanak rapidly made notes. "We need to gut this first she said. I can tell it has a strong foundation but from the inside a lot of it needs to go." Shaan agreed. It's 5:00, I think we should get going. "Tomorrow at the office we can discuss what our course of action will be and meet with my head of construction." Khanak agreed. She felt good, she could see this really coming together.

On the way home Shaan told her that his friends had invited him out to a bar and asked her if she wanted to come along. Khanak agreed. When they got home Shaan got a phone call and excused himself to go and take it. Rashi was home so Khanak chatted with her about her day. Then she excused herself to go and get ready. Khanak was walking to her room absently looking through her text messages when she felt someone grab her arm and pull her. Shaan had pulled her into his room. He shut the door and pressed her against it. "Shaan what are you doing?" Khanak said feeling breathless. Shaan was still wearing his trousers but his shirt lay open. He caged her against the door by putting an arm on each side. "Khanak, I'm doing what I've been wanting to do all day." Then put his hand behind her neck and pulled her face to his and kissed her. It didn't take Khanak long to kiss him back. "Hmm, that was worth the wait" Shaan said kissing her neck as Khanak put her hands on Shaan's shoulders closing her eyes. Khanak's eyes snapped open when she heard Rashi outside the door "Bhai I need to talkto you" she said. Khanak tried to push him away but the besharm kept kissing her neck. "Rashi I'm busy" he said. "Bhai please it's important". Khanak was starting to panic, she tried again to shove Shaan away from her. But Shaan wasn't moving infact he pulled her closer. "Later Rashi" he said. "But Bhai..." Khanak was furious ,what was Shaan doing? She gave him one last push and then when nothing was working she stomped on his foot with all her strength. "OW" he yelled. "Bhai what's wrong?" Rashi yelled through the door. "Nothing" Shaan said glaring at Khanak. "Rashi give me 2 minutes I'm changing. I'll come down to your room" he said. "Okay Bhai". Khanak smirked at him and then waited a minute before peaking outside. Then she turned around and stuck her tongue out at him and ran out before he could take a step to catch her.

so how it was like ans share ur views criticism alwys welcome

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Posted: 14 years ago
Itna bada update....😃
Only one update today o wat?😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

good part... finally Shanak start work together and parallely the dat each other.. it shuld be fun..

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Posted: 14 years ago
hei tia,
that was a wonderful update..
i loved their first date..
khanak's hesitation to go to dhaba on their 1st date n shaan being naughty here took her to a wonderful place..so loved it..
on returning she admired them in the mirror n felt perfect jodi..that was nice..
in beach i loved the way shaan checked her out..thought there would be a kiss there..but na..
poor khanak dozed of before reaching home..so sweet of shaan to carry her to her room n taking her shoes off n draping the duvet over her..
did something went missing here??"She stirred and smiled in her sleep. shaanft for the office. The driver will drop you off when you're ready. Hope you had sweet dreams. Shaan"
next day in office went smoothly..good that when doing work they r very much dedicated to work..
so they both r going to a bar..
how long could shaan be a good man so he pulled her to his room when she was least aware of..loved the moments spent in his room..
khanak's tension when rashi was calling for shaan n he not letting her go..
the way she released herself n ran from his room was so sweet..do continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
these Shanak r so cute...altym teasing, kssing and working passiontaely..i luvved it..thanks tia..waiting 4 the next...
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Posted: 14 years ago
sahi ja rahe hain boss ... Business partners with advantages .. hehe hehe

Loved their dialogues and Khanak's professionalism. Wanna see how long she can keep it up.

I love this Shaan yaar .. ktina romantic hain and passionate about his work as well.

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Tia.

Awesome update…….loved it. 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

Hey yaar aj ek hi update…..not fair,,,,,,,,😡I am used to of reading Two updates at one time. But thank u so very much for giving us a long & fantastic update.😊

Shaan invites Khanak for Dinner.and tells her that they are going to a Dhaba,(I enjoied reading it as I know he loves to tease her)😉 khanak was majorly disappointed after knowng that he is taking her to the Dhaba for their first date. But Mr smarty took her the wonderful place, loved it when he said will reserve Dhaba for our second date.🤣 Loved ur discribtion about the hotel & how Khanak gets excited. Shaan reassures that she like the place ( he is a sweetheart yaar).Khanak is really impress with his choice of place.😉

Loved the way to did the detailing on describing the ambiance, they has a wonderfull time. Khanak loves it when Shaan open up infront of her. 😊 Shaan is a super passionate guy wheather it is Work or Romance. Khanak noticed how they both look perfect together in the mirror( wonderful discribtion).👏 ⭐️

Wow he took her to the beach. Loved your choce of Song. (perfect for the situation). Shaan hols her hand while Driving…..how romantic. Khanak gets excited after watching waves of the occen. Shaan finds her extermly adorable.😍 khanak dozed off before reaching home.. shaan carry her to her room n taking her shoes off n draping the duvet over her..(Awww…..So sweet)

Loved your discribtion about Khanak & Shaans profesinal look. I can imagine Khanak completely. Shaan is a Noughty noughty boy, busy in his own mischief & making her emberassed.😉 So their first day went Smooth. How sweet of shaan to invite her with him to meet his friends. Shaan pulled her to his room when she was least aware of it. 😲 They spand the most beautiful moment in his room. Until Rashi knock the door. Shaan is badmash he is least intrusted in what his sister wants to say. Finally khanak stomped on his foot. Loved the whole part. 👏 ⭐️

Waiting for the next one …continue soon 😳 😳

Love

Pranjal.

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opps so many mistake's srry !!!!1next tym will be hundred percent sure that there is no mistake ff to read comments

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