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wowww that was hott loved reading it .khanak playing with shaan and trying to drive him crazy and inturn she getting a dose or her.😆was awesome .and the car kiss hayeee dead reading that superd description loved it too gud girl .cant wait for the next .

Originally posted by: iluvmanar

wow..tia..just luvved it...thanks..they r so much in luv...

thnx very much

Originally posted by: jyothi1989

wowww that was hott loved reading it .khanak playing with shaan and trying to drive him crazy and inturn she getting a dose or her.😆was awesome .and the car kiss hayeee dead reading that superd description loved it too gud girl .cant wait for the next .

thx alot jyothi

Originally posted by: dishbhan

ye Khanak ka dimag bhi kamaal hain ... kahan kahan se idea lekar aati hain...but Shaan is also smart!

Liked the way he treated her, tit-for-tat. 😆 😆

The end was mind blowing, Shaan speaks out his mind as usual.
😳

waiting for the business communication to start, I'm sure Khanak is good at work too.

~Cheers,
Dish

thnx alot dishban ...😳

Originally posted by: IF_rida

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It was awesome👏
I like the way she aksed him that r u asking for a date. mr.mischievious teases her all the time but he said dhaba to iiritate her was cute.

wow... he took her to a classy place ... she must be mesmerized. the way u've described abt the p;ace i was mesmerized imaging it.

nice she got to know he's passionate abt work... well he's passionate abt everything.
it was cute they were holding hands i the car and he occasionally kissed her hands.

gr8 she luvs that he's opening upto her... wow he took her to the beach thats like a cheery at the top of cake. the beach part was really cute and romantic and hwt ever happened dere was needed otherwise it cant be called shanak na😉

awww... she slept ... he took her to room and cvered her with duvet... shoo shweet
the note he left was very shweet.

hmmm boundaries in the office... mr.singhania is goin to 've a tough time. the 24 roses thing was super cute.

wen they visited the site it was nice that they talked abt biz and they agreed... nice

he pulled her into his room... typical shaan😛

em bz rashi... i laughed out loud... yeah but that was an imp task
she hurt his foot to run away... ms alluwalia knows how to get her way

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Fab tia👏

luved she took time and make him wait 45 mins but rite iy was worth waiting. the dress u've described she must have looked breath taking.

she's giving him really tough time first inviting rashi den asking what unfinished bz and then saying to juz talk and hold hands.

the club part was superb. em sure she must 've drive him crazy and then he got his way... wow
tit for tat... em luvin it... the song was perfect👍🏼

ms.alluwalia turns inti ms.furious ... hehe😆
she burst out and the way he reacted or i shd say console her nah handled her naah actually acted for wht he feels was super hawt😉

this is shanak moments we waited for☺️

my fav part ..."Honestly it was a joke until the joke turned on me. Then I couldn't handle it." Khanak said sheepishly.

"What a surprise" Shaan remarked sarcastically. "If I was to pull something like that I would get my ass kicked." "But you.." "Me what?" Khanak glared at Shaan. "Well you have the upper hand cause you have something I want...so I can never be mad at you for too long." "Because being mad at you will keep me away from what I always want" said Shaan softly. "What's that?" Khanak asked suspiciously. "You're lips" as he leaned in and kissed her again. Khanak felt her lips turn up into a smile... hayeela... super cute and super romantic.😍

hey u sad 12 part is nuthin... wow... dial it up more gurl and keep updating.
one update a day is ok but keep updating daily.

my gawd such a big comments love u alot ..yup i'l update daily

Hey Tia,

Awesome & fantastic part………loved it 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Hey First of all sorry for the late comments as I was extremely busy yesterday. Read it just now & loved it as always,,,,,U are awesome. ⭐️

Loved your detailing on Khanaks dress & getup. I can so imagine her. Khanak is in full mood to annoy shaan first she takes time to get ready,😉 than she asks Rashi to give them company, loved the way u described Shaans expressions.😆 Finally he gets succeded & Rashi refuse to came….Ohhh Khanak tells him that will just hold holds & will talk…..No touchy touchy at all.😳 Poor Shaan sare sapne mitti me mil gaye.😛

Finally they Reach to the Bar. When akash entered & talk about the last time….i actually got scared I tought bcoz of this idiot they'll end up fighting, 😡 Khanak is back with her action she drinks ….She dance,,,,She tries to flirt with Shaan just to tease him.😉 & she was pretty successful. But shaan cought it at right time & decided to give her the does of her own medicine.😉 He starts ignoring her,& yes he is successful. (poor girl pura game ulta ho gaya) u have beautifully described the atmosphere at bar & song choice was good too.⭐️

While caming back there way khanak is damn upset with Shaan. & He is enjoying her discomfort. Finally Khanak brust out & questions Shaan abt his behaviour (Awww…..i really felt bad for poor girl)😭 Loved the way Shaan console her & then their passionate romance. Finally Khanak confess ke it was just a Joke…The last part was fantastic & shaan saya you have something that I want ….when khanak asked for it he Says "You're lips" …..*dead*😳

Waiting for the next part & yes also waitng for your OS,…..please continue soon 🤗

Love

Pranjal.

nice1 tia plz cont soon...

oki so me posting a chap !!!!