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Souma.N thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb!!!!!!!!
Loved it!!
I love the little touches that you have added...like the HL bit...the Dadi bit...
I am remembering a bit from a previous part during lunch when Shaan think "She wont talk to me but will allow me to make the rules"
She is learning...when he went off to Pune ...he said not only is ego but he on the whole dint matter anytime...he is not entirely right...after the incident in Boston when she offended him with her comment on the longivity of the marrige...she avoids rubbing him the wrong way...she may insist on taking control but has handed over the reins to him willingly!!!!!!!
Love Casa and love you
There is none like you both and will never be!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Uff, dhooan dar...

Hari lal is getting really interesting...🀣 I think we have gotten lots of insights into his character, jo dheela nahi lag raha hai...

Khanak is wondering how to ask...cause she knows, answer is going to no...Shaan ki scrunchie collection must be one of the best any man could ever have...πŸ˜†

So is she gonna go? I feel her frustration...sigh...And she is still mad at him...fair enough...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Adi dii...

Awesome updates...

Ok i have a doubt... Sonali saw shaan in ahmedabad also right??? Den y sudenly she gets a crush on shaan when she sees him in mumbai???? Is it coz he is rich or coz she wants dis lifestyle for herself??

And jealous khanak is cute...

Finally they found tym alone...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aaj ka kaam tamaam
I am backkk
yayyy
Update coming up shortly
I LOVE this new job For many reasons
First would be
Chalo baad mein
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Posted: 14 years ago
DJ aapke liye itna sizzle kaafi hai?
Aur maroon Indian store ki hari mirch ka tadkaπŸ˜‰
PART 164 A

6:07 PM

11th July 2011

Art & AnatomyπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

There is a knock on the door.

Khanak: Oh! Gosh! (startled, nervous, tightening her grip on his back)

Shaan swears colorfully, on her bare upper body.

The knock again!

Khanak: Shantanu, uthiye!

He lingers, feeling her skin with his cheek.

Khanak groans audibly "koi hai"

She pulls her tee down, pushing him away at the same time. His hair is a mess, so is hers.

Another knock!

Shaan: We need to move out of this house 😑 (blistering)

He reluctantly wears his tee. She extends her hand to receive a hand up.

He doesn't give any to her.πŸ˜†

Just runs his finger through his own hair

Another knock!😲

Ritu: MYSTERY!

Khanak is beetroot red "OMG! Its Ritu!" "OMG!"😳😳😳

He looks at her amusedπŸ˜†

Shaan: Ya Ritu, come on in!πŸ˜‰

The sofa is quite a ways from the door and its backside faces the door, that too at a 90 degree angle. So from where Ritu is nothing is visible

Khanak jumps up, hooks a certain item of clothing behind her back and pulls the tee stiffly trying to get it to go over her kneesπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.

Khanak: kahan hai mera scuncie?😑😭

Starts to braid her hair with trembling fingers.

He reaches and wipes off some lipstick from the side of her cheek.😳

He lays back and shuts his eyes.😳

Ritu: Lovely! So tu yaha hai?😲

Khanak stands up in shock. Her clothes are in order only her face and hands are a huge give away.

Khanak: Sorry I was talking to his friend we met in Boston, and he had the headset on so we both didnt hear the door😳 (Compulsive Liar!)

Stamps on his foot with her bare right foot. He hardly feels any pressure. He brings his other foot and captures hers.😳

Ritu walks over to the couch, pauses by a table along the wall with some sculpture.

Khanak, bends and pushes on his knee, he grabs his laptop from the coffee table and logs on''.

Holding on to her hand'.. thats on his knee with his left hand

Ritu: This is SO cool!πŸ˜ƒ

Khanak: I don't think so! 😑(giving Shaan a nasty look)

Ritu: You have no clue about the human body depicted through rare art... Sorry! (haughty)

Ritu is holding the sculpture in her hand and admiring the multicolored lights reflecting off of it.

Shaan: I agree ...about the human body thing Ritu! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†(chuckles)

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow adi,
wat was that??
really he asked ritu to come in before she was ready..
how mean??he never misses a chance to tease her..
really he said they should move out of the house..may be..but if there is no one else she'll sulk even more..
so will he say ritu that khanak is not allowed to step out of the house..
will she let him do that??
n its getting late..she need to wake up her aada n fa na??
loved his blue line..
another update pls...
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xoxRBOxox

Thanks for the Updates Aditee...This character...sonu/Sonali...whatever...(my brain doesn't even want to register her name)...is beyond annoying...is getting on everyones nerves...but will bear with her...as loving jealous Khanak... ...maybe our icemaiden will melt...Shaan bechara is as is living in guilt...is quite remorseful too, ...didn't even go to work...ab is se jyada kya kare to prove what his wife means to him...

Sonali is Khanak's cousin...and her family is top on her priority list...let her Jhelo her infatuated...materialistic cousin and maybe then she'll appreciate Gujrals a bit more...can already see the change...esp her comparison between Shantanu (his cousins too)and Mehul...after Mehul's fiasco.
All the ladies ...thank you so much... Ek baat ke liye I'm grateful to Aditee for bringing forth this character...after many days...laughed so much, with everyone bashing her, cursing her left right and center...thank god she's just a ficticious charcter...murder bhi plan ho gaya hai uska...Casa Zindabaad!!!
Thanks for all the nunsenselessness...which reminds me...not to sound like a nosy-parker...I know I'm new to you all...but have been reading all your comments too...so I personally feel as I've known you all for a long time...so was wondering haven't seen Lana Ghosh(hope I've got the name right)...offlately...any idea ladies...use to love reading her long synopsis...miss her presence too...
πŸ€—to you all...Ann

What a lovely note!
Ab bus tum meri sabse fave ho!
Yahan par jitne bhi aur hain unko maine abhi ke abhi tyaag diya
Not sure where Lana is sorry!
Maybe she got over this affliction!πŸ˜†
This is the longest Ive been infected by a FFπŸ˜ƒ
About Sonali getting killed...
Kya kahoon
Sab itna zabardast pyaar karte hain Khanak se
That gives me added impetus to keep Sonali on!πŸ˜ƒ
Life mein sab kuch smooth aur trouble free rahega to it will be like watching Aastha channel
My story is definitely not it!
Sorry!
Khanak will seriously ask him why he abandoned her... soon
She is honest and never afraid to speak her mind
She is quiet 90% of the day but she knows when to speak
Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maar daala 😳😳😳
Pink lines at the top!!! It is sizzling hot...The cooling and the fan is not enough...I need to jump in a cold pool πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Smoke is visibly coming out of my ears...
Shaan is having a field day...don't tell me that Ritu did not notice...πŸ˜‰, not possible...she is saving her friend the embarrassment? I think she is in league with Shaan to trouble Khanak...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
BTW her timing is impeccable. Off to restore my breathing to normal...and check my BP πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg... Shaan is so mean.. doesnt give her enuf time to get presentable and look @ he commenting about art and human body.. this guy is the epitome of everything πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SachDJ

Maar daala 😳😳😳

Pink lines at the top!!! It is sizzling hot...The cooling and the fan is not enough...I need to jump in a cold pool πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Smoke is visibly coming out of my ears...
Shaan is having a field day...don't tell me that Ritu did not notice...πŸ˜‰, not possible...she is saving her friend the embarrassment? I think she is in league with Shaan to trouble Khanak...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
BTW her timing is impeccable. Off to restore my breathing to normal...and check my BP πŸ˜‰

Thank you!
That was especially for you.
Single uns can skip that partπŸ˜‰
Sometimes its good to have a dessert as a meal
This part was that... or so I assume

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