Bulandiyaan-Flight Beyond Skies l Prt 49 A Pg. 146 - Page 9

Superb imane👏

the son u've selected id damnn gud and the way u've penned abt the dance moves was awesome

dere non verbal conv and luking at each other creates magic 😍... coz of ur writing

the dance moves was fab

luving the fb

continue soon.

Hey Imane,

Awesome part………….loved it. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Beautifully written……fantastic.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Wow the sangeet ceremony ……loved ur detailing abt the atmosphere at the lawn. Start from the decorations to getting guests, how every one is busy in their assigned tasks. Wow I can completely imagine it. So all the munde kudiya are planning to have a blast & decided to burn the dance floor with their solid dance moves. Oye hoye I love Shaans confidance while taking to his Chachaji as if telling mehfil to main hi jamaunga.😉 & our khanak is all set to spread her magic on the dance floor.😊

Loved your choice of song. Athenic panjabi song na. I have seen har panjabi shadi sangeet mein ye gaana hota hi hain. Loved the whole discribtion abt how they made their lines & drag respective person accordingly on the dance floor. I can so imagine shaans reaction when he saw Khanaks dance. 😲 I just love their interaction across the dance floor it was magical. Full on Aankhon aankhon mein. U are awesome & ur writing creates magic. So Captain Sahab & Doctorniji ne Sabko nacha hi diya apne saath.😊

I just love this Biji. She is awesome she is a masterplanner. Her little tricks, actions & her planning is bringing magic & fun to the story. Loved the way u potraied Biji's character. I just love their sangeet party. Haven't been to any panjabi wedding as I am a gujarati & we do have sangeet ceremony with the Ras garba & Dandiya. but ur discribption of panjabi Sangeet made the whole update alive I can so imagine it frame by frame.😍 😍

I love their interaction. She doesnt say "Thank you" while taking glass of water ...coz she thinks she has a right on him...and doesnt feel the need to be formal with him..& his immediate approval by drinking the remaining water from her glass...these things made them cutest. So Shaan & the cousins planning "Musical Welcome" for their Kushi Bhabhi. & now khanak is also a part of the plan……….hmmm…..sounds intresting….gave me a reminder of film Hum Saath Saath Hain. But I so wanted it in your version as I love ur writing. Your last lines were too cute when she asks him that he like her dance & his casual Hmmm………….Loved it loved it.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Waiting for the next part……………jaldi dena.😊

Love

Pranjal.

imane.. loved it.. Shanak and dance.. too good..

chaa gye tussi tooo ji..
inna sonna dance..
uper se shanak..
bittu n shruti fail hai apne yasharan ke charm ke saamne..
tooo gud 😊

Hi Imane

loved it. They don talk much but a lot it exchanged between them. They are in total sync wit each other. Very well written

hei imane,
really a cute part..
both shaan n khanak remembering their childhood memories..
madhvi's little teasing before sending her off with shaan..
so lovely..
i have gone twice to gurudhwar..i could so feel the way u explained their entry over there,the water which washes ur feet in the entrance,the lake n all..so nice imane..
finally shaan asking her to be in chandigarh n she saying if he wishes she'll..so lovely..it gave a soothing feel..
do continue soon..