Bulandiyaan-Flight Beyond Skies l Prt 49 A Pg. 146 - Page 7

Hi Imane, this is my first post to u. I liked ur FF KMK & was disappointed that it ended suddenly.Was quite happy to read ur next FF : Bulandiyaan-- Flight Beyond Skies. Loved the title & trailer VM is superb. The way u start ur FFs with VM - it creates a feeling that ur watching a show rather than reading.

Loved the whole Punjabi feel of the FF from the house atmosphere to dialect to the rituals. Ur knowledge on flying, jets, base camp , Air Force is awesome.

Shaan as Air Force Officer & Khanak as Doctor is a sizzling combination. The way u r merging flashbacks & present is beautiful. Please continue with ur flashbacks. Eager to know about their realization of their feelings for each other.

Keep up the good work.

------Nehal

do continue with flash backs yr
ye dil maange more😃
u r tooo gud..
best of luck..
pkz update it soon...❤️

cute update.. loved how he held her and she understood and stood besides him... and as for ur question.. 70% Shanak flashback and 30% Shanak present..

Hi Imane, are you updating today? Can't wait for the next installment. You've visualised this so well. I can just picture the Hawali and all the decorations and such. Got this imagine in my head from Jab We Met. Not sure if that's how I'm suppose to visualise it but it is and I'm loving it!!! 😍😍😍😍

Hey Imane,

Beautiful piece of writing………Awesome👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Loved the update. It was fantastic.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Hey I know I am super slow this time with my comments ….Sorry for that but seriously loved the update. It was magical filled with all type of emotions.Romance, love , care, affection, teasing *sigh* just one word fantabulous. So kushi & Akshay are leaving for their Hm. Wow.Happy journey to them. It so sweet of Akshay & family as they are giving Kushboo Surprice. Loved whole family sence. Young cousines teasing their Sweet bhabhi.loved the way elders told akshay to enjoy his trip & gave him assurance that they will take care of business work. I love Kushi's character in this Story it is way more different than everyone has potraied it uptill now. Madhavi is So proud of her DIL's. loved ladies chat in biji's room so now every one is knowing that Biji was the mastermind behind Shaan & Khanaks relationship 😉 😉

Hey please please please continue giving the flash backs. I am just loving it. Your flashbacks take me to their world. I can so imagine the whole sinario. I just loved your detailing on Haldi rasam. U are awesome. I was actually imagining it while reading I was felling like I am attending that function & everything is happing live infrount of me. This is the reason I say that while redaing ur update I never felt disconnected with Past while reading present. U are amazing in discribing emotions & atmosphere. U filled it with magical colours. 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

Loved the whole Haldi Creemony, Awww……….poor akshay everyone is troubling poor guy. But its actually fun to tease & chase the dulheraja. U know while reading this update I actually recognize the fun & masti we had on my cousine bhaiya's wedding. This is the best part of Indian tradition. Loved the way all the girls put haldi on him. Accha bewakuf banaya akshay ko. Shaan is also here with Nagada I mean Wow…… Khanak is always there with Shaan. Loved Shaan & Akshays bonding. I am just loving this dheere dheere badhati nazadikiyaan between Shaan & Khanak. Felt emotional while reading the part when Madhavi do massage to akshay. Awww…..she is missing his husband. Loved the way Shaan hug Madhavi. It shows how he is proud of her. I just loved Shaan he don't want her to go anywhere. Loved his action for stopping her.& Khanak also understands it & stays beside him. Wow…..beautifully written.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Wow…..just one word fantastic update. Loved their costumes Discribtion I can so imagine it. Hats off to ur detailing Wow.i know I am writing this again coz I have written this line in my last reply but seriously there is something incrediabily sexy about these two. They are just lovely & perfect. I just cant stop my self abt deraming them all thanks to you. 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

Waiting for the next part……jaldi dena.😊

Please keep giving us flashbacks. 😃

Love u

Pranjal.

hei imane,
the characterisation of shantanu is very good..
i'm happy reading it..
the final part took the cake for me in this update..
both of them filling in their senses with the others scent n feeling heavenly..
wishing to be in each others arms..so lovely..
so in a week shaan is coming home and her mom is planning a surprise for her..that is so lovely..
do continue soon..

wonderful... dont worry abt Shaan's characterisation.. its growing on us..

characterization of Shantanu is amazing loved it! keep up the great work Imane!😃