Bulandiyaan-Flight Beyond Skies l Prt 49 A Pg. 146

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Fab imane👏

The jet description is amazing 👍🏼... gurl u r really gud🤗

Whatever u've written so far in all ur ff its a master piece... u know all about wht u intend to write and leave me speechless

U've ended the update at such a curious note... plz jaldi se ek sweet shanak convo post kardo

eagerly waiting for next update... continue very soon.

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Loved the way you given the details of Shaan's career ...

And Khanak's family setting ... too good hain !
ma-beti ki baatein achi lagi ...

He called to inform her about his leading the F-15 squad? ya bcoz his mom told him to call?

Where are the details of Shaan falling for her or Khanak falling for him ... or rather how the roka happened ya?

Jaldi next update plzzz...waiting anxiously...

~Cheers,
Dish

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Shanak fone talk.. waiting for it..

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

hei imane,
nice update..the way explained his flying session i dont know y but i imagined it relating to the movie "PEARL HARBOR"..loved it imane..
khanak's rapport with her mom was so sweet..
khanak's smile seeing the caller in her phone n her soft hello brought a smile to my face..
loved it..jaldhi inke shaadi karwa dho..pls...
PS: u have not planned abt the no. of updates for this like KMK..right??the reason for asking is i dont want u to rush it up as u said abt KMK..let this story go on its flow n we'll read it watever may happen..so bring it on imane..do continue soon..

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bellyjerefisher

@shanakyasharan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

srry my net died fr 2 days

im so so so so so loving it imane

cant wait fr them to meet n things to begin

its moving on perfectly love it

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

what an update, loved how they wordlessly experessed everything to each other!

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

lovd it imane!

this is turning out to be an awesome story!

i lyk the 'arya' in shaan's name ...

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Lovely update imane👏

the conv was super cute and really sweet... i think one of the most sweet conv i've ever heard or listen😍

the flashback is fab... u keep in mind even the minute detail and alwayz mention the things which plays an imp role in a relationship👍🏼

first talking abt each other den givin her the gud news and explaining the reason for it... beautiful😍

My fav and most shweetest part

"Maine voh…"Thanks" nahi kaha na…"

"Jub pehlay kabhi nahi kehti thi toh abb kyun kahogi…?" ... aww... shoo shweet😍

App…"

"Hmmm…?"

"Kuch nahi…"

"Pooch lo Khanak…"

"Jub app samne hongay toh pooch loon gi…" ... maha cute 😍
☺️
thx for updating it soon ... continue very soon

eagerly waiting for the next update and more sweet conv be4 meeting

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

hei imane,
may be as ur real life experience is very much related with this story line u r breathing in each n every characters..really it is lovely..
s..the phone convo had my smile intact..
wonderful..i'm loving it..
both of them r not very much expressive with words but they ensure that the message is conveyed with the exact emotions that they have..thats gr8..
the flashback was simply awesome..i just imagined the whole sequence..shaan going to her room to pick her n she struggling with her doris..his knock on the door n her indecisiveness for few moments whether to tell him wat her pbm is r not..he being a complete gentleman closing his eyes n help her tying her doris..loved it..they r just perfect for each other..
both showing their longingness for the other was wonderful..will wait for the next part..

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Hey!

Nice convo ... loved the way they speak, somewhat comfortable, somewhat shy ... some hesitation, some friendliness, some love!
And yet great understanding...

Haaye ... kash...

Waiting for the next update dear ... jaldi plss

~Cheers,
Dish

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