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im writing an os for the first time . i hope u like it . it takes place when shanak are still staying at gb's and nobody knows about them.
its a sunday morning at gangu bai's mansion .khanak wakes up wid a smile on her face .though she is in a habit to wake up early but today is no usual day for her.today is a very special day .today is d day when they became one. today is the day when d love of her life, her true jeevan sathi entered her life. yes it was their 1st wedding anniversery.she holds the idol of ganpati ji kept on side tabvle which was gifted to her by shantanu when he got his 1st salary.she thank god for filling her life wid so much happiness she didnt even dreamt of and giving her shantanu.she gets up and sees everyone in the house in deep sleep and enjoing sunday. but she cant afford to waste even a single second otday. she has planned everything for this special day for long and she's got lots of work to complete.she went to take bathe.after sumtime she came out but was in a big dillema as what to wear . nothin seems to be fit for today.she kept throwing all the outfits. her eyes dropped on something . a white saree. shegrabs it from her almirah and holds it close to her heart. her mind wonders back .(flashback) it was the time when she used to hate shantanu and blame him for suraj's death.she even hated to luk at him. things were similar the other way round too as shantanu had natasha in his life and he too hated khanak for cmng between them .but fate changed, circumstances changed,hatred started melting into love and that night was just the beginning. though that night didnt belong to them . shantanu was waiting for natasha but fate brought khanak to shantanu.that was the night when she realised that there is a soft shantanu behind this arragont shan. she saw a hint of innocence in his eyes. that was the night night when for the first time they actually talked.that was THE NIGHT for them which changed their kismat. she was wearing bright white saree and shantanu was in white shirt. it was the first time shantanu complemented her and called her beautiful. and she knows he meant it...khanak comes back to reality .she holds the saree close to her heart .she felt her heart brimming with emotions. she immediatly decides to surprise shantanu by wearin this saree and taking him back too to those beautiful memories. she went back to her almirah to arrange back her clothes when her eyes fell on sindur ki dabbi and mangulsata ther. she suddenly remembers where is she. she is not at their home.they are at gangu bai's and nobody knows that she is married. then how could she wear a saree? her face suddenly falls.she really wanted to wear all this, she wnted to fiil her mang with sindur, she wanted to wear her mangalsutra but with they stuck at gangubai's she cant. suddenly an idea struck her. she told herself "gangubai ki wajah se mein mangalsutra aur sindur na laga saku to koi nai par yeh saree to mein pehan ke rahoongi. dekhati hoon kaun rokta hai".she got really happy and rushed to washroom to wear the saree. she came out luking breathtaking. she luked at her reflection in mirror and blushed a little. she put on a little makeup.. after getting ready and checking herself out for like 100th time in mirror to look perfect for today, she came out of her room. she glanced at boys room. no light was cmng out from the room. khank(to herself)
"lagta hai shantanu abhi tak uthe hi nahi. yahan mein aj ke din ke liye itni utsuk hu aur ye hai ki ghode bech kar so rahe hai. rahenge to hamesha budthal hi na. kabhi kuch yaad nai rehta. lekin aj nai, . agar in he aj ka din nai yaad hua to inki khair nai." she angrily proceeded towards kitchen... khanak decided to make all shantanu's favourite dishes. she immediately starts her work.
khanak was stil busy in kitchen and preparing al the shan's favourite dishes. She kept luking at boys room and waiting for shan to wake up. but no movement happened. she was fuming with anger " yeh shantanu bhi na kabhi nahi sudhrenge. hamesha aise karte hai . romance karne to kabhi nai bhulte par kam ki cheez to yad hi nai rehti. meine to socha tha shantanu aj mere liye koi surprise plan karenge par jab se yahan aye hai mujhe to jaise bhool hi gaye hai.ane do aj to baat hi nai karungi" she checked everything and went back to her room. after sometime Shejust came out of her room fuming in anger and was walking towards his room when someone held her hand from behind the pillar and took her behind it. Khanak was so scared that she immediately shut her eyes tightly and was about to shout when shantanu covered her mouth with his hands.she opened her eyes and was shocked to see shantanu.he pinned her to the pillar .once it got settled in khanak's mind that it was shantanu,he removed his hands.
khanak: shantanu ap. Mein to dar hi gai thi (she said recovering her breath).
shan: kyun tumne socha bhoot a gaya ya koi chor."
khanak: ap bhoot se kam ho kya. "
Shan:acha bachu,to mein bhoot hu ha.(he grabbed her from waist and said in husky voice)
shan: waise mein apni morning kiss lene aya tha. "
khanak luked angrily at shan and pushed him litle
khanak: hatiye yaha se.kuch nahi milega apko'.
shan again leaned towards her and said"are kya hua.?Mujhe to laga mujhe dekh ke khush hogi par yaha to kuch aur hi ho raha hai'.
khanak(pouts and got sad):"kaisi khushi.jab se yaha rehne aye hai ap to bilkul badal gae hai.mujhpar bilkul dhyan nah dete.aur aj ka din, ap to aj ka din tak bhul gae aur ghode bech kar sote rahe.
shan:aj ka din?Kyun kya hai aj?"
Khanak(shockinly and teary eyed):kya, ap ko aj ka din yad nah.(she got angry and pushed shantanu )hatiye yahase."
khanak pushed shan and was abt to leave when shan held her hand from behind.
khanak (angrily):chodiye mera hath shantanu.mujhe apse koi bat nai karni.ap ko mujhse pyar."
(she was goin to say more when she felt something entering her finger.she turned around and luked at her hand and then at shan.she again luked at her fingers.a beautiful ring was glittering on her finger.she luked at shan wid teary eyes.shan come close to her and caresed her face)
shan:tumhe kya laga , ki mein aj ka din bhul jaunga?"
(khanak immediately come closer to him and hugged him tightly)
to be contd...
hope u liked it
hye guys a. actually ive already posted this os long back but never got time to continue. but now i ''l complete it . also earlier it was in parts but i copied it on single page for reader's convenience.
its a sunday morning at gangu bai's mansion .khanak wakes up wid a smile on her face .though she is in a habit to wake up early but today is no usual day for her.today is a very special day .today is d day when they became one. today is the day when d love of her life, her true jeevan sathi entered her life. yes it was their 1st wedding anniversery.she holds the idol of ganpati ji kept on side tabvle which was gifted to her by shantanu when he got his 1st salary.she thank god for filling her life wid so much happiness she didnt even dreamt of and giving her shantanu.she gets up and sees everyone in the house in deep sleep and enjoing sunday. but she cant afford to waste even a single second otday. she has planned everything for this special day for long and she's got lots of work to complete.she went to take bathe.after sumtime she came out but was in a big dillema as what to wear . nothin seems to be fit for today.she kept throwing all the outfits. her eyes dropped on something . a white saree. shegrabs it from her almirah and holds it close to her heart. her mind wonders back .(flashback) it was the time when she used to hate shantanu and blame him for suraj's death.she even hated to luk at him. things were similar the other way round too as shantanu had natasha in his life and he too hated khanak for cmng between them .but fate changed, circumstances changed,hatred started melting into love and that night was just the beginning. though that night didnt belong to them . shantanu was waiting for natasha but fate brought khanak to shantanu.that was the night when she realised that there is a soft shantanu behind this arragont shan. she saw a hint of innocence in his eyes. that was the night night when for the first time they actually talked.that was THE NIGHT for them which changed their kismat. she was wearing bright white saree and shantanu was in white shirt. it was the first time shantanu complemented her and called her beautiful. and she knows he meant it...khanak comes back to reality .she holds the saree close to her heart .she felt her heart brimming with emotions. she immediatly decides to surprise shantanu by wearin this saree and taking him back too to those beautiful memories. she went back to her almirah to arrange back her clothes when her eyes fell on sindur ki dabbi and mangulsata ther. she suddenly remembers where is she. she is not at their home.they are at gangu bai's and nobody knows that she is married. then how could she wear a saree? her face suddenly falls.she really wanted to wear all this, she wnted to fiil her mang with sindur, she wanted to wear her mangalsutra but with they stuck at gangubai's she cant. suddenly an idea struck her. she told herself "gangubai ki wajah se mein mangalsutra aur sindur na laga saku to koi nai par yeh saree to mein pehan ke rahoongi. dekhati hoon kaun rokta hai".she got really happy and rushed to washroom to wear the saree. she came out luking breathtaking. she luked at her reflection in mirror and blushed a little. she put on a little makeup.. after getting ready and checking herself out for like 100th time in mirror to look perfect for today, she came out of her room. she glanced at boys room. no light was cmng out from the room. khank(to herself)
"lagta hai shantanu abhi tak uthe hi nahi. yahan mein aj ke din ke liye itni utsuk hu aur ye hai ki ghode bech kar so rahe hai. rahenge to hamesha budthal hi na. kabhi kuch yaad nai rehta. lekin aj nai, . agar in he aj ka din nai yaad hua to inki khair nai." she angrily proceeded towards kitchen... khanak decided to make all shantanu's favourite dishes. she immediately starts her work.
khanak was stil busy in kitchen and preparing al the shan's favourite dishes. She kept luking at boys room and waiting for shan to wake up. but no movement happened. she was fuming with anger " yeh shantanu bhi na kabhi nahi sudhrenge. hamesha aise karte hai . romance karne to kabhi nai bhulte par kam ki cheez to yad hi nai rehti. meine to socha tha shantanu aj mere liye koi surprise plan karenge par jab se yahan aye hai mujhe to jaise bhool hi gaye hai.ane do aj to baat hi nai karungi" she checked everything and went back to her room. after sometime Shejust came out of her room fuming in anger and was walking towards his room when someone held her hand from behind the pillar and took her behind it. Khanak was so scared that she immediately shut her eyes tightly and was about to shout when shantanu covered her mouth with his hands.she opened her eyes and was shocked to see shantanu.he pinned her to the pillar .once it got settled in khanak's mind that it was shantanu,he removed his hands.
khanak: shantanu ap. Mein to dar hi gai thi (she said recovering her breath).
shan: kyun tumne socha bhoot a gaya ya koi chor."
khanak: ap bhoot se kam ho kya. "
Shan:acha bachu,to mein bhoot hu ha.(he grabbed her from waist and said in husky voice)
shan: waise mein apni morning kiss lene aya tha. "
khanak luked angrily at shan and pushed him litle
khanak: hatiye yaha se.kuch nahi milega apko'.
shan again leaned towards her and said"are kya hua.?Mujhe to laga mujhe dekh ke khush hogi par yaha to kuch aur hi ho raha hai'.
khanak(pouts and got sad):"kaisi khushi.jab se yaha rehne aye hai ap to bilkul badal gae hai.mujhpar bilkul dhyan nah dete.aur aj ka din, ap to aj ka din tak bhul gae aur ghode bech kar sote rahe.
shan:aj ka din?Kyun kya hai aj?"
Khanak(shockinly and teary eyed):kya, ap ko aj ka din yad nah.(she got angry and pushed shantanu )hatiye yahase."
khanak pushed shan and was abt to leave when shan held her hand from behind.
khanak (angrily):chodiye mera hath shantanu.mujhe apse koi bat nai karni.ap ko mujhse pyar."
(she was goin to say more when she felt something entering her finger.she turned around and luked at her hand and then at shan.she again luked at her fingers.a beautiful ring was glittering on her finger.she luked at shan wid teary eyes.shan come close to her and caresed her face)
shan:tumhe kya laga , ki mein aj ka din bhul jaunga?"
(khanak immediately come closer to him and hugged him tightly)
to be contd...
hope u liked it
hye guys a. actually ive already posted this os long back but never got time to continue. but now i ''l complete it . also earlier it was in parts but i copied it on single page for reader's convenience.
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