Os:shanak romantic anniversery at gb's:part4,5:pg5 - Page 3

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Hey nice update...Khanak telling lies to Gangu Bai was beautifully written👍🏼...plz update next part soon...😊

NIce ... very nice👏

haye ye gunga bai bhi hitler ki sis nikli😡

well khanak is mart... she handles thing pretty well

wowo... u r mistaken... superb chay... gujrati chori ne khushi ko set kar diya😉

haye i was even frustrated k shaan kahan hai😕

but juz like khanak mere face pe bhi smile aagai sms parh k😊

it was very sweet

as u said next one full shanak hai so eagerly waiting for a shanaklicious update

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Part 4

Khank reached tea stall. She saw shan standing there with a bouqet in his hands. She ran towards him and hugs him. Two people were holding each other as if they have met each other after a lifetime of separation, hands moving on each others back. She could no longer control her tears built inside her from past so many days. She sobbed into shan's chest.khanak felt her tears through his shirt and breaks the hug….khanak luk into his eyes but then hit him on his chest

Khanak: kyun itna intezar karwaya..?pata hein mein kitna tarap rahi thikyun sataya mujhe itna……..

(shan wipes her tears and kissed her on her forhead.rest his forehead onto hers and held her face in his hands caressing her cheek )

Shan: khanak mei a gya hoon. Plz ab rona band karo. Im sorry. Thoda late ho gaya na?

( khanak : thoda nai bahut.

(she poutts andturns away)

itni der mein piche se ek phoolon ka guldastan uske samne a jata hai . isse pehle ki woh phool ko hatati uske kano mein dheere se awaz ati hai"meri fool(in English) biwi ke liye yeh khubsurat phool(in hindi)". Khanak ke chehre pe halki si muskurahat a jati hai. Par wo gussa hone ka natak karti hai and piche mude bina , shantanu ki taraf dekhe bina , use thoda door ho kar khadi ho jati hai. Shantanu ko samajh a jata hai ki wo use naraz hai . par wo apni biwi ko manana ache se janta hai . he slolw goes towards her and hugs her tightly from behind. Kanak gets shocked.she tries to get out of his arms but shantanu use aur kas ke pakadleta hai aur apni chin khanak ke shoulders pe rakh deta hai.

Khanak: shantanu kya kar rahe ho ap . choddo mujhe. Sab dekh rahe hai shantanu.

Shan: to dekhne do…..

Khanak: hatiye shantanu. Aur waise bhi mein apse bahut naraz hu . apne mujhe itni der intezaar karwaya.

Shan:I m sorry khanak. Par I promise ab koi galti nai karunga. Promise.

Khanak phir bhi shantanu ko pareshan karne k elite apna face dusri side kar leti hai

Shan: khanak , I said im sorry na

Then only khanak realised two three passerbyes staring at them .

Khanak: shantanu chodiye mujhe. Sab hame dekh rahe hai.

Shan: nahi . jab tak tum mujhe maf nahi karogi mein tumhe nahi chodunga..

Khanak: acha baba maaf kiya . ab to chodiye…..

Shank halke se smile karta and khanak ko chod deta hai. Khanak turns around and luks at shantanu smiling at her..

Khanak(with fake anger ): shantanu ap na kabhi nahi sudhar sakte

Shan: wo to hai. Chalo ab sab theek hai to yeh phool to le lo..

Khanak stared at shantanu angrily and then immediately a smile comes to her face. She took the flowers from his hands .she brings them close to her face and smells them.

Khanak(still admiring the flowers) bahut khubsurat hai..

Shan just smiles at her ..

Khanak( now luking at shan): par shantanu apne mujhe yahan kyun bulaya. Agar gangu bai ne dekh liya to khair nahi..

Shan: pakadne do .aj ka din mein us gangu bai ki wajah se barbad nai hone dunga. Samjhi . ? ………….to chale ????????????

Khanak: par kaha?

Shan: oho khanak kitne sawal puchti ho tum? Chalo to sahi sab pata chal jaega.

Khanak smiles and stats walking with shantanu without any further questions as she knew that shantanu must have planned something special for them and she have to just wait for that……..

Part 5

Khanak : shantanu

Shan: hmmm

Khanak:thankyou

Shan lukes at her..

Shan: thankyou? Kis liye?

( they stop under a tree with no one around on the street)

Khanak: iske liye( she shows him flowers in her hands) aur iske liye ( showing him the ring gifted by him this morning)

Shan( smiles but but to tease her): you are not welcome khanak.

Khanak: ji????

Shan: I said you are not welcome. Aur nahi to kya, meine to itna kuch kiya. Par mera gift kahan hain???????

Khank(smiles): bataiye kya chahiye apko?????

Shan(comes closer to her . he luked down at her lips and says naughtily): ab mujhe kya chahiye , yeh to tum achi tarah janti ho khanak…….

Khanak (realizes immediately what he is asking for and blushes): dhat.

Shan: what dhat khanak. Mujhe mera gift to chahiye khanak.

Khanak raises her eyes and luked at shantanu who was smiling at her naughtily.. she blushes.

Khanak: shantanu . mein aj hamari slgirah par apse kuch kehna chahti hu jo mein kai dino se kehna chahthi thi …..

Shan: kya??????????

Khanak: shantanu mein apse sorry kehna chahti hu…….

Shan(confused): sorry. Kisliye?

Khanak: apke sath meine jo bartav kiya uske liye????????

Shan: khanak , tum yeh kya keh rahi ho meri kuch smajh nahi a raha…

Khanak has got tears in her eyes. But she gathered herself.

Khanak: shantanu jab suraj ki mauthui to meine uska sara ilzam apke sir dal diya. Apko khooni karar diya. Kitna bura bhala kaha apko… yahan tak ki ap par hath bhi uthaya.. par sach to yeh hai shantanu, isme apki koi galti nai thi.. wo to ek hadsa tha jiska hona upar wale ne likha tha.mujheapke sath us tarah pesh nahi ana chaahiye tha… meine apko swarthy, khudgarz , aur kya kuch nai kaha. Lekin ap, apne mere liye kitna kuch kiya … mujh jaisi gawar ko apni zindagi mein apnaya. Mujhe itna pyar diya jitna kisi ko janamo mein bhi naseeb nai hota….isliye meine jo apke sath bura sulukh kiya uske liye mein aj apse mafi mangna chahti hoon…….

Khanak's eyes were full of tears now.. she luked at shan after making her apology and sees that he too has tears in his eyes.

Khanak: kahiye shantanu . kya ap mujhe maf …………..

Shan puts his finger on her lips . khanak didn't speak further. Shan comes closer to her. he wipes khanak's tears.He holds her hands and brings them closer to his heart .

Shan: khanak, tum yeh kya keh rahi ho. Mujhsemafi mang rahi ho, jabki mafi to mujhe tumse mangni chahiye…..

Khanak: nai shantanu . ap mafi mat mangiye.

Shan: nai khanak…suraj ki maut meri laparwahi ki wajah se hui ..meri wajah se tumahari khushiyan tumse chin gai. Lekin phir bhi mein sirf apne bare mein hi sochta raha. Par tum ,……….tum khanak itni achhi ho ki mere itna swarthy hone par bhi tum ne meri jaan bachane ke liye muj se shadi ki…………tum sach kehti thi khanak .mein sachmuch bahut swarthitha, bahut khudgarz tha jo tumahare ehsaano ko samajh hi nai paya…….tumahare sath itni batmizi ki. Khanak, tumhe mafi mangane ki koi zarurat nai hai…. Tumne jo kiya bilkul thik kiya, jo kaha bilkul thik kaha……….

Khanak eyes were full of tears now.

Shan: aur khanak , jahan tak tumse pyar karne ki baat hai , to khanak tum ho hi aisi ki kisiko bhi tumse pyar ho jaye. Tumahari masumiyat, tumahara bholapan, yeh sab mujhe tumahari taraf khinchta hai khanak.. jab bhi tumahari in badi badi ankhon mein dekhta hoon to kahi kho sa jata hoon…… tumahari yeh pyari si hansi dekhkar dil ko ek sukun sa milta hai. Hamesha tumahara hi chehra meri ankhon ke samne ghumta rehta hai……… dil karta hai ki tumhe itna pyar doon , itni khushiyan du ki tumahare ischehre pe hamesha ye hansi barkarar rahe……….

(khanak hugs shantanu tightly . she just realized depth of shantanu's love fir her she felt really lucky to have him in her life)

Shan: waise khanak ., ek bat kahu . tumahara hath hai bahut bhari….. itni zor se thapad marti ho tum

(khanak luked down embarrassed) aur wo bhi teen-teen baar,………

Khanak (confused) : 3 baar?????????????meine to ek hi baar thapad mara tha apko, dhulwadi mein…….

Shan: acha??????aur wo pune ke hotel mein mara thaw o bhul gai…………

Khanak ( remembersthat incident and naughtily) are wo to apne hi kaha tha apne mujhe marne ko. Aur meri bai kehti hai ki achi patniyan apne pati ki koi baat nai talti to mein kaise apka hokum nai manti….

Khanak smiles ..

Shan: acha ji …..tom to aise keh rahi ho jaise tum meri har baat manti ho………….

Khanak: aur nai to kya …………

Shna first glares at khanak but then start laughing ..

Khankak( still laughing): acha , yeh to bas do bar hua …..teesri bar kab mara??????????????

Shan: wohhh………..mere sapne mein…….

Shan luked down embarrassingly

Khanak:kya? Sapne mein??apko , mein sapne mein bhi mein thapad marti thi..??????? (khanak was laughing hard)) pata hai , maine apka naam bilkul sahi rakha hai………."burthal"……….

Shan: oh hello.isme hasne ki kya baat hai?????

Khanak(still laughing): mein.mein to yeh soch kar has hu shantanu ki ap mujhse kitna darte the…..

Shan(little irritated by her laughing): oh. Mein koi tumse data varta nai tha.

Khanak: shantanu yeh dar nai to kya hai ki sapn mein bhi ap mujhse thapad khate the…..

Shan: who to mein bas thida confuse tha.

Khanak: confuse.matlab??????????

Shan: woh mujhe samajh nai a raha tha ki tumhe apne dil ki baat kaise kahoon …mein dar gaya tha ki agar tumhe pata chal gaya ki mein tumse pyar karne laga hoon to kahi tum mujhe chod kar na chali jao…..

(khanak stopped laughing.she luked into his eyeswhich were also serious now…..she put her hand on his face)

Khanak: itna pyar karte the ap mujhse????

Shan: tha nahi , karta hoon khanak aur zindagi bhar karta rahoonga…..

(khanak hugs shantanu tightly with tearsflowing from her eyes)

Khanak(still in his arms and luking into his eyes): shantanu , mein bhi apsebahut pyar karne lagi thi…..ehsaas mujhe bhi tha par pata nai kyu zuban par nai a pata tha…

(shantanu smiled and kissed her on her forhead….they both stayed in each others arms like this)

Khanak(breking the silence):par shantanu , apko aisa kyun laga mein apko yeh sunkar thapad marrongi?????

Shan: to kya karta?tumhe to meri koi value hi nai thi ………ja dekho ya to mera mazak udati rehti thi ya dant ti rehti thi..

Khanak( putting her arms around his neck ) : acha ji . to apko aisa lagta hai???waise sach kahoon…. Ap ho hi pitne ke layak…………. Harkate hi apki aisi hoti hai…………

(khanak moves little back and starts laughing )

Shan(grabs her fromher waist)acha to mein pitne ke layak hoo?????????

(khanak lukes at him , …)

Shan: sharam nai ati tumhe….koi apne pati par hath uthata hai………..

(suddenly guilt strikes khanak…..

khanak (held her ears in her hand):sorry…..

shan (in full nautanki mood showing fake anger on his face) : nahi ….. aise nahi manane wala mein…..

khanak: to mein kya karoon???????

Shan: mujhe kya pata…..tumhe manana hai, tum socho (saying this he turned his face to other side …. Khanak goes in front of him, puts her hand on his cheeks…..she has got a sweet smile on her face)

Khanak( caressing his cheeks says sweetly): bahut zor s mara tha????

( shan nodes his head pouting a little. Khanak lukes around. There was no person around…..she then luked at shan, raises herself on her toes and kisses him on his right cheek…..shan closes his eyes and smiles… he ws surprised a little as he was not expecting this from her but loved the way she always prove him wrong ..he saw khanak blushing but suddenly something strkes him and he immediately changed his expression back to angry one)))))

Khanak ( luking at ground):ab thik hai????

(shan shook his head in no with anger….khanak gets confused but smiles and again raises herself andkisses him on left cheek)

Khanak: ab??????????

( shan shook his head in no again….)

Khanak( frustrate): ab aap hi bataokya karoon???????

(she folds her hand .. shan comes closer to her and holds khanak from her waist and starts staring at her lips. Khanak understood what he was asking and blushed)

Khanak: shantanu. Ap bhi na, kabhi nai sudhar sakte.

Shan: arey ! ek to mein bata raha hoon ki mujhe kaise manao par lagta hai tum manana hi nai chahti.

(she again blushes and moved a step away from him when was pulled hard by him against his hard chest.. she was feeling so shy that she couldn't luk into his eyes?

Shan: kaha ja rahi ho, ha?? Mein abhi mana nai hoo????

Khanak: shantanu chodiye na…..

Shan: pehle mujhe manao to sahi.( he said staring at her lips)

Khanak ( still not meeting eyes with him) shantanu ….meine apko gaal pe thapad mara tha aur uske liye to meine bharpai kar di to mein wahan kyun kiss doon.plz pareshan mat karo..

Shan: khanak , manate samay koi logic nai dhoonda jata.. manane wale ko jo samne wala mange who de dena chahiye……

Khanak(blushing): shantanu, yahan nai , koi dekh lega, plz chodiye na….

( shan after much reluctance lave her only after giving her a peck on her cheeks. She blushed away)))

shan : yeh mat sochna khanak mein man gaya.. apna badla mein baad mein leke rahoonga,samjhi………

( khanak blushes . she did not say anything , just hold his hands and starts walking)

(to be contd)

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hey awsome update yar...after a long time...😃

loved it n next update soon...😊

loved t

it was super cute

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hey u updated after a long time...the update was really nice well i hope u convert this into a ff...plz do so...waiting for next update to find out what both of thm have in store for each other...plz update soon