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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely Update Dear... 😃
update next part soon... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😃Thanks all ur comments.
Part 3

A new morning at Delhi

Khanak woke up and took a bath and went to the kitchenand prepared two cups of tea. she again went to the bedroom to call Shaan. But he was already awake but pretending to be asleep. As soon as she turned to removed the curtain of the window of their room, he pulled her by the waist and she fell into the bed.
Kh:aapne toh mujhe dara hi diya.
Ch:tumhe dar lag raha hai toh tum mere pass aao tumhara dar kam ho jayega.
Shaan pulled her more closer.
Kh: chodiye naa Shaantanu chodiye, subah subah aapka romance shuru ho gaya.
Sh:accha chor dunga pehle ek morning kiss toh dedo.
Kh: dhat...😳
Khanak badly blushed.
Sh: aye haye tum sharmate huye bahut sundar lagti ho.
Khanak pushed him before he could reach and she quickly went to the kitchen to prepared the breakfast.
Shaan also got up and took a bath and came to the dinning table as Khanak has called him for breakfast.

In the dinning table

Kh:kya aaj aap ja raha hai uss music company se baat karne ke liye?
Sh:haan main jaroor jaunga.
Kh;thik hai. Or main bhi soch rahi thi ki main teacher ki naukry dhundhne ke liye aaj hi chali jaun or mujhe jyada pareshani bhi nahi hogi kyunki hamare apartment ke pass ek school hai jahan english or hini subjects padane ke liye ek teacher ki jaroorat hai. Toh kya main jaun?
Sh: kyun nahi jaroor jaon.
Kh: thank u
Sh:thank u to u too kyunki tumhare vajah se mujhe ek chance milne walah hai. Pray karo ki main select ho jaun.
Kh: jaroor jaroor yeh koi puchne wali baat hai.
They both smiled.

After sometime,
Sh: tum ready ho. Derho rahi hai
Kh:haan haan main aa rahi hoon.
Khanak came and Shaan was staring at her coz she was wearing a beautiful saree(imazine the blue saree that she was wearing at iktara song sequence)
Sh:bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho
Kh(blushed):thank u
Sh:toh chale.
They went out of the flat and came near the gate.
Kh:toh this hai main chalti hoon.
Sh:or main bhi.
Kh:humlog dopahar ko milte. BYE
Sh:BYE to u too.

Khanak went to the school and the principal took the interview and she got the post of that teacher. On the other hand, shaan went to that company and the owner told hinm to sing a song. He sang and after hearing his voice, the owner was impressed and gave him a chance to sing a song in an film and also he got an an advanced check of Rs. 1,00,000 and he was feeling very happy

In the afternoon

They came to their flat at 2p.m. and were tired. Both of them sat on the sofa next to each other.
Kh:aaj main bahut khush hoon. Pata hai jis school me main teacher ki naukry ke liye gayi thi wahah mujhe naukry mil gayi or aapki kuch baat hui un logo se?
shaan was happy but pretending to but upset.
Shaan(sad):pata nahi.
Kh:pata nahi...matlab?
Sh:un logo ne kuch nahi bataya.
Then, Shaan took out the envelope from his pocket and gave it to her.
😕Khanak(confused):yeh kya hai?
Sh:kholkar dekho.
When she opened, she became surprised and very happy.
Kh(shouted):aapko gaane ka offer mila hai
Shaan(happy):haan khanak haan.
Shaan lifted her in a joy mood.
At night, they had a candle light dinner in their flat and the day went in a very pleasant way.

Many days passed by in a pleasant manner. Khanak got engaged in her teaching profession and Shaan got involved with his music.

TO BE CONTINUED...
THIS STORY WILL TAKE A LEAP OF SIX YRS. ENJOY READING THIS PART.😊 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sweta,
dont go gayab for 6 yrs..ok..update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i jus read ur ff nw n it iz lovly
its relii relii nyc plzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice ... why 6 years?

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😊Thank u all for liking my ghatiya ss.🤡 Yes this will take a leap coz something interesting will happen after this. I will soon come back with the next part so till then u enjoy urselves.😊😉
Edited by sweta16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i asked u not to go gayab for 6 yrs na??magar lagta hai tum 6 yrs baadh hi update karogi..hmmm..dekhte hain..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi sweta
nice update
continue soon
leap kay liye all the best
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks to all for commentinng on my ss.
Part 4
6 years later
All things got changed in there life even in K mansion. THe business of the khandelwals were going good but not at that high level and Boo gave birth to a boy and naned him Mohit. On the other hand Shaan became a famous singer and Khanak gave birth to twins one a boy and a girl. They named the boy Kavya and the girl Shivangi. Kavya and Shiv were then 4 yrs old and Mohit was 5 yrs old.
Morning at Delhi,
Kh(at her childrens room):tum dono uth jayo subha ho gaye hai aur tum logo ko school bhi ti jaana hai.
She dragged the curtain of the window to let the sun rays fall into the room.
Kav and Shiv woke up but they were laying on the bed and said:mamma hume school nahi jaana.
Kh(annoyed):tum log uthoge ya nahi.
At that time entered the room, and winked at khanak and said: kh tumhe pata hai hum kal picnic pe jayenge.
Kh:kya sach me?. Lekin hum baccho ko ghar pe chor kar jaayenge kyunki woh dono school nahi jaana chahte hai.
The children after listening to there conversation, jumed into the bed
Kavya:nahi papa hum jayenge picnic par.
Suddenly Khanak burst out laughinig and said: hum log juth bol rahe the. And grabbed them from behind in a motherly way. So also Shaan hugged his family.
To be cont...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It's really a sweet story...

Update soon...

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