SS-the truth of confident khanak Note on pg 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣😃😊Hi everyone, I saw yesterday episode and I was very sad and felt like crying, but controlled myself. Then thought of writing a SS on this situation. There are many wonderful writers in this forum but I have tried and hope u all like. If any mistake, pls ignore. So, here it goes------------------------------------





The story start when Sunil shouts at Shaan
Su:Aaj se koyi shaan ki madad nahi karega or use ek bhi paisa nahi milega.
All got shocked and khanak got very angry.😡
Kh:bas ada bas, aap bahut bol chuke hain. Har vaqt aapne unpar ilzam lagaya. Pehle bhi aapne Shaantanu ko kabhi bhi samajh ne ki koshish nahi ki, hamesha se aapne unhe irresponsible or ek rich spoilt brat samajhte rahe. Par main jaanti hoon ki unme bahut talent hai. Main chup rehti hoon iska matlab yeh nahi ki aap maan me aaye wph bolte rahenge. Ab bahut ho chuka or main aapko prove karke dikhaongi ki unme kuch karne ki kaabiliyat hai. Chaliye Shaantanu chaliye.
And she grab his hand and went out of K mansion. All were more shocked by this. Both of them took a taxi and reached the airport and shaan was staring at khanak in shock.
Kh:aise kya dekh rahe hai aap?
Sh:tumne toh mujhe kabhi nahi bataya ki tum itni acchi english ke words bol lete ho.
Kh:iske piche bhi ek raaz hai. Main aapko baad me bataongi, par abhi aap jaye or doh Delhi ke liye tickets lekar aaye.
😕Shaan( in confused):par Delhi kyun?
Kh: kyunki Delhi me maine apne naam par ek flat kharidke rakha hai or hum yahan rahenge.
😲Shaan shocked: tumhare naam par ek flat!!!!!... pa...pa...par kaise.
Kh: pehle hum Delhi toh pahuch jaye uske baad main aapko sab kuch bataongi.
To be continued...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hahahahahaha...Shaan will have a heart attack if this happens...

It wont happen in a MILLION LIGHT YEARS...

It was sooo hilarious when she said I have a flat in Delhi...

What next...She will say I am an Undercover CID agent who was in Dhulwadi with the mission to catch Gabbar ka beta Babbar who had made the life of villagers hell there ????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww this is very interesting khanak ka flat hai delhi mai...continue soon...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i love delhi please continue khanak has got a flat in delhi awesome😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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except for the flat idea which seems a bit far fetched LOL, i like the rest of it. but i don't think something like this is gonna happen. my ideal scenario would be that both shaan and khanak make strong statements and then walk out from the khandelwal house. however, the story is focused only on shaan right now so i doubt very much that khanak would be making a speech like the one you have written. do continue though. interested to see where you take this 😊
Edited by zennnn - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei sweta,
kahani mein bahut saari unexpected things..
khanak speaking out to her aada..
she led him out of the house..
she asked him to get tickets for delhi..her english..
a flat in her name..
poor shaan..bahut bada heart attack mein shaan ab hoga..hum bhi..
tho jaldhi likho na..
kahani ka iss twist ke bare mein dekhna ke liye i'm ready..
update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Haila...

This is a TOTAL Alternate Universe FF...

update soon...would love to see Shaan as a house husband or something...depending on how you want to take it of course...

interesting...


Edited by saaaz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting!
though less chances of happng in d show...i love imaginative stuff!
so continue soon ... :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣

Thanks everyone for ur comments.
Part 2
Their flight took off at 4p.m and they reached Delhi at 6.30p.m. They took a taxi and reached her apartment by7. Khanak opened the of her flat.
Sh:wow tumhara ghar kaafi accha hai
Kh:thank u😊
They came inside and shaan bumped into the sofa
Sh:tum mujhe kuch raaz ke baare me baata rahe the Mumbai me.
Kh:thora patience toh rakhiye main bataongi bataongi...pehle doh cup chai banakar lati hoon uske baad batati hoon.
Sh:jaldi karna.

Khanak went to the kitchen and made two cups of tea. She came to the living room and gave one cup to shaan and another for her. She sat next to him and took a sip of her tea.
Kh:toh main apni kahani shuru karti hoon. Jaise aapko pata hai ki main Dhulwadi ki hoon, us time gaon me ladkiyon ko jyaada parne ki izaazat nahi di jaati thi. Par mujhe ka bahut shok tha. Isiliye main sabse chup chup ke padai karti thi. Lekin jab mere aada or bai ko pata chala tab unse mera jaghda ho gaya or unhone mujhe vada karvaya hai ki main kisiko pata naa chalne du ki main padai karti hoon. Mujhe apne padai complete karne ke liye bahut muskilo ka samna karna pada. Jab meri studies complete ho gayi tab main wahan par chup chup ke social work karne lag gayi. Suraj ko yeh sab maloom chalti hi usne meri madad karna shuru kar diya or hum thora bahut paisa kamane lag gaye. Jab bahut paisa jama ho gaya tab main Delhi me apne naam par ek flat kharid liya taki future me koi problem naa ho. Uske baad maine Suraj ke saath shaadi kar li.

😭Suddenly, her eyes became moist and tears were falling from her eyes. Shaan put his one hand on her shoulder and the other on her face and wiped her tears and hugged her tightly. To lighten up the situation, Shaan spoke.
Sh:are wah meri jhansi ki rani tum toh sach me mahan ho.
😊Khanak slightly smiled and said:kal ko main aap ki vaja se mere aada or bai se kiya huya vada tor di kyunki❤️ main aapse bahut pyaar karti hoon.
Sh:main bhi tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon.❤️
And both smiled looking at each other.
Kh: woh sab choriye aapke music ke baare me kuch sochte hain. Maine suna hai ki yahan ek music company hai jo itna bhi bhi famous nahi hai. Par fir bhi aap ek baar try karke dekh sakte hai.
Sh: tum thik kehe rahi ho main ek baar try kar sakta hoon.
Kh: toh kaal subha koshish kijiye or main bhi soch rahi hoon ki main koi teacher ki naukri kar loon kyunki mujhe baccho ko padhana accha lakta hai or waise bhi main ghar par bathe bathe bore ho jaongi.
Sh: thik hai meri jhansi ki rani jaise aap kahe.
Both of them laughed.

After that, khanak prepared the dinner and took it with shaan and went to sleep coz they were feeling tired.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Note:pls don't compare this SS with the show coz this is only an imagination of mine.
Thank u and enjoy reading.😃 😳😃🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its so sweet sweta..
i'm thrilled reading it..

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