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Posted: 14 years ago
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Di u lied 2 me...u said u'l update 2mrow...
not saying dat i.m not happy dat u updated..
i.m super duper duper duper duper HAPPY dat u did...bt still...had i not checked d forum just now...i wud have slept widout reading it..kitna loss ho jata na mera...socha apne..
*crying*...
love u loads...Disha
*runs 2 read* :D:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey di , πŸ€— ( a big hug for this update )

but dont tell pls its the end now in next update 😭

@ update :

loved it

khanak come to jai room and asked her mom that she is going to meet shaan , needs real courage but she did it πŸ‘πŸΌ , but still ma didnt talk to anyone , i like Mr. sharma's reaction, he is super cool dad , and jai ,😍 what to say about this man yaar , he is just genius, loved him sooo much , no matter whatever happens with his life but still , he always try to keep his sister happy 😊

shaan and madhavi's convo was again superb and heart touching πŸ‘ , penned it beautifully

now our beloved shanak 😍 , whenever they r going to meet alone , i dont know y i become excited 😳 , ( what will i do if i would go some time in near future with my would be πŸ˜† , )

their car convo and cute sweet talk is droll worthy just no word other than "MADE FOR EACH OTHER " 😳 😳

and ur description of place and theater , seems to be so calm and quite point 😍 nothing could be perfect for them other than this , and than with shanak in hand in hand is 😍 droll worthy seen , so lovely couple and shared everything with each other whatever they felt ,


He lowered himself to bend near the level of her eyes, and whispered, "Hmm''' that's not a lie'''' I feel happy when I see you smiling''..I feel sad when you are sad'''I feel like laughing when you make faces'''..I feel helpless when you cry''''I feel lonely when you are not around''..I feel ecstatic when you praise me'''I feel jealous when I see you with someone else''''..I feel angry when you don't listen to me and insist on behaving immature'''I feel satisfied when you say that you are fine''..'. And I feel'''"

"Scared when I scream'??" she added.

"Of course!" he laughed again and added, "''' and I feel out of my control when you look pretty''." He whispered leaning for a kiss.

But was shocked at her shocked face''

"What ?" he asked.

"What do you mean by 'when you look pretty''''..????"

"I mean'''''when you are dressed up'''.no, you always look pretty sweetheart, but I just wanted to ''''.. I didn't mean that''''it hardly matters ''''." He was speechless'..

"Tell me'''..explain''''what you meant?"

"I mean, I am always out of control with you''''.duffer."

"Thanks'." She blushed.

"Now give me a kiss'.."

"Go''''.get lost !!"


awesome beautiful and heart touching description πŸ˜³πŸ˜πŸ‘

it seems we feels every emotions with them 😳

ok so now rishabh is going to engage , wow and i dont understand did shaan wants to talk to her at the party 😲 ,


, even i decided the same venue for shanak engagement 🀣

, so now khanak dragged him to her home , πŸ‘ waiting for next part 😍

P.S. do some justice with jai , he should start walking and get engaged engaged with ragini , he is so lovable , he should deserve some justice before this beautiful tale comes to an end and we left with some sympathy for jai ,


love u

suchi


Edited by suchi_245 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
What !

Is this the last part !

Thats so unfair :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
mani awesome dear..
so it is over kya??
write an epilogue mani..
i so so so loved the update..
will comment on both the parts tomoro dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey di , πŸ€—

awesome πŸ‘

loved each and every thing

love about the thoughts of ragini and her positive reactions πŸ‘β­οΈ πŸ‘πŸΌ nothing could be more perfect than this and was so touching moment 😭 ,

Lovely jai got ragini and that too with the permission of elders 😳

so my apprehension was correct , i knew that after reading shaan's letter , ma was moved and that is y she was angry with them 😊

loved their emotional convo 😭

and finally shanak got green signal 😳 , so waiting for this moment but u ended the part their itself 😭 😭

and last our shanak together in car and cute masti by khanak 😳 😍 this girl is something , i never knew it that i will ever like any female protagonist in any story more than male but ur trespro khanak really did it and what savita said ::

"Now, that you are fond of tolerating torture with sealed lips''..you will continue the trend''''..Promise me that you will happily endure the tantrums of my little girl without complaining'''."

He took a while to understand and when everyone smiled, he just hugged Savita, "I promise, Ma''... I will behave like a gentleman'''will never complain'.'." ☺️ 😍 so perfect

will always miss ur tresspro shanak and jai ragini and savita mom and madhavi anty and akshay and samir and Mr.sharma 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭


πŸ‘ πŸ‘ * A standing ovation to u *


😭 will always miss tresspro as the journey with it from april - aug ( i started reading it from april ) is soo beautiful as , i know how much i waited for its update each day , but will be always their close to my heart 😳 and also because of its good story and awesome and matured characters and it also gives some values towards the life ⭐️ πŸ‘πŸΌ

love u a lot πŸ€—
suchi
😭
Edited by suchi_245 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for this lovely fic...m sad dat its over...ur an amazing writter...please if possible start another fic...bcuz ur writting and ideas are fantastic...all dese fics keep shanak alive and we really miss them...
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Posted: 14 years ago
πŸ‘πŸΌbeautifully ended.
congrats manita for completing the FF succesfully and so brilliantly written leaving the story in our memory for ever.
congrats once again,
gud work well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
but what should i do from tomorrow ???????????/😭😭😭😭😭😭
love,
sumitha😊
Edited by ashwanth - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Mani Di

Awesome …..fantastic…..loved the update πŸ‘ ⭐️ πŸ‘ ⭐️ πŸ‘ ⭐️ πŸ‘ ⭐️

But it was a end of the Trespro πŸ˜­β€¦..sorry for being childish but I cried while writing comments for the last updates couldn't control my self as I am more than attached to you & Trespro & it is the first Story I have read & after I connected my self here.😭 I have so many memories with this FF. when I came to know about the forum I just used to visit Ym & Kt profiles but one name always used to attract me a lot & i.e. "Trespassers Prohibited" I actually avoided reading it a lot but one day I couldn't hold my self & I started reading the FF when u have campleted 23 parts of it.😊 Than I read full 23 updates in one go & after than was enjoying as a silent reader for a long period. & again "TresPro" Played important role in my life.😊 I created my account coz u have deleted the previous parts. But I was lucky to get connected to forum as I met you here. Thank u Di for everything.πŸ€—*sigh* sorry I am getting too emotional to write ……Plz Bear with me as this is gonna be long.😳

I think I should stop my self otherwise I'll never be able to update my reply for last two parts. Again beautiful Mani Di. πŸ‘ Just awesome.⭐️ Thank u for proving me wrong. I sincerely apologize to doubt your creativity.πŸ˜‰ Well I am saying this coz when I came to know that u are finishing this in 3 updates I was worried & thought how will you be able to finish this story? as there is lot more to happen. & actually worried that it should be having a Rushed & Abrupt end? but you proved me wrong & thank u so much for this fantastic & sensible end.πŸ‘ It wasn't rushed & abrupt at all. I am sorry 😳 *kaan pakad ke sorry* 😳

Part 49 was awesome & part 50 was just fabulous u have summed up all the emotions in these two parts πŸ‘ πŸ‘ there was Love, there was Anger, there was romance, there was Sadness, there was care, there was happiness & lot more. But all was blended brilliantly with the magic of your words & love.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ It made me cry & smile. Well I was confused after reading & not able to judge my self to know that whether I was crying coz of Emotional part of the update of because of The Ending of my love "Trespassers Prohibited" I think I better shut up otherwise I'll not be able to hold my self. Frankly I took a long break before reply to the update as I was unable to believe the end though I have prepaired my self for it.😳

Finally About Part 49

Thanks a ton as all the confusions & constant questions played in mind get solved because of this update.😊 Khanak is ready to meet shaan she is all set to leave but wanted to talk to Ma to tell her that she is going to meet Shaan. She gathers courage & told Ma About the same. But she refuse to respond,πŸ˜’ infect she is still angry (frankly her comments made me upset) but finally Mr. Sharma spoke….(loved his timing) & glad to know that he has no objection in relationship of Shaan & Khanak.πŸ˜‰ Loved Bro-Sis convo. Both are worried about Ma & her behaviour as she is not talking to any of them. But Khanak is confident that she will talk to shaan. Loved the way she explain Jay about it. Loved their love, bonding, & little teasing game. Jay is actually a best bro.πŸ‘πŸΌ

Madhavi has came to meet Shaan. She told him every thing happened at Sharma Residence. Also she told him that she gets to know all about him & Khanak from Akshay.😲 She apologizes to shaan as she is regretting her behaviour to her kids in their teen age. Her words her sentences were having so much pain I seriously felt bad for her.😭U described it beautifully Di.πŸ‘ Loved the way shaan handles her. He is simply superb. Sacchi koi itna mature aur sensible ho sakta hain? πŸ˜•

Finally Khanak & Shaan met after 15 days.😊 Both are extremely happy to see other. U described their expressions beautifully that made us Smile Thank u.😊loved their Car Convo shaan was enjoing her talk infrount of him as he has missed it badly in last 15 days.😳 Finally they find a peaceful place to sit. He tells her about why his Mom was there at her place. & becames little sad that Ma has forgive Mom but she is not ready to forgive him. Loved Shaans concern for Ma. He immediately senses there is something different because of which Ma is Disturbed & upset.πŸ˜• They thought abt every possible option. Loved Shaans reaction when he came to know abt Ma has read his letter.😳

Shaan decided to talk to Ma. Shaan says he will talk to Ma on Saturday, he even informs about Rishabh & Soniya getting engaged (well congratulations to themπŸ₯³) loved Khanaks reaction on it.πŸ˜‰ Loved each & every word of their convo. & their teasing. You have amazingly described it Di.πŸ‘ Khanak wanted Shaan to talk to Ma today but Shaan is nervous. Finally Khanak takes him to her place.😍

Loved each & every bit of it Di,,,,,,,U are awesome di. πŸ‘ ⭐️ πŸ‘ ⭐️ πŸ‘ ⭐️ πŸ‘ ⭐️

About final Part 50

Both entered in the house, Jay & Ma gets Shocked to see him there.😲he tries to talk to Ma inspite of her protest. Their convo was very touchy.πŸ˜’ Jai is a sweet heart he tries to interrupt her & gets their side but Ma didn't allow him to speak.πŸ˜” Finally Ma was about to talk her worries to Shaan but Ragini came. With everyone even I was surprised to see her. She has left her Home as her parents wants to send her to New Zealand. So that she will not be able to meet Jai. Poor girl I really felt bad for her. Loved the way Mr. Sharma & Ma talked to her. They make her understand the situation. Khanak is finding similarities in Shaan & Jai in this situation also. Frankly I find it funny. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Felt Bad after reading Raginis condition.😭 Madhavi got to know about Ragini from Shaan. & finally Raginis & Shaans parents came to Sharmas house, Their convo with Ragini made me Cry.😭 It was damn touchy u have written it so well aisa lag raha tha jaise such mein chal raha ho sab kuch mere samne. Apke labzo ne Jaan bhar di thi kirdaaro mein.😍 After listning to Ragini her parents melts & Gives permission for Jai & Raginis marrage. Loved Sunil & Madhavi for convincing Rags Parents. Loved Ragini & her each & every word. I can so imagine how jai must be feeling. 😊

Every one was happy for jai & Ragini but Ma was still not talking to Shaan.πŸ˜’ Jai noticed it. Madhavi goes to Ma & talked to her. She again apologizes for her Mistake. But Ma thank her & both ladies went out their pain infrount of each other.😭 & Finally Ma broke down & lets her pain out her words her gestures made me cry I was feeling numb. i cant even begin to imagine what you must've felt writing... Shaan Khanak & Jai Ask for the forgiveness 😊 & Ma finally gives permission for Shaan & Khanaks relationship. Loved her dialogue there she is a Rockstar smiley

Aye….haye I feel like dancing …… "Dukh Bhare Din Beete Re Bhaiya……. Ab Sukh Aayo Re….Ab Sukh Aayo Re"

Ma Ask Shaan to meet Khanak if he wants,Ma is also teasing him now. πŸ˜‰ Shaan hesitates & decides to go home. Poor guy half heartdly leaves from there. πŸ˜” Wonders about his car keys & knows that he has forget to lock the car.😳 U know for the first time in your FF this is happening other wise he is so particular & I always loved your detailing πŸ‘ that he switched car lights & Ac off before locking the car.& also about he removes his slippers before settling on the bad.πŸ˜† I mean you have always given us the every little detailing. Which has made this FF real & it had never sounded Fake.πŸ‘Khanak gives him the best surprise by hiding in his car Loved their Car Convo.😍 & Specially their "Sweetheart" & "jerk"

Loved the end. A perfect ending with perfect lines.πŸ‘ I am feeling so much pain to write the word End first time in my life.😭 Loved the line πŸ‘ U Rock Di πŸ‘πŸΌ

"Trespassers are once again Prohibited' ……but in this relationship !! We'll stay together………."

Hats off to you……


Please came soon. πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

Love U ❀️

Pranjal.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Maani,

Is this the end?????? Loved the way Savita's emotions come out.

nahi I want the marriage, SR, everything yaar ... bache bhi if possible, they will be such awesome parents na.

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww...:)
I.m in love...truly in love wid Happy Endings...n dis was d happiest ending ever...
All thru d reading my expressions were changing every second...happy-sad-happy-sad-happy-sad-n den after savita talked to shaan n khanak...it was HAPPIEST :):) n den it remained happy
I.m so so so so happy for jai n ragini...dey really deserved 2 b together...lovers r always meant 2 saath saath...circumstances don.t matter...just d love does...
I got so sad when savita said she was a lousy mom...she's d bst mom ever n even den she felt so terrible about herself...
Bt finally everything went sooo good...<3...
Thank u di for giving me trespassers prohibited...thank u for d wonderful write up...thank u for d immense love...:) i.m really grateful 2 u...
D day i first read trespassers prohibited i didn't know i'l become so attached 2 it dat its end wud pain me like hell...reading d last part made me immensely happy coz of d HAPPY ending n at d same time it make it cry coz of d END...dis is one d most lovely things i.ve read n more dan read...i.ve felt in my entire 18 years...words fail 2 tell how much i love this FF n how much i love u for writing it...
Will miss ur shanak terribly...bt dey'l always stay in my hr8 no matter wat...:)
Keep writing...keep rocking...
Ur FF hasn't just been a piece of work or write up for me...its been more..much much more...
N as dey say...i.l not b sad coz it ended...i'l b happy coz it happened...thanks for d happiness u've brought in my life...wil b indebted 2 u...
I know i.ve said it b4...bt i don.t mind repeatin myself...
Di...u'l always b someone i'l look up 2...i respect n admire u a lot...though i don.t know y exactly i do...may b its bcoz u're a very good person...i felt it everytime i talked 2 u...i really adore u a lot...:)n ur write up's have inspired me a very positive way..:)
Try not 2 forget me...
N even if u do...i will never forget u..:)..
Love u loads...muaaah
Disha
Be bak with trespassers prohibited 2 soon:) i'l wait
...
Edited by loveindair - 14 years ago

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