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Originally posted by: RB81

hei..
mani never said abt dropping her work..
may be she took break..
but all of us never let her get that thought na..
so dont say like that minnu.

Hey i dint mean that i was just afraid of loosing

i dint mean to hurt any one

kya kaoo aaj kal forum pehi dependent hoon afraid of loosing forum friends

hei mani,
where r u??
u ditched the date u promised to attend..
thread is so suna..jaldhi aao cinemas pe..

Mani Di,

Mani di... Where are you...😔

PART 44

Fantastic manita

Poor souL staying away from each other so nuthin is obvious to others.

He even hesitated to sit beside her. I actually liked his discomfort this shows his respect for savita and his immense luv for her and her family and as wall was fear of losing her.

Really nice conv between they… of course a mother can read it all and they ay u've ppned shows his nervousness and respect while talking to her.

Gud rishab and sonya ar getting along very well.

She can still fell his presence in her room. No doubt the moment spent in Mumbai are the one to be cherished whole life.. Aww the old insecurities are back there. They both fear to lose each other and they really can't afford to lose.

She was crying and just like true luv shd be there he called her.

Luved the conv… it had all the emotions… luv, fear, tension, happiness, calmness, sad moments.

Very right their moments of bliss always had a lot of pain also but the deal with all coz of their immense love.

No matter he was dreading the thought of being separated from her, all that was heart wrenching he didn't knew wht he'll say to savita but he always figure out sumthing to make her calm.

He has already decided he'll tell her if needed that they luv each other. Man they are still arguing that savita luvs his more.

My fav part… she acts mature and calm him by assuring she'll always be by his side.

"I'll convince them………….that I can't be living with them forever…….I have to go someday……………. I have to leave my parents and live with my husband whenever I get married. So, if I have to spend my life with someone, away from them, it is better that he be a person whom I choose …….. But ……….it will be difficult for you…….."

Then wht he said was beautiful I was reading it again and again

He paused for a second and then spoke confidently, "I have once taken a decision favoring them. I had left my love for my family and the six years which went by were difficult…….very difficult………it was a torture……….I don't have strength……….. to do that again……..."

She has really gone through a tough phase of life widout him and so as he.

They are real jerk and sweetheart but no jerk or sweetheart can be so cute.

You kissed me today………three times in a row………how can you be a jerk?"

"OMG !! I was thinking the same………..I had 'you' with me today, in a washroom…… and I 'just' kissed you………that too 'only' 3 times……….I am such a 'jerk'."

Super cute manita.

Their convo has always make me smile … ur writing make me smile.

PART 45

Superb

Awww.. the lovebirds cant sleep due to obvious reasons

Khanak is in more trouble… she woke up late , excuses for not joining rishab's office, then her bros teases her for getting married… and then again getting jealous that savita loves shaan more… which is the fun element to discuss.

Aww nervous he hasn't come yet.

Shanak convo was super cute….

Daffodils to bribe, rose for his love, kiss as a reward and when he said kids kiss on the cheeks grow up…. Super cute moments.

The one who is always calm is really nervous.

The conv between shaan and savita was very emotional touching…. U've penned the scene beautifully.

It shows respect. guilt, love, concern almost every emotion… I tried really hard to control my tears.

The way he felt sorry for wht he did then assured her that it won't happen again. He'll not do anything that will raise ques on his upbringing defending his love. Then getting more nervous on why she doesn't want shaan and khanak to be together but they really share a lovely bond she talked to him and told him everything.

Now every1 know abt who is responsible for jai's accident but didn't make it evident due to jai's recovery or whatevers issues ….. he still feels the pain though he hasn't done anything wrong,

Wen he said: Ma I never said that someone is not Khanak………… I actually felt proud of him.

PART 46

The most emotional update mani

I could actually feel the pain he was going through…. the person he luved and respect his MA is walking away from him and telling him he could have avoided …..i felt like running and hug shaan.

But khanak was there ti hold him support him….. they both cried he was sorry abt telling ma and she was proud of him.

U always write in such a way that we can imagine that believe it was one of the most beautiful scenes I've seen till now.

Wen he said I could have avoided she said it was my fault and she felt he is repenting and will leave her and then he saw her crying and told her that he'll never leave her side and the hug it was awesome.

He left and she kept sitting on terrace .

The jai and khanak scene a very emotional part again…. She cried her heart out and he consoled her in each possible way and the whole story abt ragini….. I really felt bad that a guy like him is not sure abt his future though rags love him.

The reason he has asked them to keep quite was unbelievable….. he is still calm and behaving normally not wanting anything thing toi destroy shanak's realtion though he is is hurt his family I hurt coz of madhvi and then rag's parents reaction.

He was stunned that ma doesn't approve of their relationship yet he consoled her and assured he is with her. This time that silly crazy khanak acted really mature by saying that she'll be with shaan in whateves is his decision… even if he leaves her coz of ma.

She waited for his call and still kne he's not going to call but then "RING RING"

At an instant I started smiling again…. He kept his promise and said that he'll call her everynite and when he said that "the last call before we sleep is sumthing I will never stop" man I was glowing wid glee but 'ving tears in my eyes… she realized he was upset to call but he said I need u how can I stop talking….. ur writing reflects the immense love between them.

Its coz of u I realized that love is pure bliss yet it gives u lot of pain. I was choked

PART 47

Awww I feel so bad for shaan the one who used to be cal at all situations is not able to handle them coz he always looked upto savita for guidance and khanak and now he cant talk to them both and the worst part he is upset coz savita is upset and doesn't approve of them and he can't talk to his mom even… the one person we always look upto in every situation.

He recalled all the moments of past with savita and jai… it was beautiful.

Finallly akshay was there they had a superb conv he must 've felt better I did… I was feeling much better.

Where he said that he'll never leave khanak and the all out station deals must be handled by akshay I started feeling light hearted and the best part wen he said the company will suffer if we will go out together…. I juz luved it.

Even wen he was so upset he called his luv talked to her consoled her … he was embarrassed himself but make her feel better relax joked a little and showed hi fake anger make her understand the situation so she can gather courage and talk to ma… which is the most imp and most difficult thing to do for now.

I luved the part where he said start crying she will melt….. he always act calm no matter how stressed he is but juz for his sweetheart he acts strong and a reak mature guy…. the perfect guy.

PART 48

One word prefect

Lovely conv between shanak

I liked the way jai talked to savita and make her understand… chalo she needs time

I was touched the way khanak talked to her make her understand… when she showed her the letter I actually felt like crying by rem the pain they both 've gone thru for the six yrs

Loved it when she said that I cant blv shaan cheated u.

Its nice tha mr.shrama knows abt it may be it turns out to be a gud point for shanak

The last conv on fone was superb

Each and every line made me smile….. loved each and every bit of it.

Hey Mani di :) How r u??????

jess looks like mani granted u wat to say..its not wish..i so sgort of words now-a-days..budthal ho gayi hun mein..but u can understand wat i'm conveying..
mani didnt update on saturday..u were feeling bad for updating on saturday na..till now she hasnt updated..hope she'll update by midnight..as far the cinemas too everyone ditched it..i did solo talking there n i left the theater feeling bored n watched it for myself..
mainly mani promised to be there n fixed it as date..but she ditched it big time..sab ko kya ho raha hai patha nahin..
ani am i spamming ur thread??😕😕😕
but htis is for u too..so dont think as spamming..

Di aaj update milega kya?...n happy friendshpday

hey mani di , 🤗

any update ??????