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Posted: 14 years ago

#371

poor things...dooriyan inka middle name jaise bangaya hai...

and this jay and keeping secret business needs to be known...

kahin he doesnt have someone already? and that is in progress so this should wait? batao batao...

next update soon please!

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nk.mail

@nk.mail

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#372

Mannu di!

Ye kya?!

Pehle Shaan bimar, then Khanak's nosy cousin, ab offi ka kaam

Sigh

I jus cant wait for them to get married now! 😳

At least sath to rahenge 😆

They r the cutest couple man

Love them like nythin n love YOU for creatin them! 😊

Love

Neha

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#373

I am so sorry for not commentin di...

waiseee, again separation :(

6 saal se dil nahi bhara aapka? Kroor insaan😡

Khair.

I like Jai :D Cool hai :D

The fact that he is protective abt her but lets her take her decision...imposing nahi hai :D

Alsooo the last line was toh killer. Total Killer.☺️

hopeless romantic :P

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purvi08

@purvi08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#374

nahinnn

pehle 6 years and now office work .zaalim duniya😭.

loved the conversaation between jai and shaan.

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#375

oh..its awesum mani..waiting 4 their relatuionship goes newer step...

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khushi

@khush1432

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Posted: 14 years ago

#376

Awesome update mani di...

Loved jai and shaan convo... its sooo real...

sorry for late reply as i was nt in town.. sat night ven u update this part... pa was in ma room... so can't read dis part late night... and yesterday i was nt in town... mujhe hi pata hai yeh ek-ek pal meine kaise gujara...

Love U

Gunjan

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jyothi1989

@jyothi1989

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#377

gosh i hate this they have to apart for such a long time and they havent met for one week ye zalim duniya every time comes in between them i so hateee it that girli wanna kill her because of her my poor babies are not able to meet .sighs loved there desperation to meet each other and finallly they meet .thank god for this .and the entire covo with jai was really well etched thank god jai didnt react to it otherwise .loved it waiting for the next one dear u left me hanging

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Disha

@loveindair

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#378

di update kab karoge aap...jaldi kariye na...love disha

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#379

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 majboori ke liye...

😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 peechle 2 updates ke liye...

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 sigh.. beautiful likhne ke liye...

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 ... mere intezaar ke liye...

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#380

hi manita di,

😊(i just love ur name...& can i plz call u di) 😊

hey di i am a slient reader of ur ff & also a big fan of ur writing. i always read ur ff from the cell phone, as i stay in hostail... & dont have internet facility.i just love ur writing. u create magic by ur updates. ur updates of this ff is biggest strees buster of mine since last 3 mths. coz when i feel stressed

i read ur update

i re-read ur update

i re-re-read ur update

until u post the next part... & ur shanak are the cutest. the perfect couple. they are just ouf of the world. shaan is the perfect gentleman & khanak is the most sweetest. just love shaan & jays friendship. i also love madhavi i was thinking ki agar madhavi inti sweet hain to khanak ki mom to super cute hogi. the shanak are super adorable, but yaar bicharo ko hamesha juda juda rehna padta hain. yaar plz dont send shaan abroad leaving khanak ( waise bhi bichaareo ke pass 2 hi to mahine bache hain).

special request ... yaar plz plz plz koi tikdum laga kar ke ya to dono ko saath mein bhejdo, ya phir kisi ko bhi mat bhejo. & plz update regularly as we wait for it coz jab mrm ka update aata hain lakin iska nahi aata to bura lagta hain.😭 😭this is a masterpeace so plz isko khatam karne ki sochna bhi mat.😡

the best part of the privious update was shaan & jays convo. & also when shaan enters the technical dept she was extermly awre of him still She did not turn back to look at him. just to avoid gossips. coz they both care a lot about each others reputation. u know when i finished reading this part i immidiately remember the song

⭐️"chup chaap karti hain baatien jab teri yeh khamoshiyaan,

chup chaap sunte hain dil ki halki halki sarghoshiyaan.

bachain si har saas hain, anjaana sa ehsaas hain"⭐️

and as always the last line was killing. but bade galat waqt par rok diya. haayla maine to pura essay hi likh diya. so aapko pakane ke liye extermly sorry. & plz update coz

we want update

love u

pranjal.

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