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Sonyaa ... WHOA .. This was a Surprise !!!!
You Caught us there !!!!!
LMAOO .. Nice Onee...

Awww They ARE SO MADE for EACH OTHER ...
They Just know EACH OTHER ... They Just KNOW it .. *drools*

I will put a KALA TIKA on them .. Kisiki Nazar na Lage ...

ThankYou for Making Madz a supportive Mother ... I am sure she would be a great MIL !!!!!!

24 hours without a phonecall ... I am sure tat would have been the worst time till date !!!!!!
Awww Shanak are Cho Endearing ... So much in Love ...
Flirting is part and parcel of being Shantanu :D :D :D


Manitaa .. You Rock !!!!
Truly !

Love You Loadsss ... MRM and TresPro - One of the BEST !!!!

mani no1 like u in writing n nothing like yr ff...i cant just cant wait to read d next part...

yr writing is reality to me:)

OH MY GOD,
this one is the awesome
😍🤗
really cant even imagine that some stranger would come to meet him but actually i imagined that zarine or may be some office people would be there
but u r just fab and awesome and ...,...i dont have words , u better understand by urself as u writer u have more words to describe😊

🤗
and plz plz plz next update soon , cant wait to see , when these two hearts meet after 24 hours , how do they react and do and all...😉. , awe , despirately waiting for next update but will not pester u , u take ur time , till then i will dwroll😍 and re- read this part 🤗

Originally posted by: RB81

aww..it seems like i wont sleep now..

read a hot teaser from simi..

now u updated..

*off to read*

will comment tomoro..

*edited*

mani tusse gr8 ho..

never expected someone else other than sunavi r samir to be at the door..

u rock girl..as u said..this is a surprise for each n everyone of us..

i was as surprised as shanak to see sonyaa..did we not ask u to pair her up with rishabh..

now atleast u do that..as she too knows abt shanak now..

wonderful update mani..

pakka..i'll comment tomoro in another post..

(today again everyone of u got coordinated..jess,simi n u..saaz too..will comment tomoro for all the 4 updates..)

ya perfect for rishabh

Ramani and Suchi...

here you are correct...Bang on !! I have thought her to be correct for Rishabh !!😉...all of them gonna rock in Delhi 😃!!!

Manitaa...

Love you re .. Really !

hey manidi, superb update itna bda update itni bdi length dekhkr man khush ho jata hai...
the convo between shanak is very romantic...shaan bimarimebhi khanak ko pareshan krta rhata hai..1mauka nahi chodta khank ko embars krne k liye..naughty naughty shaan 😳
n by d way khi ye surprise sonya ko lekar nahi na... sunavi sonya ko shaan k sath setng to nhi na krnewale?oh god!meri khanak ka kya hoga...
n then muze acha lga k shaan directly khta hai k khanak uski gf hai...very smart..
aur samir har wakt shaan ki tang khinchta rhta hai... 😆 ...ab khanak shaan ko milne aa rhi hai...usko dekhte hi shaan ka fever furrr
manidi u r great...awesm update

Originally posted by: -Manita-

Ramani and Suchi...

here you are correct...Bang on !! I have thought her to be correct for Rishabh !!😉...all of them gonna rock in Delhi 😃!!!

really 😃
didnt i tell u that u r just fab darling 🤗
and i like this part because he started calling her darling and she for the first time i think called him sweetheart 😉
and plz get well him soon so that his parents go away and these two cuteepies can enjoy their 2 months shanti se before going to delhi
well y i m feeling that all of them means jai - ragini too 😉

awww mani di...dil khush kar diya aapne ur the best ff write i haev evr seen...omg this is awsoem update...shnank r daorable...btw that fevre thing reminds me of soemone*ahem ahem*...love the first paart wer she lay condition to fed him he he no kiss eh drank the sup by himself ohhh hes adorable and then she gets angry on him cuz he leaves her ha ha she super cute...and she cries for him and plzy with his hairs and she sllelps on his lap and how she dint wnat to go and he dint wnat tolert her go atht wa scutest part yaar...and then ther phone call covo ...samir teasing shaan ha ha madhvi caught them shann is soadorably naguty his sick and callingher motherand siter seriouly he knws how to pull her leg...agian remids me of somone *ahem ahem*...now she gone meet him tahs gone be awsome...mani ther ar lots of cute mont nt to forgot abt that girl i forgot her name he eh...shann tells her thy r couple...khank getting jelaous love the wya he teasd her