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hei mani,
atlast ur 15 min over..will be back to comment..i read it once mani..loving it..wish shaan wins..but i dont blame khanak for rejecting that thought..as this is FF i'm with shaan else i would be with khanak..i'll leave lengthy comments tomoro..i want to read it again..
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felt happy they planned to party with samir n jass..the way shaan expressed himself with "Gosh ! ……what have you done to me?" he spoke frustratingly this comment was nice..i was smiling like khanak n enjoyed it..damn the traffic when he was abt to express his feel after her bubbly laughter..khanak expressing her fear for he doing all just for her..oh god..too touchy..but shaan's reply to this was very much right than her fear..
i loved shaan's therapy to admit her to his house..the way he asked her to come n stay with him was nice..n how desperately he suggested that either one shift to the other's building..i felt like shaan already missing khanak a lot..wat will happen when they go back to delhi..cant blame shaan for asking her to stay with him..both of them r justified with wat they decided..really its difficult to let the other down..so mani..u better come up with a good solution..the solution should by no means hurt each other..samjhi tum?
really i was also shocked just like shaan n khanak that samir n jass broke up..the way they talked with him was actually nice..hope they give it a 2nd chance..may be jass could miss samir when he was not near...
shaan calling khanak at midnight n asking khanak "You won't leave me like that, nah……….will you?" was just killing..even though he knows that she wont leave her the insecurity caused was too much..felt like hugging him to assure don't worry baby..i'll be with u just like khanak felt..
when they met in the restaurant in evening n his answer for being late n this "Previously, we used to spend these 40 minutes together in the traffic." killed me again..shaan is such a sweetheart..then they spending time together in beach n thinking abt wat'll they do once they go to delhi n again shaan asking her to shift to his house..really its difficult to say no when someone asks like the way shaan does..loved the lover's 1st tiff..however felt sad too for them..the way she tried to manofy shaan was nice..he must have tried real hard not to give up..however at point she was to succeed but shaan came back to angry mode n loved their challenge abt 48 hrs duration to manofy him..n his conditions for that was oh god,this man is chanceless..as far as he remembered his weakness he gave that as conditions that she should not do..poor khanak eager to know wat she'll do..as i said being in khanak's shoes i dont want her to shift to shaan's house however here shaan is dominating by at least a %..so i want her to shift with him..so i'm eager for the next update to know their challenge result..
PS: u pls update before 48 hrs ok?n acc. to vatty's task n my request u were supposed to update daily..r u free now to some extent..dont tell lie that u r super busy to escape from updating..i so wish that u get free time to give us the update..but this was pretty long update..thanks for that honey..MMMwwwaaa..🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗u r a sweetheart..
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felt happy they planned to party with samir n jass..the way shaan expressed himself with "Gosh ! ……what have you done to me?" he spoke frustratingly this comment was nice..i was smiling like khanak n enjoyed it..damn the traffic when he was abt to express his feel after her bubbly laughter..khanak expressing her fear for he doing all just for her..oh god..too touchy..but shaan's reply to this was very much right than her fear..
i loved shaan's therapy to admit her to his house..the way he asked her to come n stay with him was nice..n how desperately he suggested that either one shift to the other's building..i felt like shaan already missing khanak a lot..wat will happen when they go back to delhi..cant blame shaan for asking her to stay with him..both of them r justified with wat they decided..really its difficult to let the other down..so mani..u better come up with a good solution..the solution should by no means hurt each other..samjhi tum?
really i was also shocked just like shaan n khanak that samir n jass broke up..the way they talked with him was actually nice..hope they give it a 2nd chance..may be jass could miss samir when he was not near...
shaan calling khanak at midnight n asking khanak "You won't leave me like that, nah……….will you?" was just killing..even though he knows that she wont leave her the insecurity caused was too much..felt like hugging him to assure don't worry baby..i'll be with u just like khanak felt..
when they met in the restaurant in evening n his answer for being late n this "Previously, we used to spend these 40 minutes together in the traffic." killed me again..shaan is such a sweetheart..then they spending time together in beach n thinking abt wat'll they do once they go to delhi n again shaan asking her to shift to his house..really its difficult to say no when someone asks like the way shaan does..loved the lover's 1st tiff..however felt sad too for them..the way she tried to manofy shaan was nice..he must have tried real hard not to give up..however at point she was to succeed but shaan came back to angry mode n loved their challenge abt 48 hrs duration to manofy him..n his conditions for that was oh god,this man is chanceless..as far as he remembered his weakness he gave that as conditions that she should not do..poor khanak eager to know wat she'll do..as i said being in khanak's shoes i dont want her to shift to shaan's house however here shaan is dominating by at least a %..so i want her to shift with him..so i'm eager for the next update to know their challenge result..
PS: u pls update before 48 hrs ok?n acc. to vatty's task n my request u were supposed to update daily..r u free now to some extent..dont tell lie that u r super busy to escape from updating..i so wish that u get free time to give us the update..but this was pretty long update..thanks for that honey..MMMwwwaaa..🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗u r a sweetheart..
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