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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
yaar saaz u are toooo good....
excellent job...........
loved ur ss....
and loved the new word shehrila....hahaha..
update it soon dear ...
can't wait to read more................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Loved the first part👏⭐️....
Shaan is alot more....Errrr🤔....Forthcoming?....No....Direct?....
Well basically he desn't waste much time and has quickly forgotten his GF.....Hope Khanak is not married to Suraj....
Looking forward to the next update😃.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Your writing is captivating missy....
Thank God that I had read the prologue with your MOTW task, so my work reduced.
part 1 is awesome......why SS, why not FF....I mean take it long, it is beautiful and has potential !!
Shaan appeared very confident and forthright !!
so from mithai-kumar, he got promoted to ice-cream-kumar....lol....not that I am complaining.........I love every reference to the golden era including Suraj
poor Suraj and Natasha.....will they be the sufferers this too.....*sigh*,,,,I love them too ............definitely after Shanak !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
A very interesting concept...I like how you based the story around ice-cream fondness...Very nice start. Looking fwd to see how you unfold this one...


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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
hi saaz dear gr8 start very nyc part they r married ??? that's not fair .....

try to update it soon n thx 4 the pm !



luv zara .. !
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

What a beautiful dream it was ! ! !

It actually teleported me to Shaan s place....
I love the stories which explore the Suraj factor in Shanak s life...
I wanna dream more !!!
I just realised...the analogy of Shanak holding the ice cream cup to shanak holding the sweet in mithai kumar scene
And Shaan seeing the her reflection on the mirror to that on the thaali...
And Suraj telling Khanak abt his boss s son...
So will an accident happen... will Shaan s hands be stained this time toooo.......


My gosh... Priyacool...this is the reason my previous SS missed your comments..sometimes you are so bang on aspects of my story that even I was not paying attention to....love you for that

thanks

@all...the update shall take a while..have been swamped at work ..but no worries..shall update soon.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
i updated my post but recommenting incase u missed ....
Saaaazzzzzyyyyyy ..... Quick comment kar rahi hoooon ...
Next part main detailed comment karoooongi ...
Pakkkkaaa ...
As always I am a big PANKHA of your storytelling and Dialogues ... yet again .... Awesomeeeee !!!!
Shaaan and his flirtatious ways ...... I am Shantanu Khandelwal .... Hahaahahhaahha !!!!!
Oh Oh Oh ... the Suraj-Khanak-Shaan story !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Arey baapre ... I need to be strong hearted for the next parts .... Not good !!!!!
Anyway loved it ... Continuee Sooon !!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
I cudnt resist myself..:( Read the part 1 nd fell into the trap😕 (again)
I have to depend on to till u feel good enough to update😊
u better update soon *dhamki*
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Thanks to everyone especially

@priyacool- have I said this before..let me say it again,,,you are too cool

@Deepali- thanks re, I do hope you like the next part, as always those lines inspired me

@Shal- thank you so much

@Roshni- thank you re

@Karishma –thanks a bunch

@AG-thank you

@Angel- he is refusing to let go of his dream…yet

@Jess-yeh le next cup..

@Vandoo meri bandhoo—he is a kaminaa…a burdthalnaa..

@Naveen-thank yure

@SYS- thanks

@Imane- hope the next part makes you happy

@Vaishu-thanks

@Smitha-reality has not hit Shaan yet, he is still engrossed in his dream…

@yasharanrocks: hehehe suraj ki behen

@Simi-thanks re…yes, Shaan wastes no time…

@Aditee- the next one does have a convo…hope you like it

@Ammu- Hmm..you were?

@Purvi- this time…comment ,,thanks re

@Shiksha-thanks

@Shriya-thanks

@Deepa-thanks re for liking my ishtyle

@Adeela- thank u THANK you for noticing shehereela…yeh original hai..

@May-that he is…very…

@Mani-thank you milady..please let me know if the next one meets expectations

@Krazee- the ice cream fondness ..has now become a dream..

@Zaara-thanks re

@cadbery-aapki dhamki sar aankhon par…pesh hai…agla part…comments dena na bhuliye..

FOR ALL THOSE WHO PRESSED LIKE: DHANYAVAAD

Agla part coming up...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Oh goodie!
So bored I was.

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