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Ohooo !! Yeee kya huaaaa...kaise huaaaa....kyuuuuuuu hua..

Originally posted by: saaaz

thanks everyone...you guys are the best...shall be back with detailed thanks soon...

welcome welcome... 😊 Hugs dearie... accolades too 👏

btw...next part is the last part and I may have an epilogue and not waisa walla!!!😲

rubbishness...

and this is not dhamkee shamkee..I have always written short stories...I cannot write anything longer than 7 parts or so...itni imagination nahin hai biddu...😆

Now this is rubbishness taking and stretching it too far!! Humph.. Baap bole to I don't agree.. there rooj..😉 I did not agree here!!! @saaaz 😡 Dhyaameet

thanks again guys...your comments mean a lot,,,they do...they truly do..they are my inspiration...

Jokes apart, this cannot be a last part. And I dont agree that you are useless after part 6,7.. nope.. I agree with Manita that you should make it inot a FF from SS!! so please reconsider... as sincerely you are good...

yaar saaz....ur SS is always awesum....and i was kidding abt that dhamki....i m sorry if I hurt u....and thanks 4 the epilougue assurance....

Saaz darling....what can I truly say...that hasn't been said by all already...

@naveen and jess..pagalpantis...😆

Originally posted by: saaaz

@naveen and jess..pagalpantis...😆

huh.. paagalpanti kisko bola re.. 😡 baap bolta hain dimaag ka dahee nakko re baba.. behen ko bulaayegi.. samjha na.. 😉😆

INTENSE!!!! I love it!
This was written so well, imagery and emotion were right on...could clearly see this happening...I love how you remain so intact with ShaNak's characterization...their build up is superb!
Shaantanu's agony is justified while Khanak's confusion also makes sense.. they both are battling with their feelings and the end result is disastrous. I loved it...AND as always will be waiting for the next part...

Akshay and Shaantanu's phone convo was the best, they both share the perfect brotherly bond! Hope khanak is able to see reason in Shaan's stiffness...i am sure she'll come around or maybe he'll come around...surprise me! It's up to you my amazing story writer !

THANKS TO EVERYONE ESPECIALLY

@Ramani: Yaar, I update every two days..hope you like the next part too..😊

@Purvi: Thanks re

@Angel: mm hmmm...read and tell me..tell me all..you don't; express??..i love the way you tell me about my story..

@ cadbery: hopefully next part takes the confusion away..

@ Dish: last part because this is an SS- short story- Shaan will always have a chance when it comes to Khanak..but it is also always upto Khanak..

@Naveen: yeh le update..aur epilogue bhi hai..meri jaan

@Deepa: horror se happy ho gaya..

@Mani: ab tho pata chal..suraj hai kaun??

@Priyacool: maze is cleared up I hope..

@ VArsha: yeh le..

@Ammu: mm hmm

@Shiksha: aisa ho sakta hai kya ki shanak are not together

@Shama: sorry re..this one is an SS

@May: what shock?? You know I do short stories..thanks re

@Smitha: I knew you would..I am so glad you did..hope you like the next one too

@Simi: thank you jee..sorry sweetie..it is the last part..but I have an epilogue planned..

@Jess: thank you thank you thank you…heartfelt

@Vat: thanks so much…yes Golden se hum bahar kaise nikle..

@Shal: Suraj ka raaz khul jaata hai abhi

@Vandoo meri bandhoo: aake last part pe comment de..

@AG: thank you jee

@ Krishna: your comments mean a lot…

@Imane: thank you so much..your comments make me really happy..

For those who pressed like: thank you…and maybe for the last part you could leave a comment..what say??😉

Next part coming up..

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