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Yasharanrocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#241

zara nice1.plz cont soon.eagerly waitng 4 next update

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shiksha_03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#242

awesome update pls continue soon

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adeelakhokhar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#243

superrrb zara... 👍🏼

awesome update,,,,,,,,,,,,

,,eagerly wating for d next part...

and dis time plz don't take too much to update han!

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shiksha_03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#244

ven r u updating zara????

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: shiksha_03
ven r u updating zara????

good question..even i thought of asking the same..

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#246

hey zara.. whens the next part??

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ZARA ALI

@AzaraA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#247

i m here with update...(finally)😳

thank u so much every 1 for ur lovely comments...

silent readers thank u ...dun be more silent 😆

who pressed like button ...thank u guyz...
meherbani kar ke kuch bol b do

plz keep reading ...luv u all

luv Zara

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ZARA ALI

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Posted: 14 years ago

#248

sweety pies ...thank u for ur support so far ...keep reading my story and plz do comment :)

part 12

khanak goes in her room and fresh in up quickly ..and make a quick call to her home ...tell them that she is f9 and tomorrow is a very important day for her so she need there blessings ...after the call she moves to shaan's room

knock knock ..

shaan from inside:who is it ??
khanak:me ..
shaan runs and open the door for her:come in ...
khanak step in:thxx ...
shaan behind her close the door:so ...kaisa laga mera room ..??
khanak:its nyc ...but mera zaida acha hai ...teasing him ..
shaan:hahaha ...is that so ??
khanak;yess...with a smile ...and sits on the couch ...
shaan:so kya logi tea ..coffee or me??
khanak:what???
shaan:just kidding...batao na what will u have ??
khanak:nothing ...shaan abhi tu lunch kiya hai ...
shaan:ok ...jab mood ho tu bata dy na i m at ur service mam ...
khanak:really ??
shaan:yes ...i m owned ..
khanak:acha ab ...kam ki bat karey ...
shaan:ryt lets start...goes and sits besides her ...and opens the laptop

while working and discussing the project they dun realize but they were comes really close to each other
there shoulders touching ...shaan was busy in his lap top ...and khanak felling tired ..becoz she didn't sleep after arriving in delhi so she is felling sleepy ...she moves little back and kept her head on the back of the couch and slept ..

after 5 mints ..

shaan:khanak tum samjh gai na...still luking in laptop ...when he not get any response ..he turns ...
and he is lost in her beauty she is luking so innocent while sleeping just like a baby ...he is actually staring at her
with out a single blink ...he smiles when he saw her struggling with her hair strain which disturbing her ...
he moves close to her and bends 1 inch away from her face and slowly truck her behind her ear...
she moves her head little and continue her sleep ...he smiles ...and give her space to sleep peacefully ...he kept a pillow on couch and slowly hold her 4rm shoulders and place her head on pillow adjust her duppatta and decided to leave her sleeping ...and he takes his laptop from the table seats on the bad and continue his work ...

while working he is also busy in glancing at her...she had a smile on her face while sleeping ...he saw that smile and wonder y she is smiling ...and whisper to him self..

shaan:ye sapney main kis ko dekh rahi hai ???oye shaan tujhey kya wo kisi ko bhi dekhey ...
ye larki bhi na ...pagal hai ..lekin ...cute pagal...

shaan finish his all work now he is all set for tomorrow's meeting...now its 6 in th evening so he decides to
wake up khanak ...becoz if she continue to sleep then she can't sleep in the night and tomorrow is a very important day for them..so they have to luk fresh and fell fresh ...he goes to her and called her name to wake her up

shaan:khanak ...khanak ...

no response ...he bends and whisper in her ear ..

shaan:khanak ...plz wake up ..

she feels his warm breath ...and open her eyez ...

khanak open her eyes smiling and saw him so close to her ...she felt nervous

gets up and adjust her self on the couch

he moves back ..

khanak:tum...yaha kya kar rahey ho ...?
he saw her nervousness and he is very well know the reason of it so he decided to change the topic so she feel relax ...:actually kya hai na kahank ...k ye room mera hai ..lagta hai u r still sleeping ..
khanak realize that she is in his room:ohhh ya ..sorry ..wo pata nai kab meri ankh lag gai ...i hope i didn't trouble u .?
shaan:not at all yar ...i understand u were tired ..
khanak:so what abt work ..i mean project ...?
shaan:its all done ...infarct i m ready for tomorrow ..what abt u ??
khanak:if u are so confident ..then i m with u ..dun worry ..
shaan:thank u so much ...i m really glad that u are here with me ...
khanak:thx...btw what abt dinner??
shaan:r u hungry ???
khanak:no not now ...i m just asking ..
shaan:do u wanna go out ??
khanak:as u say ...
shaan:we will see yar...abhi tu dinner main time hai ...tum fresh ho jao phr hum is haseen sham ka maza urey gay ..
she is confused:matlab??
shaan:i mean we will have tea or coffee in ur room galary ..
khanak:ok...main ja key fresh hoti hun ...tum ajana ...
shaan:ok ...i need a shower then i'll be there ..
khanak:ok ...

then khanak left his room ...and shaan get in bathroom to take shower...as he gets out from the bathroom and dry his hairs with towel and wears lyt blue colored T shirt with blue jeans ..he is luking too hot in that cool blue color also
he is all set to leave his room just when he is abt to leave a mobile ringed...

shaan touch his jeans front pocket:mera mobile to ring nai ho raha phr kis ka ...he then truns back and saw
khanal's mobile on the table ...so he quickly run and saw richa's name flashing on screen ...

he picks up:hello...
richa:hello ...who is it ...?
shaan;ur love my sweetness ...teasing her and trying to control his laughter ..
richa:excuse me ...who the hell is talking ...khanak kaha hai ???
shaan finally burst out laughing:its me u idiot ...ur love
richa:shaan i'll kill u ...
shaan:it will be my pleasure if u kill me ...
richa:stop flirting shaan ye batao kahank kaha hai ..aur us ka mobile tumharey pas kya kar raha hai ???
shaan:wo actually abhi kuch dair pehlay wo merey room main thi we are working on project aur wo apna mobile yahi bhool gai ...
richa:aham aham ...kya ho raha tha shaan ?? (now its her turn to tease him)
shaan:oye dirty mind..kuch nai ho raha tha ...we are working ...
richa:main kaisay yaqeen karo ??
shaan:tu ruk main tujhey waha a k batao gay ...waisay ye bata tu kis ki qismat barbad karney wali hai ??
richa:hahahah very funny ...u dun know me dear sameer is luckiest men q k wo mujh say shadi kar rahey hain..
shaan:hmmm ...so tu hai ...waisay on a serious note i m really happy for u ..i wish u had a rocking life ahead with ur and on urs sameer ...
richa blushed:thxx...waisay engagement main ao gay na ???
shaan:kab hai ???
richa:teen din bad ...
shaan:hmmm richa we will try ...u know work is work ...
richa:no shaan ...mujhey koi bahaney nai sun ney ...u and khanak should be here ...
shaan:zid mat kar yar ...
richa tu zid mat kar ...
shaan:100 hitler marey hongey na to tu ik peeda hui ...
richa:jo bhi hai ..tum dono a rahey ho ...
shaan:hmmm ok sweetheart as u say ...kal key liye all the best wish nai karo gi
richa:q nahi ...i wish u and khanak all the best ...i know u will do it ...
shaan:thx yar ...
richa:chal shaan i'll talk to u later ...maa bola rahi hain
shaan:ok ..take care
richa:bye ...

shaan hangs up and realize that it was late and khanak is w8ting for him ...so he quickly runs to her room and knocks on the door ..

khanak open's the door with a smile

khanak:come in
shaan:thx ...here is ur phone ..
khanak:ooo ya waha tha ..mujhey pata hi nai chala ..
shaan:khanak i m sorry
khanak:sorry ...q??
shaan:wo mainey ...actually mainey tumhari call recive karli thi ..
khanak:matlab
shaan:wo abhi na richa ka phone aya tha tumharey number pay ...tu mainey us say bat karli ...i hope u dun mind
khanak:shaan ...pagal ho tum ye bhi koi bat hai sorry bol ney ki ..
shaan:matlab tumhey bura nai laga ..
khanak:nahi yar ...
shaan:thx yar ...ok so now tell me what will u have tea or coffee ..?
khanak:main order already kar chuki hun ...apney liye tea aur tumharey liye black coffee..
shaan:not bad yar ...thx ...waisay tum meri pasand itni jaldi pata chal gai ..wah
khanak:dekh lo i m super intelligent ...
shaan:han han u are...

they continue there chit chat with there tea and coffee ...they both talk quite a long time...for a change they talking abt there life's there families there likes dislikes ...so after a conversation they became even more gud friends or put it as best friends ...at 9 o'clock they had there dinner and decided to sleep soon becoz they have to be on time tommorow and luk fresh ...they both wish gud nyt and moves to there rooms ...

next day ...sunrises wishing both of them a very briaght gud morning ...

both are getting ready in there rooms ...shaan is wearing a black suting pent with lyt pink coloured shirt a black tie on it and black court ...shaan collects his all stuff and put it in a office bag and make sure that he is not for getting anything ..
and now time to take blessings from family so he dieled his dad's number ..

sunil:excitedly:hello son..
shaan:hi dad..
sunil:i m just thinking of u ...are u ready for ur big day my son ??
shaan:yes dad ..and belive u me i m gonna prove my self today ...
sunil:i know beta...akhir beta kis ka hai ...all the best ..khanak kaha hai .?
shaan:dad wo apney room hai may be ready ho rahi hai ..'
sunil:ok us ko bhi meri taraf say all the best kehna ...aur ye lo apni mom say bat karo ..

madhvi:hi baby ..
shaan:hey mom ...and plz stop calling me baby ..
madhvi:ok ..my big boy ...shaan i m so proud of u ...
shaan:thx mom ..i hope main ap logo ka vishwass na tor dun ..
madhvi:oho shaan aisa nahi hoga...i m sure my baby will do it ...aur mom ka vishwass kabhi jhota nahi hota ..
shaan:ya mom ..thx i m so lucky that i have parents like u guyz ..
madhvi:and we are proud to have childrens like u ...
shaan:thank u mom ...mom dadi kaha hain ??
madhvi:yahi han ..lo bat karo ...
dadi:shaan beta
shaan:dadi kesi hain ap ??
dadi:main theek hun ...tumhari yad a rahi hai ..
shaan:i m missing u too dadi...i need ur blessings ..
dadi:god bless u my child...(khusboo was so excited for talking to her ladla dever she santch the mobile from dadi)
shaan:thx dadi ..
khusboo:dadi nahi...bhabhi ...
shaan:my sweetheart how are u ...
khusboo:i m f9 ...what abt u ??
shaan:i m absoulately f9 ...missing u
khusboo:awww i m missing u 2 dever g ...wish u and khanak gud luck...and plz come back soon ..
shaan:thx bhabhi ...i m also dieing to come back home ...where is bhaiya ??
khusboo:wo tu ajj jaldi chaley gaye office...
shaan:ok main un say bad main bat karlunga ...
khusboo:ok ...all the best once again from all of us ...u r the best dever in this world ..
shaan:thx bhabhi ...and u r the most gorgeous bhabhi in this world ...take care bye..
khusboo:bye ...

shaan hangs up and luk at the time it was 8:30 they are not late ...he decided to go to khanak ..
he takes his bag check himself in the mirrior thumps up and wink at himself ...

knock knock..

khanak:kn ???
shaan:its me
khanak:w8 shaan ...
shaan:matlab ??
khanak:i m changing ..
shaan:oh god khanak dun tell me that u are not ready...
khanak:i m ready i m just trying to tieing dori ...
shaan:dori????what dori yar ...kis ney kaha hai itney mushkill dress behen ney k liye ??
khanak:shaan will u plz shut up and let e consentrate on my dori ..
shaan:luk khanak i m luking fool luks like i m talking to this stupid door ..plz open it
khanak:han its done ...(run and opens the door)
shaan:thank god ...(check her from head to toe)...

khanak is wearing pink coloured churidar with well fitted kameez complimenting her figure and dupatta around her neck .
she is luking elegently beautiful ...

shaan teasing her:tum ye pehna hai ???
khanak:han q..?main achi nai lag rahi ??
shaan:kuch aur nai pehn sakti thi ???
khanak:shaan plz tell me..mujhey suit nai kar raha kya ??
shaan with a smile:i m just kidding u are luking beautiful ...
khanak:sach bol rahey ho ya jhot ??
shaan:sach ..seriously u are luking really nyc ...
khanak:thx shaan..btw u are luking handsome..
shaan:oo plz yar return compliment dey na zarori nai hai ...no need to lie ..
khanak:no no i m serious...ur dressing sense is very nyc ..
shaan:akhir Khandelwal jo hun ...
khanak: ya ya ryt ...
shaan:waisay main abhi ghar pay bat ki sub say ...sub ney tumhey aur mujhey all the best wish kiya hai ..
khanak:that's really sweet ...main bhi ghar pay call kar leti hun...
shaan:ya sure ...

khanak go to pick her mobile and it rings ...khanak smile and said to shaan:ghar say phone hai ...

shaan:ok tum bat karlo...main bahar w8 karta hun ..
khanak:no shaan its ok ...stay here ..(pick up the call)

ajay:khanak..
khanak:hello papa ..
ajay:hello beta ...kesi hai mera baccha??
khanak:main theek hun papa...ap batao ap kesay ho??ghar pay sub kaisay hain??
ajay:main bhi theek hun aur ghar pay sub theek hain ...
khanak:i missing u all papa ..
ajay:we are also missing u...bus tu jaldi say aja...meeting kab hai ...?
khanak:bus papa abhi main aur shaan nikal hi rahey they ..
ajay:hmmm all the best beta ...teri maa aur dono behno ki taraf say bhi ..
khanak:thank u papa ...maa kaha hain ??
ajay:wo mandir gai hai terey liye pray kar ney ...
khanak:oo how sweet of maa...aur aarya and sapna??
ajay:wo collage chali gai lekin mujhey keh k gai thi k jab main tumhey call karoo tu unki taraf say bhi wish kardun ..
khanak:hmmm thx papa..
ajay:khanak...shaan hai waha ??
khanak:g han...
ajay:beta mujhey us say bat karni hai..
khanak:shaan say ...par q papa ??sub theek tu hai?
ajay:tu us ko phone dey ..
khanak:ok papa ...(khanak goes to shaan and tell him that her father wants to talk to him first shaan was confused but then he holds the phone)
shaan:hello
ajay:shaan beta
shaan:g...g uncle namestey
ajay:namestey beta...kesay ho ??
shaan:main theek hun uncle ap...kesay hain??
ajay:theek hun..tum soch rahey hogey k main is tarha achnak tum say q bat kar raha hun ...
shaan:nai nai uncle ...ap mujh say kabhi bhi bat kar saktey hain...
ajay:wo kya han na beta jab say khanak waha gai hai tum say bat hi nai hui...main bus tum say ba karna chata tha aur tumhey thx bhi kehna tha ..
shaan:thx ..kis liye uncle??
ajay:meri beti ka khayal rakh ney k liye...bht tareef karti hai wo tumhari ...
shaan luks at khanak and smile:thx ki koi zarorat nai hai uncle khanak sirf meri colegue hi nai meri bht achi friend bhi hai yar us ke yaha ho ney say mujhey moraly bht support mili hai...thx tu mujhey ap ka karna chahye k ap ney khanak ko yaha aney ki ijazat di ..
ajay:wo tu deni hi thi...acha beta main tumhara zaida time nahi lunga tumhey dair ho rahi hogi...take care and all the best
shaan:thx uncle...nyc talking with u
ajay:same here ...bye ..

shaan dc the call and give khanak a mischives expressions

khanak:what aisay q dekh rahey ho ????
shaan:tum ...(moves closer to her)tum ...
khanak:shaan whats wrong with u (moving back)
shaan:tum apney papa say...
khanak start getting nervous and her back touches the wall:shaan (breathing heavly)stop shaan what r u up to??
shaan:tum apney papa say meri tareefein karti ho ?
khanak:what ...mai...main q karo tumhari tareef ??
shaan:really...tu matlab tum meri tareff nai karti (keeps his both hands on the wall to block her way which makes khanak more nervous)
khanak luking down:shaan plz ...papa ney tum say kya kaha??
shaan:yahi k unki beti Shaantanu Khandelwal say full impressed ho chuki hai ...
khanak:dekho shaan aisa kuch nai hai (still luking down)
shaan:matlab tum mujh say impressed nai ho ??
khanak:nai...mera matlab han...nai mera matlab ..
shaan:sshhh tumhey sun na hai na k tumharey papa ney mujh say kya kaha ???
khanak just noded her head in a yes ..
shaan moves more closer khanak close her eyes shaan whisper in her ear:tumharey papa ney kaha...khanak tumharey papa ney kaha ...
(shaan said loudly)ALL THE BEST...and moves back and khanak opens her eyes...

khanak:what ye kaha papa ney ??
shaan:aur nai tu kya??tum kya soch rahi thi ???
khanak:main...main ..main kya socho gi ...kuch bhi nai .
shaan smiles at her:waisay tum kafi cute lagti ho jab dar jati ho ..
khanak:matlab???
shaan:kuch nai ...ur papa is so sweet..
khanak:thx ...akhir papa kis key han ...
shaan:wohi tu yar main soch raha tha tumharey papa tu kitney sweet hain tum kis pay chali gai ???
khanak hits him on his shoulder:shaan!!!!!
shaan:just kidding ...watch the time ..ops khanak its 9:15 ...we gettinng late chalo ...
khanak:han lets go ...

that was part 12...oh my god i can;t belive that i have completed 12 parts ..its a achievement for me and this is only becoz of u my lovely friends...thank u so much all of u for supporting till now :)

need ur comments ur criticism and ur suggestions .. :) (ignore mistakes)

luv Zara

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#249

hei zara,
oye..dont update on a monthly basis r once in 2 months..do update once in a week r 2 atleast..
waise story is moving on well..
khanak n shaan working on the project n she falling asleep..
so sweet of shaan to make the couch comfortable for her to sleep..
later their talk n dinner...nice..
finally both got ready for the meeting n got their blessings from their family..
looking forward for these to realise wat they feel for the other n their love to bloom..
continue soon..

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SidNeeti-fan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#250

wow dat a long update

vl read n comment

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