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Priyasree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#221

luv it... very nice. waiting 4 da nxt part. make it soon dear. its gonna b interstng ...👍🏼

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#222

hei zara,

when r u planning to update next???

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dishbhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#223

Nice re ... perfect first time travel things shown in Khanak's family ...

Shaan is coming to pick, apna naughty pana dikhane wala hain wahan par bhi ...

Waiting for the next one ...

~Cheers,
Dish

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#224

hey zara awesome update pls update soon :-)

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Priyasree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#225

hey zara!!!!!!!! pls updt soon, cnt wait, plzzz dear

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hazra

@hazra66

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Posted: 14 years ago

#226

aussum update

loved it

thnx for the pm

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#227

ven r u planning 2 update zara???? pls jaldi karo update

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adeelakhokhar

@adeelakhokhar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#228

superrr cute update areeba...
simply loved...

update d next par sooon...

👏 👍🏼 and dear pm me on dis id... its my new account...that account is not working..

Edited by adeelakhokhar - 14 years ago

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ZARA ALI

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Posted: 14 years ago

#229

thxxx a lot to every one for supporting me so far ...thx for reading my little effort and appreciate it so much ...for this long delay i dun want to give excuses i just wanna say sorry to every 1 to make u guyz w8 so long...

next part is below ...plz enjoy and comment and do press like button ...

as i always say criticism and suggestions are most welcome ...

sorry that i have not thank individually...

luv zara

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ZARA ALI

@AzaraA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#230

hello my sweeties...itna intezar kar waney k liye mafi ..plzzz shama kar do :)

part 11

kahank finally gets in the plane ...air hostess welcome her and tell her way to her seat ...

khanak seats next to window seat and on window seat there is girl seating ...

khanak takes her seat ...and wears her safty belt ...

girl:hello ..
khanak:hi
girl:what is your name??
khanak:khanak
girl:ooo nyc name ...btw hina here ...
khanak:nyc to meet u hina ...
hina:same here ...so going delhi kis liye???
khanak:ik meeting hai ...
hina:oo ok working girl???
kahank:yes ...actually main jis company main job karti hun us ki meeting hai
meray ik colague already waha hain ..main tu bus un ki moral support k liye ja rahi hun ...
hina:nyc yar ...waisay kaha job kati ho??
khanak:khandelwal constructions..
hina:ops ...u work with khandelwal's...
khanak smile on her reaction:yes ...
hina:wow yar u must be something jabhi tu itni bari company main job karti ho ...
khanak:i think that's a compliment ??
hina:ofcourse it is...

both girls are talking ...and then time for plane to take off...

khanak start getting nervous..hina notice that ...

hina:nervous ???
khanak:ya..
hina:i understand ...just close ur eyez and pray to god ...
khanak:nyc advice..

khanak do as hina said...after a while hina kept her hand on khanak's shoulder ..

hina:khanak??
khanak:uh...han ...
hina:it done plane ab hawa main hai ...smile while saying this ...
khanak:ooo ok ...
hina:u are cute ...
khanak:thx...waisay tum q ja rahi ho delhi???
hina:actually meray chachu rehtey hain delhi main ..tu un say mill ney ja rahi hun..
khanak:that's nyc ...

as girls are famous to talk a lot ...these two also talk although there journey ...finally plane landed ..

they came out from the plane ...pass all the counters ...take there lauguage ...and now time to say good bye

hina:it was very nyc meeting u khanak ...i'll enjoy my journey with u ...
khanak:same here ...mujhey pata hi nai chala kab plane take off howa aur kab land...
u r a very sweet girl ...u are just like my little sis ...
hina:awww really thx...
khanak:take care ...i hope we will meet again..
hina:ya i hope too ...bye khanak
khanak:bye hina...

hina went to her way and now khanak came out from the air port ...and now she has to sent a massage to shaan as he ask her to do so ...

khanak is abt to type a massage when some snatch her mobile from her back ...khanak was shocked ...
she trun around to see ...and her face light up with her smile ...it was shaan ...

khanak:shaan ...u scared me ...
shaan:i m sorry ...so good to see u yar ...shaan hugged her in excitement ..

khanak huged him back with equall excitiment ...

khanak:same here shaan ...

they both realize that they are hugging each other ...

shaan broke the hug and luks little embarrassed:wo...wo ..i think hamey hamey chalna chahiye ..

khanak not meeing his eyez:yes sure...

shaan was walking little forward with khanak's lauguage ..

and finally they reach to the car shaan first kept her lauguage and then open the passenger seat door for her

khanak give him a warm smile and get in his car ...

shaan takes his seat and move to hotel ...while driving shaan thought ..

shaan:mjhey aisa nai kar na chahiye tha ...wo bechari kitni embarrassed fell kar rahi hai ...
shaan tu bhi ik number ka fool hai...idiot ...shaan said idiot almost in a shouting tune ...

khanak:what????idiot ???kn
shaan:wo actually ...mujhey kuch yad a gaya tha isliye ...
khanak:ok ...hotel kitna dour hai yaha say ???
shaan:abt 30 mints drive ...
khanak:hmmm ok
shaan:khanak ...i ...i m sorry wo ...hug k liye
khanak:its ok shaan ...don't feel bad ...
shaan smiles:thx ...

sorry thank u moment was broke by khanak's mobile ringing

khanak:hello
richa:u bitch ...kaha ho tum???
khanak:richa darling i m in delhi ...
richa:i know that ...tu mujh say miley bager chali gai ...ik phone hi kar leti
khanak:sorry yar ...sub kuch itna jadi main howa k time hi nai mila ...
richa:han han...madam itni buzy thi ik massage bhi nai kar sakti thi ...
khanak:i m sorry ...yar plz maaf kar dey ...
richa:aur wo idiot kaha hai???
khanak:drive kar raha hai...
richa:chal thek hai i'll not distrub him ryt now...lekin us ko bolna mujhey call karney k liye ..
khanak:ok...bol dungi ...
richa:chal bye ...take care ...and do call me ...
khanak:ya i'll bye ...

khanak hang's up ...smile on her face ...

shaan:richa thi ???
khanak:han ...she is angry with me ...main us say mil k nai ayi na...aur wo tum say bhi naraz hai ..
shaan:mujh say q ???
khanak:jab sau tum yaha aye ho tum ney ik bar bhi us ko call nai ki...
shaan:han tu ...us ney bhi nai ki...
khanak:shaan..
shaan:kya shaan...main us say bht naraz hun ...
khanak:acha main tumhey ik gud news sunao...
shaan:han bilkul...
khanak:richa ki shadi fix ho gai hai..
shaan with a i don't belive luk:whatt???
khanak:exactly ...same mera bhi yahi reaction tha ...jab us bay mujhey bataya tha ...
shaan:i mean i don't belive this yar ...richa aur shadi wo bhi itni jaldi ...
khanak:bus sub kuch jaldi jaldi hi ho gaya ...
shaan:who is that lucky men ???
khanak:sameer...us ke chachu ke friend ka beta ...
shaan:ok yar ...i m very happy for her...
khanak:ab tu tum call karo gay na us ko ???
shaan:ofcourse yar ...

they reach hotel ...shaan first inform on the reception that khanak from mumbai have arrived so they should inform in the office ...and then shaan and khank move towards the room ...shaan opens the door and ask khanak to go in first ...

khanak get in the room ...she is happy to see such a beautifull room ...room is simply yet porsh ...
there is double bad and a nyc wardrobe ...lcd t.v it was completely luxury...

khanak:wow shaan room tu bht acha hai ...
shaan:han wo tu hai ...
khanak:waisay tumhara room kaha hai ???
shaan in a ver serious tune:tumhara matlab ???khanak ye hum dono ka room hai...
dekh nai rahi tum yaha double bad hai ...
khanak's happiness gone and with shock she said:what ???shaan have u lost it kya keh rahey ho tum ??
shaan:dekho khanak itna hyper q ho rahi ho ...MR.MEHTA bhi meray sath yahi rehtey they ...
khanak:tu ...main kya MR.MEHTA hun ????
shaan with a smile:what ???
khanak:dekho shaan main yahi nai raho gi ...
shaan:dekho khanak rehna hai tu yahi rehna hoga ...warna...?
khanak:warna???
shaan:is hotel k basement main ik room hai watchmen ka ...rat ko us ko room khali hota hai chaho to waha reh sakti ho tum...(shaan goes and sits on the bed)
khanak with dissopinment:i don't belive this ...not from u shaan (teary eyeyz )i m leaving ...do hell with ur room ..
(khanak truned to leave...shaan run and hold her wrist to stop her)
shaan:i got u (with small smile and a wink)
khanak:matlab?
shaan:matlab ye my dear frind ...i was just kidding with u...just trying to tease u ...this room is onl for u ...
i m staying in door next room ...ok ...happy now ?
khanak:u idiot shaan ...u really got me ...meri jan nikal di thi tumney...
shaan:so sorry for that ...just playing ...
khanak:anywyas ...what's next ..?
shaan:abhi filhal k liye to ye k tum pehlay fresh ho jao ...phr lunch k liye chaley gay ...
khanak:kaha?
shaan:wo ik surprise hai...
khanak:shaan!
shaan:khanak!...
khanak:ok ...mujhey papa ko bhi call karni hai ...wo log pareyshaan ho rahey hongey...
shaan:han thek hai u take ur time main bhi dad say bat kar ley ta hun ...when u were ready just let me know ..ok?
khanak:ya sure...bye
shaan:bye ...

shaan left the room and khanak run to take a quick shower and afte that she call her papa to inform him that she is fine
so no need to worry for anything ...after talking to her papa she is feeling relaxed...and now she get ready for the lunch
khanak s wearing a plane olive coloured shalwar kameez suit ...she is luking ...preety is always ...after getting ready she send a massage to shaan ...

massag K;i m ready ...

massage reply s:so come out plz ...

khanak came out from her room ...for a second shaan was lost in her beauty he is actually staring at her for the first time

khanak wave her hand in front of him:hello ??
shaan coming back to reality:hu...hun .
khanak:kya howa tumhey ..luks like u are lost ??
shaan feeling ambareesed:sorry...kuch nai...shall we go ..
khanak:ya sure ...
shaan:after u (shaan offered her to mve fisrt)

they sit in the car and move towards the restuarent which is not far away ...shaan park the car and goes
to khanak's side and open the door for her ...

khanak while coming out:thx
shaan with a smile:my pleasure
khanak:waisay shaan yaha aney ki kya zarorat thi kafi expensive restuarent lagta hai ...
shaan:o plz yar khanak ..its ok itna bhi expensive nai hai ke main offert na kar sako ...
khanak:lekin ..
shaan:shhh dekho mera mood bht acha hai to plz spoil mat karo ..
khank:ok baba ...chalo

they enter in the restuarent ...the maneger came and greet them ..and show the way to there table ..

khanak:is ka matlab sub kuch planned hai ..?
shaan ignore her and smiles ..
khanak:shaan !
shaan:khanak!...yar dekho jis hotel main hum stay kar rahey hain waha ka khana bilkul tasty nai hai
bekar hai bilkul ..dad aur bhaiya ney bht hi bekar hotel book kar waya hai ..
khanak:shaan ...we are staying in one of the best hotels in delhi ...aur tum keh rahey ho bekar hai ..?
shaan:aray yar ...khanak will plz change the topic ...?
khanak:ok as u say sir ...

they take there seats and order food ...shaan go with chiness and khanak with continental ...

khanak:shaan what abt our project ??
shaan:hmmm its almost done khanak ...mainey sub tayari karli hai ...thx to MR.mehta un ho kafo help ki meri ..
aur ab tum a gai ho tu aur acha lag raha ...
khanak:thxx...waisay neeting kab ki hai ...
shaan:tomorrow ..afternoon ...at 3 pm ..
khanak:hmmm ok ...
shaan notice that khanak is feeling nervous so he kept her hand on hers and ask:nervous ho ??
khanak feel uncomfortable wih his touch but dun show it on her face and replied with a small smile:nahi tu
shaan:its ok kahank ..i understand ...chill main ho na ..
khanak:hmmm
shaan:and here's the food ...lets start ...

they start there lunch ..dun talk much while eating ...finish with lunch ..

khanak:i m done ..
shaan: me too
khanak lets go then .?
shaan:pagal ho kya meetha khaye bager
khanak:shaan its already 5 ...we should leave ...phr hamey project pay bhi tohra kam karna hai ...
shaan with a pout:khanak ...u r too booring ...tum say achey tu MR.Mehta hi they kam say kam ...khaney ke bad meetha tu milta tha ...
khanak laugh on his statement:shaan ..
shaan:mar gaya shaan ...let go now ...said in little anger..

they go to maneger first and thank him for gr8 lunch ...and came out from the resturent sit in the car
and moves towards the hotel...

after reaching there rooms ..

shaan:khanak...
khanak stops and turns:han bolo
shaan:wo if u dun mind tum merey room main ajao hum wahi priject discuss karley gay ...
khanak:y do i mind shaan ...its ok with me ...tum chalo main fresh ho kar ati hun ...
shaan:cool ...i m w8ting ...

precap:a moment between shanak :)

that was part 11...hope u enjoyed ...

plz do comment and press like button ...

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