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shiksha_03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

hey zara awesome update n finally dey vl b together in delhi yipeee pls continue soon n i mean soon matlab bahut jaldi...cnt wait 2 read d next part hehehehe

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Simi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Aww so cute Zara..sorry for the late reply..

Waiting for their meeting!!:D

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deepali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

Beautiful Update zara..just read last 3 update and all of them was supperb and nice
shaan and khanak conv. omg..very nice and beautiful
eagrly waiting when shaan meet khanak in Delhi😆

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

very cute update, so Khanak will meet Shantanu after a long time, will be nice to see what happens

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Yasharanrocks

@Yasharanrocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

shanak in delhi cool.pzl cont soon...

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adeelaanwar

@adeelahuju

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

veryyy nice update dear...
loved it...
update it sooon...

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mystory

@mystory

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

hi zara

m priya nd m a nw member

earlier i ws a secret reader

ur ff is vry down to earth,i meet lik when u read it na it feels that all this is happning with some one around u.

bahut zada real lagta hay, nice story

pls update soon

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ZARA ALI

@AzaraA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#208

thx list ... :)

dishbhan:thx dear for reading and commenting...
shanaklicious hai ya nai is ke liye do read it :)

Ramani:thanku dear ...for detail comment...that's really sweet of u ...
plz keep reading . :)

IF_rida:thx dear for reading my little effort and for appreciating it ...please keep reading :)

sshriyaa84:thx dear ..for reading :)

avni_19:thank u dear ... :)

_sweetshona:thx dear for reading and i m so sorry to make u w8 sooo long :(

shanakyasharan:thx for ur cute comment ... :)

Roshni_M:thanku ji ... :)

purvi08:thank u re :)

shiksha_03:thx for your lovely comment ...keep reading :)

simiv:thank u ji...no need to say sorry baby ...just keep reading :)

Deepali88:thx deeps ... :)

adventure_gurl:thx sona ...keep reading ... :)

Yasharanrocks:thx ji :)

adeelahuju:thank u baby ...

mystory:thx priya for reading ...first of all welcome to the coolest forum ...
and bundles of thank u for appreciating my work ...plz keep reading :)

The_May_Rose:thxxx i luved ur comment :D

thank u each and every one ...sorry if i forget any one ...guyz i know i m not as brillaint
as other writers are ...so plz let your suggestions,criticism and ideas come to me ...

silent readers thank u ji for reading

thx to them who only pressed like button ...plz do comment it motivates me :)

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ZARA ALI

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Posted: 14 years ago

#209

hey my lovely ladies ...thx a lot again for ur rocking support for my little effort ...

here's part 10th

sun rises its a very important day for khanak...

sun enters in to the khanak's room to say her GOOD MORNING ...

jaya in the kitchen ...

jaya:aarya ...aarya ...beta come here i need ur help ...
aarya:hey mamma good morning ...bolo kya howa??
jaya:good morning beta ...aarya tu zara breakfast ready karley main khanak ko dekh ti hun kahi us ko kuch chahiye tu nai ...
aarya:ok ...mamma ap jao i'll do it ...
jaya:thx bacha ...

jaya moves to khanak's room to check if she needs any thing or any help

jaya:khanak beta sub ho gaya ...teri packing ho gai na theek say kuch aur chahiye tujhey
khanak:maa ap itna nervous q ho ...relax sub ho gaya hai ...packing and every thing ..don't worry
jaya:ohhh ok ...beta wo kya hai tu hum sub k bager itni door ja rahi hai tu bus tohri tention ho rahi thi
khanak:maa i understand ...maa ap meri bilkul fikar mat karna ...maa u know what i m very lucky k main KHANDELWAL's k sath kam karti hun ...every one there is so cooperative and understanding ...to plz ap bekar tension mat lo ...
aur maa shantanu bht acha larka hai ...tu agar us ko lekar ap ke maan main koi bhi bat hi tu plz us say nikal do ...
jaya:nai nai beta aisi koi bat nai hai ...dekh khanak wo jo bhi hai shantanu main us say nai janti ...lekin main apni beti ko janti hun ...aur mujhey bahrosa hai ke tu koi galat kam nai karey gi ...i trust u my child ...
khanak:thx maa ...

and they both hug each other ...tears escaped from there eyez ...moment was broke by a mobile ringing ..

jaya:ohhh tera phone tu bat kar le aur phr break fast ke liye aja ...
khanak:ok

khanak quick picks up the phone ...

khanak:hello
akki:hey khanak akshay here
khanak:GOOD MORNING akshay sir ...
akki:GOOD MORNING ...so ready to fly ???
khanak:yes sir ...just a little bit nervous ...
akki:don't be khanak u r a 21st century girl ...just be confident ...
khanak:yes sir thx ...flight kab hai ...
akki:flight main tu time hai abhi ...its 8 now ...ur flight is on 11 o'clock ...
khanak:ok ...what abt my ticket ???
akki:my driver dharam is coming to pick u for the air port...i'll send ur tickets by him ...
khanak:but sir driver q main khud chali jati air port ...
akki:khanak tum hamarey kam say hi tu ja rahi ho na ...tu phr hm tumhey itni facility
tu dey hi saktey hain ...
khanak:thx sir ...thank u so much
akki:don't be plz ...ab jao spend some time with ur family ...i'll send dharam at 10 ok ...
khanak:ok sir bye ...
akki:aur han khanak delhi main shaan khud tumhey le ney aye ga ok ...
khanak:ok sir ... :)

khanak dc the call...and move to check her laguage and her hand bag ...and make sure that she is
not for getting any thing ...and then move to mirror and check her self from head to toe ...make sure that she is luking fine...she is wearing a sky blue shalwar suit ...she is luking simple and beautiful...as always ..
khanak came out from her room with her laguage and her hand bag ...

ajay:khanak beta come lets have breakfast ...
khanak:GOOD MORNING ...papa ...(khanak touch his feet and took blessings)
ajay:hamesha khush raho...

every sit down for break fast and have there breakfast ...and have a good time together
khanak inform every one that akshay sir is sending his driver dharam to pick her up ...and when she reach delhi shaan will come to receive her ...so every one cetisfied that khanak is really in save hand ...

9 O'Clock ...dharam reach and knock on the door ...aarya move to see who is it ..

aarya:kon hai ...
dharam:g main dharam ...akshay sir ney bheja hai mujhey...
aarya quick opens the door:ooo hello ...plz come in
dharam get in...every one come to welcome him ...
ajay:aye plz have seat
dharam:namestey ...
every one said namestey collectively ...
dharam:meray pass zaida time nai hai ...warna zaroor ruk ta main...
ajay:lekin phr bhi ik chai ka time tu hoga...
dharam:nai nai plz ...ijazat dijiye ...flight bilkul time pay hai tu hamey bhi time pay air port jana hai ...
waisay khanak kon hai ..???
khanak come forward and said:g main ...i m khanak
dharam:ooo tu chaley madam dair ho rahi hai ...aur han ye rahey ap k tickets
khanak take them and said:thx...

khanak meet with her family for the last before leaving ...first she goes to her parents
and took there blessings ...and said
khanak:plz ap log meri jinta mat karna ...specially u maa..
ajay:tu jinta mat kar beta ...hum sub theek hain ...

khanak goes to her sisters and three of them do a group hug ...and khanak order her sisters to take care of
maa papa and them self's ...

khanak step out from the house ...

dharam opens the door for her ...and puts her laguage in the dikki ...

khanak sits in the care ...dharam also ...take his seat ...and before leaving ..

dharam said to ajay ...:dekhey ap ani beti ki bilkul jinta mat karey ...hamarey shaan bhaiya bht achey hain wo in ka
achey say khaayl rakhey gay ...aur ap ko koi shikayat ka moqa nai dey gay ...

ajay was now completely cetisfied that he does not done any thing wrong after giving her daughter
permission to go out of city ...

ajay:mujhey bura bharosa hai ap par aur khandelwal's par...

ajay ask her daughter to call him after reaching air port and after delhi ...

khanak finally left from the home for the air port ...

khanak reach the air port ...dharam opens the door for her ...and get her laugage out of the dikki

dharam:ye lijiye madam ap ka suit case...
khanak:thx...bye dharam bhaiya ...
dharam:ok ...have a peace full jorney ...
khanak:bye ..

khanak enters in the airport ...her laguage was checked and now she was w8ting for her flight

she calls her papa to inform that she is in the air port w8ting for the flight ...after that she send a massage to akki that she is fine and w8ting for her flight...

after 2 mints her phone rings...

khanak smiles to see that it is shaan ...

khanak:hello
shaan:hi kaha ho tum???
khanak:air port pay...
shaan:gud ...flight kab hai ...?
khanak:11 O'Clock ...
shaan:oo ok matlab 15 mints hain...
khanak:hmmm
shaan:khanak r u all right??
khanak;han ...
shaan:nervous tu nai ho ..?
khanak:han hun tu tohri si ...
shaan:don't be yar ...main hun na...
khanak:tum to delhi main ho ...plane main tu main akeli hongi nai ...
shaan:matlab?
khanak:matlab ye ke mujhey plane ke take off aur landing say dar lagta hai ...
shaan smiles slightly:ooho ...tum sub larkiya pagal hoti ho kya ...yar itney log hotey hain plane main
dar ney ki kya bat hai ...
khanak:shaan tum ney mujhey pagal kaha???
shaan:han
khanak:tumhey tu main waha akey batao gi ...
shaan:waisay yar tum dar book lagti to nai ho..
khanak:main dar nai rahi hun ...bus tohri nervous hun ..
shaan:acha on a serious note ...just relax yar kuch nai hoga ...ok ..
khanak:hmmm ok ..
shaan:acha khanak ...main ao ga tumhey pick karney ok ...jab tum delhi air port say bahar ao tu mujey
msg kar dena ..okay ...
khanak:ok ...thx shaan
shaan:pleasure is all mine ...my lady ...
khanak smiles ...
shaan:oye hoye...are u blushing ???
khanak:y do i blush ...??
shaan laughs and thing to continue this flirt when she come ...:is ka jawab bad main dunga ...
khanak smiles:ok shaan i think announsemnet ho rahi hai flight ki ...i have to go
shaan:ok ...bye take care ...have a save jorney ...see u soon...msg me when u reach..
khanak...thx ...ok i'll

khanak hangs up and move to the flight ...

part ended :)

please girls do comment press like button ...

ignore mistakes ...let ur suggestions,criticism and ideas come to me ...it will help me to improve

i hope this part worth ... :)

next part will be updated very soon trust me ...

luv Zara

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#210

nice Zara hope you can write more soon!

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