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Posted: 14 years ago
Aditee that is the reason I am in love with ur story because it brings a fairytale out of this realistic cut throat world.
I guessed there has to be a reason for change in Niv's character however insignificant it will be in Shaan & Khanak's life. We all know how much of politics & jealousy goes hand in hand at work place & this is I guess another perspective of reality portrayed in ur story.
And about my thesis every day & night, well what can I say, my fingers simply starts typing what my heart revels at involuntarily, that's the power of ur writing. So take a big pat from all of us readers, u deserve it.
And I can't even express how much I love this Shaan & Khanak in ur story. They r so real, can be related to & yet so out of the world. That is the intriguing factor which keeps me hooked to them. Keep it up.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesdome aditee actual;y i felt i was travelling in the local with khanak seeing her wipe off tears etc. superb update..the wait is really million times worth
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Posted: 14 years ago

Ok sorry have been unable to comment cause my manager is acting like an ass. He makes statements like "Tell you parents at home that for the next two weeks I will be unhappy and cranky"...

Why I am mentioning this here is because...while he says so..I keep my cool and manage a smile thinking I have a great FF to go back to...These stories are all I think of day in and day out.
First of all I had a couple of question
1. Why did she say that was her first kiss under the sky? Cause as far as I can remember..the day Nirav called and Shaan was dropping her back..he had kissed her near some isolated road...I am referring to the part which had "This should help" when she informs him she has not rejected Nirav just as yet.
2. How did Shaan give up his side of the bed so easily? I mean I thought that should have been war. i hope in the future it becomes one and she ends up taking the couch but ofcourse he would want her by his side so gives in or the other way around.
I love the first step towards friendship. Shows that the relationship is here to stay.
Love Shaan caring and being quiet every time she starts opening up. This is not the first and wont be the last.
Keep it going!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Souma.N

Ok sorry have been unable to comment cause my manager is acting like an ass. He makes statements like "Tell you parents at home that for the next two weeks I will be unhappy and cranky"...

Why I am mentioning this here is because...while he says so..I keep my cool and manage a smile thinking I have a great FF to go back to...These stories are all I think of day in and day out.
First of all I had a couple of question
1. Why did she say that was her first kiss under the sky? Cause as far as I can remember..the day Nirav called and Shaan was dropping her back..he had kissed her near some isolated road...I am referring to the part which had "This should help" when she informs him she has not rejected Nirav just as yet.
2. How did Shaan give up his side of the bed so easily? I mean I thought that should have been war. i hope in the future it becomes one and she ends up taking the couch but ofcourse he would want her by his side so gives in or the other way around.
I love the first step towards friendship. Shows that the relationship is here to stay.
Love Shaan caring and being quiet every time she starts opening up. This is not the first and wont be the last.
Keep it going!

About your boss.
Ask him to "grow up"
The rest, you will hear from me on PM
What is this? High school?
Who talks like that at a workplace
Ugghhh
I have had my share of j--- in my career, that would make an entirely new FF
Thanks for that note about the kiss. Very good point. I wanted to make the post engagement kiss a special one, with all the trappings and props of a classic love story, you know, balcony, moon, stars, jasmine vines and an engagement ring😳
I have no way of going back and rewriting the argument about the bed.😭 I wish I could. I basically wanted to bring out differences in maturity between the two, despite Khanak carrying the weight of the world on her tender shoulders, she is still a child at heart and at most inopportune moments the innocence reveals itself. I wanted to prove that despite Shaan being a wealthy brat, he can be caring and protective and chivalrous if he wanted to be😳😉
I absolutely detest, abhor, dislike (use any other synonyms) the Shaan of today
The Shaan in my FF is the suave, decent, sexy, educated, stylish, handsome, caring protective, possessive Shaan of the following days:
1. When Khanak goes off to talk to Natasha at work, he intercepts her and chats with her in his room
2. The Shaan who interrupts her converstaion with Hetal and Mangal and sits her down and explains to her why she should not be hasty
3. The Shaan who holds her hand after the noodles scene, and tells her, "I want to make this thing work"
That Shaan Souma, fortunately was not se---- frustrated and unemployed!
In a man it makes all the difference
I as a woman can absolutely not get turned on by an unemployed, s----- obsesssed man!
There is zero appeal in it!
I love you immensely and wish you luck to deal with that genius at work
Hugs
A
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aditee yeh bata r u updating or not?? Should I stay awake or hit the sack??? As usual am waiting for ur update refreshing away to glory! No surprises there. 😃
Oh & what u wrote just now 'ditto' to every word!! This Shaan is not the one I fell in love with, anyway have not watched for some days now though just read the updates. So that tells a lot some die hard fans not watching anymore.
Edited by lghosh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am supposed to Lana, but just saw Souma online, havent seen in her in ages. So I abandoned one Bong chick to latch on to another one!
OK Will atleast write a paragraph, and go back to my alpha numeric numbering convention😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

I completely understand the setting for the engagaement kiss...It was beautiful...had a touch of Shakespeare to it...

About the bed side...well I have always said...you bring out the best in Shaan. I mean even in the last update..he does not expect the wedding to be shifted to Mumbai...what angers him is that she did not speak to him before announcing it to the world...He shows that right and authority over her to know things first from her before anyone else. He is upset that she did not confide in him and hopnour dadi's words...beautiful.
But he is the one who apologizes. He knows to bring back her zest for life...he has to push her against the wall and that is something he does so well
He is demanding and why shouldnt he be..I am he is human and no saint...He wants her in all respects and will get it by hook or crook...that pretty much defines a man.
As for the show. I am paying no heed whatsoever to the story line. I pick out the Shanak scenes and imagine them in the FFs. Thats that.
lghosh thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Phir toh thank u!! I will be up & waiting like always!! Let me play some scrabble in the meantime!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Any updating is expected or its only chitchatting with frnds 😛

Aditee I m waiting 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
😆 Oh my! Before everyone comes out cursing me...Aditi please update...!!!
Discussion on your artwork will be neverending!

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