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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#971

hey Aditee...

read all the three updates now...

wow amazing & wonderful...

i am speechless...

& the lines in blue awesome...

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#972

Lovely update !!! Read some 4 5 times ..:)

Thanks Aditee !!

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Shanaksansar

@Shanaksansar

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#973

Loved this update...so refreshing!!!

I can see that Khanak is slowly opening up. Am waiting for this courtship period to blossom before they finally tie the knot. Each one taking a step towards each other to come to a common ground.

It is a time when you discover each other about your likes and dislikes, get to know each other's perspective on trivial and important things. I like this Shaan how he is so eager to learn more about her and the fact that both are completely smitten by each other. Exchanging these "sweet nothings" is always something you look forward to.

Oh and I am so impressed how you bring out the flavor of Mumbai...more so since you have never quite lived there. I now live far far away from the city but still miss the heat and pulse of that city.

I want you to keep this going on for a long long time.

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swetamwari

@swetamwari

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#974

awesome update...cant wait 4 more...u r definitely a g8t writer...

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#975

Hi Aditee
Another awesome part like always just loved it 😃
U r an excellent writer 👏
Enjoying their journey everyday 😃
Every part is magical 😃
Love Shaan and Khanak's convo,their small fights, their love and affection for each other. They are so caring. I love them a lot ❤️
I love ur Blue and Pink lines its simply superb 😃
Lovers can be friends!😉 (Nice line loved it)
Thanks for writing to us everyday I keep waiting for ur parts eagerly 😊

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#976

the line in blue..is awesum...superb update dear...

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#977

Aaahhh... bold blue again... Spot on aditee... And so true...

Sigh.. as the blue line makes it presence felt I sigh again and W&W...

I loved the way Khanak expresses her emotions.. too full as she misses her parents already. Yes such is the case for every girl I am sure...

W&W...

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Aussiegal

@Aussiegal

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#978

Oooh! Friends can be lovers as well. Hai!!! awesome update. please post update soon. xx

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Aditi S

@aditee

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#979

Lana,

Thank you so much for reading and paintsakingly typing out an analysis every part.

The reason I threw some negative shades to Niv's character was because, this is not a Sooraj Barjatya movie. Its hopefully a real story. Why should every body glorify Khanak? There could be things about her that make others jealous. Hence...

There will be plenty that will hate Shaan, later.

It makes intersting read.

Where is the excitement if everyone gets along with everyone?

Misunderstandings, insecurity, jealousy, discontent pave a way for enhancing the plot..

That is also one of the reasons I show her leading her life normally. Taking the trains or auto. Thats just how she is. It would be too filmy if he were to send a car to his fiance every morning and evening.

Both are egotistical and self respecting, they would never blindly accept freebies, even if its from their partners. That comfort level is not there yet.

It also helps bring out the differences in their lives. Being engaged to an affluent man does not automatically make her wealthy.

Her financial troubles hopefully bring out the struggles of an only child from a lower middle class family.

I could easily have him transfer millions of rupees to her bank account, and buy her parents a mansion in Ahmedeabad. The story goes out the window!

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago