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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you all for reading it time and time again. I am deeply touched. I carefully watch to see when interest will start to wane, but looks like its still going great.
I am happy this story is reaching out and touching each and every one of you (readers only) romantics.
Lana, I have been to Mumbai for 5 or so days I believe, 7 years ago. I stayed at Oberoi Towers and visited family at Bandra and Chembur. I know Marine Drive like the back of my hand, or so I want to believe.
All else, is what I ve read, watched on TV and heard about from the multitude of Mumbaikars I have as friends in my town here.
People say I am very observant, I guess its paying off for me, in this desi M&B.
I have never been to Pune or Shirdi. Hope to some day!
My life revolves around Delhi and my heart beats for Delhi.
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 35 A

Trust Guest House, Shirdi
April 10th, 8 PM onwards.
The knight makes his first "virtual" appearance!😳😳😳❤️
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They had three airconditioned rooms at the guest house. Her cousins were thrilled. The snack and chai session was amazing according to Kaki. Everyone seemed happy, except for her Aada. It was around 8 PM and he had just returned to the room. Khanak was by herself. Cousins and Kaki and Mom were watching a new movie on the flat screen TV in the room next door. Kaka was taking a nap in the third room. Khanak was looking at some design plans she had carried and was making notes, and caclculating stuff.

Aada: Busy ho beta (in Gujarati)

Khanak: Nahi Aada. Aaiye

Her Dad retires on the bed, tired, puts his foot up, she fetches him some water, a guy knocks on the door with a pot of tea and more snacks.

He looks more worried. Khanak wonders what must have happened.

Khanak: Was there a problem at the Trust?

Aada: Umm' no beta'.

Khanak: Agle saal ke scan etc ke paise dene se mana kar diya kya? (She worries how she will arrange for it, as already she is paying off a loan for fixing their Ahmedabad house and helping Kaki when ever she could)

Aada: Nahi''' baitho idhar

She sits by him, he fondly ruffles her hair, and taps her cheek, she leans on him and closes her eyes.

Aada: Tumhe kuch kehna hai?

Khanak: Nahi to! (smiles)

Aada: Ek baat thi'.. who Mr Pai keh rahe the kal, ki koi movie ka hero tumhe ghar chhodne aaya pichhle hafte.

Khanak sits up startled, blushes, "aada who, who hero nahi tha"(denies)

Aada: Aur kaun tha?

Khanak: Arrey who mere daftar se hai, uske Aada ne hamey lunch par bulaya tha, Ritu bhi gayi na mere saath (reassuring)

His face relaxes, but only a little

Khanak: Aada kya hua?

Aada: Amogh ko soch raha hoon mana kar doon (the second (Engineer) proposal he had brought for her)

Her heart skips a beat "Kyon? Aap ne to kaha tha milna hai mujhe" (pacifying)

Aada: Abhi soch raha hoon mana karoon

Khanak: Aada??

Aada sits up, she pours his chai, sets out all the snack, he eats, her eyes well up with tears thinking he must be hungry, pours his second cup of chai, pours herself some also

Aada: Abhi Bai ko nahi bataya maine. Tere liye ek rishta aaya hai!

The cup slips from her hand and shatters on the floor

He looks at her in shock.

She quickly runs to the bathroom to get some towels, mops it up,

Aada: Kya hua beta?

Khanak: Kuch nahi, mere haath mein tel thana (wipes it off vigorously on the white towel)

Aada: Poochogi nahi kaun? (Smiles)

Khanak: Kahiye! (nervous, trembly voice, she is terrified it might be some one her Aada met at the Trust office, wonders how they even knew her Dad had a daughter that lived and worked in Mumbai. Her Aada was more private than her, many people at his work did not know how many kids he had. She worries who it could be)

Aada: Wohh Janaki Gujral hai na, unka pota (the plates slide from her hand to the tray in a huge clatter)

Her father is visibily upset "Beta haath dhokar aao jao, yahan pehle to kiraya nahi hai, oopar se hum koi samaan ka nuksaan kare yeh theek nahi," he just rambles)

She runs to the bathroom again, her face is beetroot red, she splashes icy cold water on it, it heightens the color further, she stands there wasting minutes

Aada: Khanak?

Khanak: Jee Aada'. (stepping out reluctantly)

Aada: Baitho, aao (looks at her face, notices bashfulness, smiles)

Khanak: Haan (really nervous)

Aada: Who America se padhke aaya hai. Mumbai mein naukri karta hai, Janaki jo uski bahut tareef kar rahi thi. Usne tumhe pasand kar liya bataya.

Khanak: Kya?? (her heart is threatening to stop any second, her chest hurts )

Aada: Who to tumhari itni tareef kar rahi thi, ki main bahut khush hua. Tumhe kaise jaanti hai who beta?

Khanak: Us din jo hum ghar gaye'''.

Aada: Ek hafta pehle? Dekho, main ek saal se koshish kar raha hoon, tum ek hafta pehle tum mili un logon se aur aaj rishta aa gaya. Tumhare sasur ne bhi tumhari khoob tareef ki hai.

She is shocked out of her wits to hear her Dad use that word.

Khanak: Aada!!

Aada: Bahut bhale log maloom hotey hain. Ladka bhi bahut achha hai. Nek hai.

Khanak: Lekin aapko yeh baat kisne boli?

Aada: Janaki jee ne. (stops for a second) To us din jo ladka tumhe chhodne gaya ghar, wohi to hai, jiski baat chali hai. (like he just figured out the relativity theory)

Khanak: Hmmpfh!

Khanak is suddenly FURIOUS! "Give me a break!" she thinks. "Who? How? Where? How did all this happen?"

Aada: Who tumhaare saath kaam kiya hai ne? Uska phone bhi aaya tha jab main baitha tha Janakiji ke saath. Unhoney mujhe poocha ki "baat karenge", maine socha pehle tumhe poochoon nei? (is smiling, eyes half closed, reminiscing, fantasizing not sure what)

Khanak: Aada, meri baat to suniye''''

Aada: Janaki ji to keh rahi thi ki chat mangni pat byah. Ladka bhi shaadi jaldi karno chahta hai. Maine keh diya abhi Dadi ko kehna hai, aur Bua ko, sab milkar baat karenge, nei?

Khanak hides her face in her hands "OMG! OMG! OMG!" goes through her mind in rapid succession. Her Aada's phone rings, its Kaka, he is up now, her Aada gets up, wears his shirt again over his vest''. Kisses her head mumbles "Mujhe pata tha, koi badi khushi aane ko hai tabhi Bhagwan ne tujhe itna rulaya, ab dekhna tu hamesha hasegi. Toone mujhe itni khushi di hai beta, ab dekhna tere bache bhi khoob khushi bharenge tere jeevan mein"

Walks away slowly shutting the door behind him, Khanak is almost violent upon hearing that, frantically starts looking for her phone.

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Coming up... of denials and dhamkis... deal making and drum roll... of shehnai and suhaag raat... of honeymoon and life with a hunk.😳😆😉 (there is no icon for sizzle, unfortunately!)

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aditee can'r wait for more! The way Shantanu's Dadi presented the rishta and how Khanak just knew that Shantanu must have been involved, woe that was amazing!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
ady! ... *hugs*
waitin for khanak's lyf wid the hunk!! :D
dishbhan thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oye-Hoye!!!!!!!!!!!!

Am dancing with joy!!!!!!!!!!!

Her Ada is ready...sahi hai !!!!!!!

Shadi kaise hogi ... sadhi ritya ya pura tam-jham hoga???? honeymoon tho extravagant hona chahiye .. samjhi na ...

Life with a hunk is gonna be fun!!!!


~Cheers,
Dish

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Aditee...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

wow...awesome update ...
loved it...

Dadi is amazing...the way she put the rishta forward ...omg ...loved it...& khanak's expression i can totally imagine it...

dil bagh bagh hogaya ...(by ur update)😆
😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

can't wait for next part now...

update soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
hei aditee,
cant wait to read more..feeling very excited..so she is searching for her phone to give dhamki to shaan..but really her aada felt it is a good rishtha..so no dramas in approving..may be they must convince her bhai..continue soon aditee..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb !!!
she was searching for her phone, way did u stop here!? at least phone to karne diya hota,lol !
cant wait for the nxt part !!😊

really loved the father nd daughter convo...:)


Edited by -Ray- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaar Aditee pahele toh tu batati nahi hai ki tu ne update kiya & reading this my lappy was slipping off my hands like Khanak's cup was!! 😃 Haila kya fast forward mein ja rahi hai!! Her dad assented as well! And Madhavi she consented to the proposal so easily? I mean will dadi & Sunil just go ahead without her consent? So she must have conceded to Khanak, right?
Or has the conversation between Shaan & Madhavi already taken place & she realised how serious Shaan was about Khanak? In true terms its 'chat mangni pat byaah'...yehan toh mangni bhi nahi hogi, seedha byaah! 😃
And hero called up to talk to dadi & wanted to talk to 'ada' when he heard he was there? This must mean that the conversation at home within the family must have already taken place, right?
It must be a dream come true for her dad to get such a proposal but I thought he will re-think considering the caste & status difference. But he must have thought it through about how happy Khanak will be. Did he get to see Shaan's photo? Oh I wanna know so much now, all the tiny winy details. 😃 I loved the emotions of a dad here for his daughter, it was emotional & touching!
And Khanak is mad with Shaan?? Is she thinking he maneuvered all this to get to her? I mean why? If he is willing to say 'I do' then why is she mad? Because he didn't propose to her first? He didn't confess his feelings to her & directly the proposal came to her dad? Hmmm, its a pretty interesting scenario now! **rubbing my hands in glee** 😃
The fight is ongoing it seems & now she will give him another piece of her mind. 😃 Poor guy! But am waiting for their encounter now! It will be super interesting. U know I have not really seen this Shaan hitting the roof in anger. Will we see that if & when she refuse? 😃 Me sadistic no, but anger does make one volatile & vulnerable! Wanted to see that side of Shaan. What extent is he willing to go to get Khanak!?
Anyway will eagerly wait with baited breath for the next update.
And I knew teri dil Dilli mein hai & yet was getting surprised with the description of B'bay! Fantastic if 1 week makes u write the details so well. I have been to all the cities here including Puna & Shirdi & felt the details there too was very well drafted. So kudos to u! 👏
Will wait for the hero's arrival now! A true knight in shining armour all set to rescue her from her remorseful life! 😃 And in return he will be the lucky one to have an enriching life in every respect!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dishbhan



Oye-Hoye!!!!!!!!!!!!

Am dancing with joy!!!!!!!!!!!

Her Ada is ready...sahi hai !!!!!!!

Shadi kaise hogi ... sadhi ritya ya pura tam-jham hoga???? honeymoon tho extravagant hona chahiye .. samjhi na ...

Life with a hunk is gonna be fun!!!!


~Cheers,
Dish





Looks like Ada is completely smitten by the fact that such big people have asked for his daughter...

But the difference will be completely be evident after they meet the M-I-L (Madz)
😭

When u referred to the knight, I was expecting it to be Shaan somehow 😳

But again, you have kept our most wanted person away from the update with just a small touchpoint during the discussion between the daughter and father.
😭

Where is a our beloved Shaan???

woh Ada aur bai se kab milenge?

Wanna understand his chain of thoughts after he meets her family ... Dadi seems to be happy meeting them ... will he not be bothered that her uncle is being treated by his dadi's trust?
😲
😲
Madz is gonna freak out completely ... I am sure


So many questions coming into my mind ... kaise hoga sab kuch ... please describe elaborately
😊
😳

😳
Waiting anxiously and very impatiently ...
😍

And this is a humble request ... pls do have Shaan in the next update for sure


~Cheers,
Dish

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