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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dishbhan




Looks like Ada is completely smitten by the fact that such big people have asked for his daughter...

But the difference will be completely be evident after they meet the M-I-L (Madz)
😭

When u referred to the knight, I was expecting it to be Shaan somehow 😳

But again, you have kept our most wanted person away from the update with just a small touchpoint during the discussion between the daughter and father.
😭

Where is a our beloved Shaan???

woh Ada aur bai se kab milenge?

Wanna understand his chain of thoughts after he meets her family ... Dadi seems to be happy meeting them ... will he not be bothered that her uncle is being treated by his dadi's trust?
😲
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Madz is gonna freak out completely ... I am sure


So many questions coming into my mind ... kaise hoga sab kuch ... please describe elaborately
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Waiting anxiously and very impatiently ...
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And this is a humble request ... pls do have Shaan in the next update for sure


~Cheers,
Dish




Yahoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Congratulations on Completing 100 pages Dear~!~!~!~!~!~!~

And I started the 100th page ... Yahoo!!!!!

~Cheers,
Dish



Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Aditee 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

loved the update...

eagerly waiting for next part...

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congrats for completing 100 pages...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ads jst have one Queschen...knowing d guy he is am pretty surprised with his Consent to get hitched so Fast...hmmm nways...if possible wil like to know his inner turmoil also...kuch tou chal raha hoga uske mann mein bhi!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lol aditee 2 much...cant wait 2 read the upcuming 1...pls jaldi update karo...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG IMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! Speechless!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Aditee, you make my day. I think I'll be losing my day job soon as all i do all day is wait for your next installment. WAH!! Brilliant. Can't wait for the denials and dhamkis... deal making and drum roll... of shehnai and suhaag raat... of honeymoon and life with a hunk 👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey All
Thanks for loving it so much
Deeps: He doesnt love her or anything yet. This was the fastest way to get her to b-- in a certain sense so he agreed, plus he loves his Dadi a lot. He doesnt worry constantly about finding his janam janmantar ka pyaar and such. He wanted an affair, she refused, his Dadi thought Khanak is good "bahu material" he agreed. His personal motive gets fulfilled also. Somewhere there must be something more than lust, that he will figure out after he marries her.
Lana: His Mom may never accept her. Madz doesnt care for Khanak at all. Her son stumped her by agreeing to Dadi like this. It was a selfish move on his part to "gratify" himself like this. But just like in any arranged marriage, Madz will have plenty of opportunity to show Khanak how irrelevant she is. And she will not lose one opportunity.
Her Dad is so overcome by her worry that he is swept away by such a fairy tale proposal. Khanak's Dadi and Bua will highlight the glaring class and caste differences. As a parent he is just overjoyed his daughter may actually live a life dreams are made of!
I wanted him to have that joy, how ever improbable and ridiculous it may have seemed in last nite's part!
Thanks so much Lana for reading and following and questioning so minutely
I am paying more attention to the characters and the plot line.
Gosh! I dont think I have ever been so overwhelmed before
thank you all so so so much!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely part...I thought her dad wud be a problem in this liason...Seems not...I expected him to be perturbed at the class difference !! M glad hez not !!
Tell me you are posting the next part NOW !!!
Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Aditee pahele toh congrats for completing a century on this thread! It says a lot about ur calibre as a writer. So pls keep this wonderful job up!! 👏

And 2ndly that was a revelation there, Shaan is getting hitched just to fulfill his carnal desires?? Maybe something more along the line?!! And the falling in love part he will realise only later in their marriage?! And does Khanak realise this?? If so will she withhold all his husband's rights after marriage unless he feels otherwise? Naaah...with a guy like him even if one wants to one can't! Ok not putting my feelings here but am just pondering & wondering. 😆
And pls, pls, pls ab kuch Shaan ka haal-chaal bata! I want his perspective, his views on this whole thing, his turmoil, his kerfuffle going within him...or not going within him, whatever I want to have an insight on that! What is his attitude towards marriage?
And he really thought of having an affair with her & that's that?? Hmmm! Now tell me how much of a 'Harishchandra' is he? Did he really tell the truth when he said 'she will be the first woman he will make love to'?? I was surprised & doubt it but just wanted to know! Maybe he said the truth but a guy who wanted to have an affair kind of puts a doubt on my mind.
Anyway will wait to read his outlook on this marriage thing. And then Khanak's refusal will add more fuel to the fire & he will be more adamant & stubborn on getting married?? Oh man its so gripping I tell ya!! Pls, pls, pls continue & don't rush it, I want to enjoy every little aspect, the turmoil, the agitation, the refusal, the determination, the stubbornness, the acceptance, the revelation, the ecstasy, the glory, the pinnacle of culmination of every possible feeling...so pls don't deprive us of all this! And a big heartfelt thanks on all our behalf for this wonderful story! Keep it up! 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 35 B

Trust Guest House, Shirdi

Sat April 10th 9 PM onwards
She gets up and locks the door from the inside. She can hear it ring a couple times, before he answers.

Before he can speak she takes off

Khanak: First off, I am NOT having your kids (responding to her Dad's blessing)(agitated)

Shaan: And secondly?

KhanakLrealizing what she had just said) Umm''. I cant marry you.

Shaan: I always thought wedding comes first?

Khanak: Iam not kidding!

Shaan: Hi! Khanak (soft)

Khanak: Aapne aada se kya kaha? (accusing)

Shaan: I didn't speak with him, he apparently told Dadi he would have to speak with your first (matter of fact), so he blew me off.

Khanak: Why are you doing this?

Shaan: You said "an affair is not part of the deal" so I reworded it to a marriage.

Khanak: Now EVERYBODY knows!

Shaan: Did you want to elope?

Khanak: We have NOTHING in common! You know that!

Shaan: Well figure something out!

Khanak: I don't speak your language, I didn't go to the same college, I don't have the same group of friends.

Shaan: Looks like you've given it some thought (grins)

Khanak: Aapki Mummy mujhe bilkul pasand nahi karti.

Shaan: She will get over it Khanak.

Khanak: Kya unko pata hai aapne mujhse shaadi karne ki marzi jatai hai?

Shaan: Ofcourse! Why will she not?

Khanak: Phir bhi who maan gayi? (shocked)

Shaan: Not really. We can talk about it''Its not important now'' where are you?

Khanak: Kyon?... Shantanu! (troubled)

Shaan: First time in a week.

Khanak: This is not right!

Shaan: I don't see anything wrong with it.

Khanak: Weve kissed what'' two times? Three? And you want to marry me?

Shaan: Four to be precise, we kissed twice two weeks ago at the wedding (husky)

Khanak: You remember? (stunned)

Shaan: If its about you Khanak''.. then yes, I do! (throaty)

Khanak: This is crazy! You are crazy!

Shaan: I agree Khanak'' I want you and there was no other way to have you. (gruff)

Khanak: Thanks that's the nicest thing anyone has ever said about me (hurt)

Shaan: You know that already. Ive said it every time weve met

Khanak: So when you are done, will I receive a letter or an email perhaps? (hurt)

Hope you will give me enough time to pack.

Shaan(ignoring her jibe) I miss you here, in Matheran. Why did you take off like that?

Khanak: This is a family trip. Ive come here with my Kaka and kaki and parents

Shaan: When are you returning? Can I meet you at the airport?

Khanak: We don't do "airports", we took a bus, see right there! There is just so much difference between us (lamenting)

Shaan: Tum kis baat se naraaz ho? That you have to get married to me? I didn't ask you first? Your dad is happy? Dadi took the decision away from both of us?Or are you plain missing me as much as I am?(serious)

Khanak: I am so wrong for you. Dadi ko kya ho gaya?

Shaan: How did you come to that conclusion?

Khanak: Becoz, I don't stay up late, I don't drink alchohol, I don't dance, I don't party. I am dull, I cook at home, I have TV dinners and my favorite juice is mixed fruit or mango.

Shaan: Because it was Sooraj's fave?

There is a long tense silence.

Khanak: You never called me either. Not once''.. Ive been here two days. I was there all week, phir bhi aapne call nahi kiya. (accusing)

Shaan: what time are you getting home tomorrow?

If they cannot connect emotionally, its good enough to connect the only way they connect right now.

Khaank: Shaayad, raat ko, abhi bus ki booking nahi kee hai Aada ne. Kaka to Pune chaley jaayenge, hum Mumbai ki bus lenge.

Shaan: I can come see you.

Khanak: Dadar? (shocked)

Shaan: Haan!

The thought of seeing him fills her every pore with anticipation, with bliss.

Khanak: Raat ke 12 bhi baj sakte hain''' ya aur bhi late.

Shaan: Call me an hour ahead

She turns over and hugs a pillow, buries her face in it, it warms up, soothes her''.

Khanak: Mere saath Aada aur Bai bhi hongey. Who Tuesday ko ja rahe hain.

Shaan: That's fine! I will take you out to dinner on Monday nite? I want to see you Khanak

She reveled in the ecstasy of being wanted. Of disturbing him physically as much he did her. If they are married, every day promised to be this way. He would overwhelm her with his desire. He would understand how she craved for him, he would long for her as much. They would feverishly seek each other out''..

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei aditee,
first of all congrats for reaching 100 pages👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..if i'm right urs is the 3rd FF to reach 100 pages after pooja's dostana n manita's trespassers prohibited..

update was very intense with their conversation..really shaan admitted that as she said
"an affair is not part of the deal" so I reworded it to a marriage.
and he also said I agree Khanak'' I want you and there was no other way to have you. (gruff)
poor khanak she could have felt very bad na..and the final few lines..oh god..it was saying a different story..but i loved it..continue soon aditee..so waiting for their love to blossom after their marriage..

Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago

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