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priya

@priya_cool_123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#731

OMG !!!!

What was that !!!!

The FF is like haunting me ...like really !!!

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#732

Kya likhu ...

I don't know about the story anymore ... I can't connect with ur explanation ... is it only physical for him? I guess physicality is very important in different standard of living ... have an affair and move on that's what the Madz in ur story said ...

It's a very practical story and this is close to what went on in the serial as well, but the Shaan there was very considerate, it was not physical, I guess it was more of responsibility.

I wanna see how u take it ahead so I will be an ardent reader of it going forward ... want to see how their relationship builds and the way they get attached to each other.

~Dish

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@-Simple-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#733

WOW.

Just read the last part and its amazing ! Its like the Shaan that I so want to see ! I cant wait to read this after exams + read about the 4 kisses too 😆

That affair line was just too good

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#734

hey Aditee...🤗

amazing update...

loved it...

she knows the difference b/w them...& tells him all...amazing description...

but shan know how to make her his...😆

blus line amazing

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Aditi S

@aditee

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#735

Thanks all,

yet again!

I havent said it enough!

Dish: I am sorry you are unable to connect. Unfortunately the lead in my story is not a Mahatma. The leading lady is not a saint either

They are fickle, they are spontaneous, they are impulsive, they make mistakes, they are not rational

They are not on a pedestal

They are simple every day human beings

They are not answerable to any body, they are not bogged down by teh weight of their "mahaanta"

They dont think they are in this world to spread enlightenment or wisdom

They are foolish, passionate, and selfish!

I hope you will continue reading, some things might interest you!

Or at some point you might sit up and take notice

Thanks so much you guys!

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#736

OMG u put another update up & this smoking one??? I am barbecued, big time! 😆 I can't even do justice now, am on the run!! Will have to come back later!! Its my habit now to check every after 5 mins in ur thread to see if u have put one up or not & there u go!! Thanks for this one!

I am bubbling inside, have to spill it out later!! 😃

And I love this Shaan, there is no 2 way about him! Straight out with the truth in a matter of fact way! Its Khanak who surprises me here! She is as much besotted & smitten & yet is trying to put up a tussle!! Oh god look at me have started my rant!! No, will come back later!! But am grinning so badly now! Din achha jayega, hopefully!!!

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: aditee
Thanks all,

yet again!

I havent said it enough!

Dish: I am sorry you are unable to connect. Unfortunately the lead in my story is not a Mahatma. The leading lady is not a saint either

They are fickle, they are spontaneous, they are impulsive, they make mistakes, they are not rational

They are not on a pedestal

They are simple every day human beings

They are not answerable to any body, they are not bogged down by teh weight of their "mahaanta"

They dont think they are in this world to spread enlightenment or wisdom

They are foolish, passionate, and selfish!

I hope you will continue reading, some things might interest you!

Or at some point you might sit up and take notice

Thanks so much you guys!

Hey Aditee,

I liked the different storyline of yours ... I am from the idealistic world ... and its right by her as well, if she has to be his then its better to be married then have an affair ... I understand her stand totally.

And I am a big fan of ur writing, so looking forward to all your updates ... And I understand that no one is a mahatma (I'm the last one😊, but have some ideologies and principles like ur khanak here and cannot let them go).

vaise next update kab hain ?? they will finally meet 😳 ... waiting anxiously as always !!!

~Dish

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#738

oye///so sorry re...have been away from forum for some time..and I am so glad to see... you have taken the we are marrying each other but don't love each other route but want to love each other route...and I completely relate...it is funny the way you said, arranged marriages no one says 'i love you'..hell, before I married my bf, we never said i love you's either..i love you is an artificial line invented by the greeting card industry to sell their inventory IMO...marriages and togetherness encompass so much of want, need, touch, feel, see, of each other physically first and emotionally later that it culminates into an I love you...In fact, I had casually told my husband in the initial years of our marriage once when we had a fight and he asked me 'why did you marry me?'...and i responded with "for the s*x, becos my upbringing would never let me 'do it' without being institutionalised"...he teases me about that even today..today.. when we can live without each other but would never want to..and that is part of love I guess..

Ek Sau Solah Chaaand ki Raatein
Ek Tumhare Kaandhe Ka Til Geelee Mehendee ki Khusbooo...aur Jhoot Moot Ke Shiqwe Kuch.. Jhoot Moot Ke Vaade tak Bhi Yaad Karadoon.. ... Ek Ijazaat De Do Bass Jab Isko Dafna Doongee Main Bhi Vohee So Jaaongee...