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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

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Posted: 14 years ago

#531

Aditee-stuff dreams are made of.Really!!the phone convo has to be the most exciting one I have ever read.I knew he would ask something like' what you are wearing' lol.The way you incorporated that and Khanak's involuntary answer,so good.*sigh*I do miss reading my books but your writing more than makes up for it!!Loved it.

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#532

OMG one more juicy update!! Ooohhhh lala!! Thank u so much for spending the weekend on us! See this is what I die for! Just a phone conversation, not meeting in person, not even talking anything about carnal pleasure or anything sleazy but just a timely pause at the right places puts the intention to the forefront crystal clearly! Again its the magic of ur writing. I can even imagine Shaan's expressions & smiles & his smoky look while he was talking to her. 😃 What he did when he asked how was her weekend, with whom she went to lunch & what she was wearing!! I didn't need the details but I could imagine it. Seriously u r creating a masterpiece. But what surprised me was he didn't pursue her about the dinner date. He is purposely giving her time, time to digest his presence in her life, to absorb that he will be around for good, just not a temporary fling which she thinks he has in mind. He is letting it all seep in slowly in her system. And then the authority in his voice to let her know she has got the weekend off from him but not for long, tomorrow he will be there to make his presence felt. 😃

Sigh!! Why can't we find such guys in real life? 😃 Once again awesome explication by u! It was delicious. 😃

PS - And oh the songs u r choosing for this story, OMG ek se bad kar ek hai! And all my favorite! U must also be a KK, Panchamda fan like me!! 😃 I love all the numbers of 'Ghar' & this one is no exception! Love it.

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#533

wow...aditee..ek saath itne updates...wonderful...thanks a lot....it's awesum...

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#534

Hi Aditee
Wow so many updates together just loved every update👏
U are awesome great writer 😊
Love this FF ❤️
Thanks a lot 😊

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#535

Sorry for having got in the bad habit of reading a bunch of updates together rather than as each one comes along!

Absolutely loved the part with Shaan's feelings! How he wants to know each and every inch of her, from what to she thinks to what she does-the tiny details that make us fall in love with people

Loved the conversation between Khanak and Ritu and how it helped her untangle things within her own mind and how she does not admit the obvious for fear of making it so final!

Loved Ritu's question about whether it was better than Suraj-a hard hitter! Just answering that one question would bring such a flood of varied emotions and guilt! Am liking their friendship.

They are both changing.Or rather not changing but letting their real selves take over the person that they have created to protect themselves.Do they realize that yet?

Phone conversation was yummy.

Your FF is a fairy tale that is very much real!

*hugs*

And what are these 'I shall finish in 2 parts' dhamkees??

Faltu!Make it long and take it slow!😃

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#536

the way he suddenly changed the topic and asked abt wat she was wearing.......lovd it!

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#537

Thanks for the updates😊

All I can say is u have mastered the art of dragging😃

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vaish_123

@vaish_123

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#538

Aditee..

Got time now to read your updates together.

Sighhhhhhhhh................

Only one word FANTABULOUS!

I loved the phone convo.

Your FF is like a fairy tale never told for me.

your writing shows how much you love these two characters.

👏👏👏

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#539

awesome adi...........

6 updates in one go..........

wow!!!!!!!!

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: togepe30
Wow 5 Updates and still you didnt put up the part we were waiting for....The dinner !! Not fair !!
Now I cant even ask you to update that part.......coz you have written soo much today....It wud b cruel of me....But update soon !!! LOL !!

This is gonna be fun......Shaan is soo gonna kidnap her if she says yes to Nirav ! LOL ! That would be an interesting twist Vandu! Aditee please take notes down!

Luv,

Vandu

Loved the update Aditee keep it up!😉

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