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Posted: 14 years ago
Muah muah muah Aditeeeee!! Thank u thank u thank u!! Yep lovely short one!
Slowly Khanak is opening up, today its her friend, tomorrow her parents & then the world. She is getting to that point where she is not ashamed to introduce him as someone important in her life. Progress........but yes I want it to be slow, I want them to engulf me in every pore of my system slowly like slow poison! 😆 I want to enjoy every little aspect, every little gestures, every little advances, every little hindrances, every little step of their romance, so definitely I want it to be stretched to the full nine yards with smoothness & ease with every little detail. 😃
Love u for this piece of art.
Thanks once again.
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Posted: 14 years ago

After I posted then I saw the 2nd half!! Seriously u have an amazing sense of wit, that line from Ritu 'usko bhi sanyas dilane ka irada hai kya' & then the comment about the nuns is hilarious!! Hats off to u!

And what a point to end it! Strike where it hurts the most & that is exactly what it happened here. Khanak thought she will tell a lie & in a way will convince herself about her feelings for him but I have to say Ritu is smart, knows exactly how to bring the truth out. Amazing.
Edited by lghosh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey,

Nice update!!!!

thoda chota nahi tha??? 😉 just kidding ... was waiting for this whole day yesterday.

Hope today's will be the dinner together one ... 😉

~Cheers,
Dish

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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 23 C

Shivneri Nagar, Chembur

Sat morning

Khanak: Maybe I should just do that (unconvincing)

Ritu is lost in thought''''.. "OMG! Khanak'''' I spoke with Aada yesterday, he called when you weren't home, he sounded so happy! About Nirav''. He said everything's almost final, and you guys just have to meet one more time, before they will finalize everything in Ahmedabad. Did you meet him? Ofcourse you met him! Kya kaha tumne usko?

Khanak is reeling in shock and fear'''' her heart screams OMG1 Let this not be true!

"Umm''. I did! I did!......... and I met him that nite again''"

Ritu: Nirav? Tu kya keh rahi hai? You met him twice? Kya?

Khanak: Nahi rey, I met''' Shanta''.. Shaan as he is known among friends'.I went to his house'.

Ritu stares at her incredulously''. Laughs out loud'''' "You are something else! You went to meet a guy you are supposed to marry but instead went off to a hottie house? Damn! How do you do it yaar? Seriously, hilarious'''' this is funny!

Khanak is ashamed "I know''' terrible'''.. terrible" Gosh!

Ritz: Main mazaak kar rahi hoon! Ofcourse I would go to Shaan's house myself'''' Oh BTW! You went to his HOUSE? Kahan? How is it? Did you guys make out?

Heat crawls up Khanak's face " Umm'''. Malabar Hill? Yes''. No! I mean we didn't make out''' but yes'''. MalabarHill'' and yes its very elegant'''' he mentioned something about Hafeez designing the inside'''its gorgeous'''''. Lovely actually''' (lengthy pause) he kissed me! (barely audible)

Ritu jumps up from her seat "Yayyyyyyyyyyyyy! Kaisa tha? Kaisa Tha? Tell tell"

It was GREAT she thinks''EVERYTHING it should be'''. Tho it lasted for 10 seconds'. Unlike from last nite'' where I made a fool of myself by not letting go! He smells the best, his carress is to die for''. His touch is the most masculine''.. I had forgotten how good the physical stuff can be'''.😳

Ritu: KHANAK!.......... Secret hai kya? Or was it so good you are still savoring it? (Winks)

Khanak: It was'''. Ok (glum)

Ritu: Better than it was with Sooraj?

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Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei aditee,
wowwwwwwwwww..khanak is possessive for shaan..she didnt like it when ritu asked her to give her no. to him..y is she not admitting that she is attracted towards shan..to herself as well as ritu..if khanak is not ready for that how'll she tell her parents..oh god..now her aada all set to finalise her marriage with nirav..so will shaan meet her parents n convey that he loves khanak..but even if he says so will she support him?i'm too much tensed..wish to read lot more..continue soon aditee..
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Posted: 14 years ago
I don't know what happened I am unable to like the update! Again fabulous!
And I am loving Ritu now, what punch she is throwing at the apt moment! The blue line in the end will be another rude awakening for Khanak! She will have to concur that in an affirmative! She will have to grudgingly admit that what she had with Sooraj was a sweet dream & with Shantanu its a hard core flesh & blood reality which simply stares at ur face with its desires, pleasures, vulnerability, difficulties, experiences & inexperiences!
Its kind of coming to terms with herself about her own feelings & future. Lovely!
And it will definitely be interesting to see how she confesses to her family about Shaan & then make them see where her happiness lies. And another thing I am sure of Shaan will be able to sweep her dad off his feet with his charm & appeal & manners. He will be ecstatic in the end that his daughter is marrying some1 like Shaan who is completely besotted by her.
Edited by lghosh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 23 D

Sat Morning

Chembur

Ritu looked at her in wonderment. This was SO UNLIKE her best friend. She would never ever do what she just admitted to have done. She was not at all impulsive, not flighty, not adventurous''' the only spirit of adventure she had seen in her friend was when she pursued Sooraj. Not much pursuit was required there as Sooraj had been so flattered he had caved in in a month or two.

Here she was widowed and lonely and so confused'.. unsure''.. something about the tale made Ritu very curious and may be a tad bit uncomfortable''' there was more to it than met her eyes'' for the fisrt time in the life of their friendship she sensed it''.

Khanak knew the answer to Ritu's question'''. Infact the answer advertised itself the day he had pinned her to the conference room door to tell her "I wont call you, I will send you my number and I want you to"

Something about the man became very apparent'''..

Khanak: Obviously, no one can be better than Sooraj! Ofcourse! Not! He was my first love'''.. IS my first love''. My only love'.. will never love anybody ever again'''.I just cant''' its impossible

Ritu (gently) Sooraj was a wonderful guy! Wasn't he? He was exactly like you wasn't he''.. introvert, shy, quiet''.. accommodating, easily gave in to u, never picked a fight, never argued with you, let you have your way'''. Oh heck! You even told me how you would playfully "deny" him some nite and he would kiss your forehead and go to sleep not a question asked'.. He would listen to you, express his opinions yet not hurt you in way''.. he loved, cherished and doted on you'''.

Khanak: Yes! (husky, fighting the lump in her throat)

Khanak: That's exactly why I cant marry Nirav! I am not sure about Aada yaar'''.. I mean itni jaldi kyon hai unko''. Abhi main Sooraj ke bare mein hi soch rahi hoon

Ritu: Back up a second here'' I don't agree'' ek saal ho gaya Khanak''' its OK'' you will always love him''. He will always be special''' atleast tum soch to'''

Khanak: Yeh to aada ki line hai, unhoney tumse baat ki kya''.. Yeh aada bhi na (in Gujarati)

Ritu: Aada ko kyon daant rahi ho?

Khanak, leans on the wall and shuts her eyes

Ritu: Lets talk some fun stuff alright?........... how is Shaan(?)

Khanak: Shaan is not fun'''

Ritu: Really?

Khanak: I mean'''.. yes'''. He is the exact opposite of Sooraj........... He talks more, he is too worried about his appearance is acquisitive.......... loves the latest gadgets''.. drives the best cars.......... Eats at the best places'.. is impatient............ arrogant''.. demanding........... possessive............(her voice becomes a whisper at the end)😳

Ritu is looking at her in fascination''.. Khanak's eyes are sparkling'.. her face is glowing''' her voice is emotional and agitated''..

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aditee,

Her emotions are explained so well in these parts!!!!

But yaar ... whats this??? it ne chote installments de rahi hain ... but its fine as far as they keep coming !!!

😳 And what was that she did not let him go!!! 😳 I can't understand ... 😳 I thght she was trying to be in control ... I guess ho jata hain??? pata nahi ...

k anyways .... Jaldi dono ko milwao yaar ...

~Cheers,
Dish

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Posted: 14 years ago
Dish,
Bahut mil liye dono aur bahut "baaten" bhi kar lee
Abhi dono thodi der akele, ek doosre se door door
It intensifies the attraction rey!
Har part mein milte rahe, make out karte rahe to I will have to end it in a day or two
If they are comfortable with each other, start talking with each other freely, go out shopping or to movies, uske baad kya?
Parents resistance and then the end, right?
This whole not talking with each other much, yet being drawn to each other is the most glorious phase of RBO personally "for me" so
I want to stretch it......... when less than 100 read my new updates I will can the story and do a Shubh raatri, shabba khair, Jai Hind!
If they go out to dinner, they will talk for three hours and make out and then in the next meeting one of them will have to say ILU and then it will have to end........
I can do that too......
Let me know what you guys think
Saaaz wants a slow "devirginization", so thats what it will be
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Dish,

Bahut mil liye dono aur bahut "baaten" bhi kar lee
Abhi dono thodi der akele, ek doosre se door door
It intensifies the attraction rey!
Har part mein milte rahe, make out karte rahe to I will have to end it in a day or two
If they are comfortable with each other, start talking with each other freely, go out shopping or to movies, uske baad kya?
Parents resistance and then the end, right?
This whole not talking with each other much, yet being drawn to each other is the most glorious phase of RBO personally "for me" so
I want to stretch it......... when less than 100 read my new updates I will can the story and do a Shubh raatri, shabba khair, Jai Hind!
If they go out to dinner, they will talk for three hours and make out and then in the next meeting one of them will have to say ILU and then it will have to end........
I can do that too......
Let me know what you guys think
Saaaz wants a slow "devirginization", so thats what it will be



Tum writer logon ka dimaag chalta hain yaar!!!!!!!!!!

Sahi ja rahe ho ... bas kuch updates har din dete raho, mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye

~Cheers,
Dish

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