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Posted: 14 years ago
too gud update aditee..
beautifully written....well done...!!
do cont. soon......luvdd it...!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
aditee sorry for late reply
i love your writing
please keep updating
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Posted: 14 years ago
10 C
Monday Lunch Hour
Her phone beeps a message as soon as she steps out of the room. She locates Niv and they decide to go out for lunch. Aman Wahi joins them. He seems really likeable. He is quite good looking too. Khanak wonders if Ehsaan handpicked good looking Punjabi guys to work in his company. Khanak thinks Aman's smile is not as gorgeous as Shaan's is but is nevertheless very charming

Stops in her tracks "Now I am comparing Shaan with other guys?" "WHY" "Jesus Christ!" something warns her there is a permanent change. They stop by at Paula's desk to check if she could go, but she is too wrapped up in calling Rahat Ehsaan's bro in Sao Paulo.

Shaan walks by watches the 3 of standing there chatting.

Paula:Tum nahi jaayega lunch mein?

Shaan: Who will do all the work around here "Paul"? (grins)

Paula:Who to sahi bola tum

Niv:Oh please Paula, not you too.

Paula: Kya matlab? Tum bhi? He is all mine Nivs

Niv: U can have him I have mine at home (winks at Shaan)

Paula then looks at Khanak

Paula: Abhi tum isko love nahi karne ka theek hai? The day he is 30 years older he is MINE! (mock-firmness)

Khanak has a "hand caught in the cookie jar" expression for a second but quickly composes herself with a "Hes not my type" (looking directly at him)

Paula is carefully watching them both

Shaan: Then I will just have to become HER type! (winks at Khanak) (A very obscure vague answer with no names taken)

Paula: Soch lo jaan!

Khanak: Don't need to........ Paula....... I just like one in a million kind. (suddenly sad)

Shaan is irritated that the conversation is turning into a trip dowm memory lane for Khanak😭😡

Paula: Soch lo! Shaan ek dum handsome hai aur smart hai, very much educated also.Ek baar chhod diya to miss karogi😳

Aman and Nivs are talking with one of the guests seated up front at the lobby.

Khanak: (looking at Shaan) No! I will be OK...... (I think)

Shaan has a "Really? Want to bet on it?" expression

Khanak: I have lots to do Paula. I am not coming in tomorrow so let me go grab some lunch.

Shaan waits for Paula to ask why she wont be around tomorrow, but her phone rings and Paula waves.

Khanak starts to walk away, something forces her to turn around, she does...... and sees him looking at her! Quickly turns back and steps out, she can feel his eyes on her while they wait for the elevator.

It arrives, after a few minutes wait, they step in, she faces the Reception yet again, looks at a spot on the heavy brass lettering on Paula's desk that says "Ajmera", he is on the phone and is facing sideways now, so she safely looks at him..........as if on cue, suddenly his head turns and their eyes meet before the wall of steel slides shut between them!

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Monday afternoon is quite uneventful except for some announcements......... one in particular that is completely a shocker to Khanak

There is a overnite offsite planned at the Ajmera Matheran Resort. Not ALL fun ofcourse. A 1 day boot camp of all those involved in Casa and an afternoon of fun at the local Spring Fair. To share best practices and ideas from previous projects.Vendors, partners, architects, construction contractors electrical, plumbing roofing, tiling'' you name it the reps were expected to be on the list. They would arrive on a Friday morning and return to Mumbai on a Sat nite. Over 200 reps were expected to attend.

She did not get a good feeling about it at all. She checked with Nivs if she could bring a guest, but she had answered in the negative. From that moment on Khanak's concentration flew out the window.

Nivs whispers she wont be able to as her brother is getting married that day.

She frantically takes as much notes as she is able to, in order to focus on work and divert her mind from this impending event

She wonders if Paula is going, but doesn't want to interrupt Nivs again, so decides to wait. Her finger tips are frozen. Suddenly a thought strikes her. "ALL he has done is come by to my house ONCE and sent me his phone number. Why is that reason for panic.

Thinking of phone numbers, she checks her email. Its there with no subject

She opens it, the number 9812345678 and a smiley face on the side

No signature!

The face mocks her'. Or so she thinks.

She closes it and is back on her desk top. It's a nature picture of River Karjat from the Malsamot Waterfalls, the picture was taken in her honeymoon to Rajwant Palace Resort at Rajpipla, four hours from Ahmedabad.

The mental spinning creaks to a halt. Her heart is stunned. She stares at it until her name is called out by Aman "Khanak, San Marco ceiling height kya hai?"

Aman: Khanak?

Shaken out of her trance''' "Ummm sorry! Kya?"

Shaan is watching her intently

Aman: San Marco ceiling height''. Average bata do''.

Khanak: Give me a minute?

Suddenly she is not worried about the man staring from across the table'' a sub zero coldness washes over''' or as Shaan would say " The Icicle Maiden" is back

She answers the question expressionless and goes back to staring at her picture.

Towards the evening there is excited chatter about who will ride the van and who will drive their cars

Opinions are divided, Nachiket: "Gujral?"

Shaan: Not sure''' haven't decided if I am going

Out of the blue, no longer in her honeymoon with ex-hubby induced stupor''.

Khanak "I will ride the van" (NOW she can go)

Shaan: I think I'll drive!

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Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb aditeee i loved it completely
these 2 r driving me crazy now..lol
cant wait fr wat comes next wid them:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome part aditee...!!well done..

as usual beautifully written...!!😳

Khanak has a "hand caught in the cookie jar" expression for a second but quickly composes herself with a "Hes not my type" (looking directly at him)

Shaan: Then I will just have to become HER type! (winks at Khanak)

luvdd dese lines..😆..cn i magine d scene..😍
too gud update..!!do cont. soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei aditee,
loved the part..in the index pls change the pg. no as 23 for 10B..i was searching in pg.22 n then got it there..lovely lovely update..will khanak call shaan?so now as khanak is going shaan to go..very eager to read the next part..update sooooooooooonnnnnnnn...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -SYS-

Eep!

I am falling in love with ShaNak all over again!
Thank you for that!

"Her hands smelled of him." Sigh.I read this line again and again!Loving this way of him putting 'his mark' on her.

Bangles scene-very cute!
First smile.Glorious.Love it even more for happening in the boardroom.I love moments when they are suspended in isolation in rooms full of people.Its just utterly romantic because at the end of the day they are all that matter to each other.You've brought this part of shaNak's relationship greatly into focus in your SS.




These were really cute scenes ... I also liked her tying her hair and again leaving it open a couple of times. The lift part was also awesome!!!!

Love it all ... Great writing yaar ... pls continue ... going back to the next part .... will finish and give more comments...

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ady!!..... just read 10B and C .....
cant wait for the rest!!...
dnt end it soon...pleej!
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Posted: 14 years ago

"Shaan waits for Paula to ask why she wont be around tomorrow, but her phone rings and Paula waves.

Khanak starts to walk away, something forces her to turn around, she does...... and sees him looking at her! Quickly turns back and steps out, she can feel his eyes on her while they wait for the elevator.

It arrives, after a few minutes wait, they step in, she faces the Reception yet again, looks at a spot on the heavy brass lettering on Paula's desk that says "Ajmera", he is on the phone and is facing sideways now, so she safely looks at him..........as if on cue, suddenly his head turns and their eyes meet before the wall of steel slides shut between them!"

Fantastic ...... the eyes meet ... wow I just imagined the eyelocks of KT and Yashu ... too good hai ji!!!!!!

Pls continue with the next part soon.... waiting very anxiously.

~Cheers,

Dish

Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Aditee.........
superb update.............loved it..............👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
khanak compose herself & have expression hes not my type..........& shan says i wil become her type......lol..........beautifully described.............
shan & khanak's eyelock.............wonderful..............
shan is going & khanak too..................😃
eagrly waiting 4 next update.............
continue soon..........

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