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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Hmmm.. res..

but I see short one...😭

Okay me reads the rest.. wow.. live update... love that!!

As for the update till his husky challenge in blue... *swwwooooonnnnnniiinnngggg* and *thud*

As for my heart beats.. can you seriously hear them aditee.. listen.. shh...

dhak.. dhak.. dhak.. dhak.. dhak dhak dhakdhak dhakdhakdhak... dhakdhakdhakdhak....

Now mind you this is real.. My heart is still racing as I type...😳

Waiting for more...😊

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Hey Aditee

read the part 10A ............

wow wonderful update lovely................................👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

khanak wore sari on friday...........& shan was not present there...........she missed him..........lovely

loved it............ur writing is awesome.............

part 10B.........

amazing..........she just ignored him & at lunch time he caught her

khanak was expecting his call............& shan was pleased at this thought...............

loved the convo b\w shan & khanak.............

paula told him that khanak was asking about him.............wonderful loved it................

continue please.............want to read more...............

Edited by angel_9 - 14 years ago

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

oye ads..wats dis yaar....small titbits here n dre.....plzzz continue!!

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

hei aditee,
v were expecting something for friday for things to happen between shaan n khanak..but it seems he cancelled all the plans on thursday nite itself for meeting his friend..so khanak is feeling jealous now?hope something might happen in the conference room now as they both r alone inside..ahhh..v really love ur FF..continue soon..

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Great Job Aditee...

Fresh off the Boat is what i'd say🤣🤣🤣🤣

Sorry bad joke...i know what a FOB is and I know I am one🤣🤣🤣

I meant Fresh off the PC...🤣

Anyways this was a cute update...I want another Alphabet update now...

btw how come Shaan doesn't let her be?🤣🤣 Make her run away so he can chase her...i wanna see that...ladke aise hi karte hain...

I liked the following analogy...too good:

Paula has spun a very thick and heavy garment out of it!

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

OMG I got another one for u:

FLOP= Fresh Love Off the PC🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

hei aditee,
v expected something to happen between them on friday when shaan left the pub..but he seemed to have cancelled all appointments including hers for some other friend..really felt bad for khanak..ope now something may happen in the conference room now as they r together there..v really love ur FF..continue soon..n thanks for the senn tamizh..

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

omgggggggggggggggg aditee k r u gonna kill me like slow poison its sooooooooooooooo good i loved it i can feel them .....lol

just pls update yr title so tht v know u have updated plsssss

wen next r u updating i really cant wait........lol

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

Just need a confirmation from ur end, this guy is TAKEN?? Right?? If not u know where to direct him!! 😆

I got reminded of the famous phrase, 'He came, he saw, he conquered'...........that is exactly what happened here. He just came, saw her & conquered her without her knowledge & will & she is utterly helpless, unable to do a thing about it. He is in every pore of her body, mind & soul & no matter how much she tries to negate the fact in heart of hearts she knows she can't. That's the plain simple truth! And he is solidly hooked as well by her entire being, her existence, her presence around him, his life! 👏 And now like some deep addiction he wants more of her!

Love it, next update kab hoga, kripaya karke batayenge mujhe, pls? Thank u! Just to let u know I am loving this FF & why do u want to end it so quickly?? It has high potential, isko aage leke ja pleej!