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Posted: 14 years ago
woww aditee...

Choo..cute part...luvdd itt...!!
His smell on her hands..and d bangle scene...*sigh*..
Fab part...do cont. Soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

ADITIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!

Do know have a lot of catching up to do......just finished Part 2 and 3. *kaan pakdofying!*
You just leave me spellbound, Aditi!! You truly do!! You have such a wonderful flair for writing....crisp, witty, and classy!!
Kya soch hai teri.....kya attention to detail.....kya treatment......simply WOW!!!
Part 2
Khanak's Ms....."misbehaving men, maddening music and mental torture" versus Shaan's Ms...."maidens, music, malt and masti"!!!
⭐️👏⭐️👏
Part 3
"She did not wear any jewelry, and wore very lil make up. Her hair was left open."😳😳😳 *seems to have rung a bell!"
the perfect antithesis for
"If I could rearrange the alphabet, I would put U and I together" (the BEST pick up line I have ever come across, really!!) 👏
"Waise maine nahi AAP dekhkar nahi chal rahe they, shaayad phone dekhkar apne dialog yaad kar rahey the?"
the perfect foil for
"winks) she means the movie I recently signed with YRF."
👏👏👏
PS: You truly are gifted, Aditi, or as our Dear Friend Gaayu would say....this truly is your calling, Aditi!!" 👏
Edited by dr.dsr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update awesome job yet again!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Cuteness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are back!
Thanks so much for loving it..........
Accounting and writing.......... where DO THEY meet?
Sigh!
Thanks sooooooo much.
Love you
I was actually planning to wrap it up by Part 11.
No hanky panky no pawing no shoving.....
This one is like the V Shantaram, Guru Dutt movies of 1950s Bollywood
Guru Dutt! SIGH!
His eyes did all the talking..........
There is a movie of his Mr & Mrs 55 almost EXACTLY like a M&B where he and Madhubala pretend to be hubby and wife......
Fantastic!
I never cared they didnt even touch each other the whole movie.
Do u guys really want this stretched out?
I am ready to wrap this one at 9F or 9G (falling in love) and then 10 would be the final part....... or max 11
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Posted: 14 years ago
yes yes yes yes aditee strtch this plssssssssssssssssss
its like master piece so pls let it continue fr all; of us:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aditeeeeeeeeeeee u r writing a FF & u didn't tell me??? 😡😡 I feel like giving u gaalis now! Itne bekaar fizool ki baat karte hai aur yeh nahi batayi??
I read it all at one go! I simply LOVED the subtleties in it, its my kinda story, 😃 eyes does the talking more than the tongues! The UNSAID that is more important than the said stuff! 👏 U made me love them more. Seriously! And u better update fast & let me know that u have done so. Luckily it was on the 1st page & so caught my eyes or else I would never have known!
Its a rich guy falling for a middle class girl but has a new ring to it & definitely is more endearing when it comes to the treatment, it has ur touch written all over it. Fantastic, keep it up pls. I got reminded of old times! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ms Lana
You are the kindest!
Ab aise hi time pass ke liye likha rey
Thanks for liking it so much
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Posted: 14 years ago
Agar yeh time pass hai toh creativity kya hoga?? U r being too modest. When r u updating next?
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 9D

Meeting ends, people start walking out, Niv stays back…….. she is aware of Shaan making the exit. He doesn't say anything to her.

Niv and her go until 8 PM…………. As she is stepping out for the day she hears the now familiar "Khanak"

She turns around, he is walking to towards her "Do you have a minute?"

She wonders if she should say "No!"

But decides not to….. what if its about work?

"Sure"

"Great"……. Ek minute….. (the layout of the floor is such, there are islands of cubes all over, most of the periphery is occupied by conf rooms or small meeting rooms. The center of the floor has coffee stations and "print copy" stations.) She is walking along the periphery headed out to the lobby to say her good byes for the day to Paula.

She lingers by Paula's desk waiting for him to join.

Paula: Hi! Jaan, ghar?

Khanak: Haan

Paula smiles

Will you come by tomorrow (Friday)?

Khanak: smiles back, I think so.

Paula: Apney ko ek movie jaana mangta hai sW*Hrt

Khanak: I would love that!

For a second it reminds Paula of someone she knows so well

There was a certain melancholy in this girl's eyes. She didn't laugh much….. didn't smile much even.

She was always composed. But something told Paula that's not the real "jaan"

Khanak makes a mental list of the things she picked up, realizes she left one of her USB drives in the conference room, walks back to get it

Returns to find Shaan standing by Paula's desk chatting and smiling…….. laughing even…….. she hears him laugh, its part deep part husky……. Walks up from behind him.

He looks at her, Paula watches the two……..

"He is so different from her! Wealthy, classy, so handsome. She is so "Indian", such a lovely girl….. something about the way their eyes communicated intrigued Paula a lot. HE would make her laugh. she was sure. She would "tame" him in return..... that would be good barter....

She would expect faithfulness, he will offer possessiveness

She would want love, he would just want her........

Khanak: Thx for watching my stuff

Paula: Anytime jaan.. to phir movie?

Khanak: Next weekend?

Shaan has a quizzical expression doesn't say anything "he had no idea about this friendship, wanted to know more)

He carefully observed how she carried her bag, tucked her hair back one last time….., opened her purse and got some change out………. Zipped it up, forgot to put her phone in, so opened it again and slid her phone in………. it was unusually quiet…….. copiers hummed at a distance, phones rang……. Faint conversations carried through….. but the two people that stood in front of Paula did not say a word to each other.

Shaan: Khanak?!

K:Hmmm?

Shaan: Do u have time on ur calendar tomm? I wanted to talk? I can send u an apt……….

Khanak heart starts to race "What if this is not about work"

Shaan: I will send u something? (punches some keys on his phone) There! I sent it!

Khanak hesitates…….. "Ummm" "sure" "Thanks"

Meeting invite for just the two of them? Butterflies take flight in her stomach

She barely looks at him, smiles at Paula and walks out

Paula watches her enter the elevator, Shaan's phone rings…… he walks over to the leather sofas and sits down and starts talking……….. is overjoyed to hear a voice at the other end

Paula wonders what it would be like if Shaan and Khanak were to fall in love!😍❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it Aditee! awesome making Paula the matchmaker lol

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