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Posted: 14 years ago

Nahinnn

I am literally surviving on this story...Kyun Ray...meri maut apne sir pe leni hai kya?
We are spamming this thread...lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGGG aditee,
shaan came at the right time..he would feel elated hearing those words from her..again the killer blue line..awww..dead..
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 49 B

11: 40 AM, Shivneri Nagar, April 30th, Saturday

Khanak (suddenly self conscious) What are YOU doing here? (confused)

He arches his eyebrows,and looks at her dryly "Why do you think?"

Khanak: on a Saturday morning? (stands by the door and continues the argument)

He leans on the door jamb, tucks his hands in his pockets and readies for it like he has all the time in the world "You don't see visitors on a Sat morning?" (mocks)

Checks her out'''

Khanak: Bus aise dikhti hoon main roz subah (saccharine smile) Having second thoughts?

Shaan: Not at all! (softly)

He pauses on the mole under her collar bone.

Khanak: Do you want to come in?

Shaan: Nope! The hallway is good! (laughing under his breath)

Asha's voice pleads "Pyaasi hoon main pyaasi rehne do" just as their eyes connect.

He seems taller than the 5'8" in his tennis shoes, she feels shorter than the 5'.

He is showered, shaved, smells like a cologne, squeaky clean, his jaw is green, the twin creases on his cheek pronounced as he tries to hold his amusement.

She feels like a slob, unkempt and messy.

Shaan: I am going to be accused of cradle robbing! (in her ear, she shuts her eyes when his face is by her ear)

Khanak: You should be! (unsteady)

Ritu walks out from the bedroom, "Arrey tum Shaan? Itni subah? But I am sure Khanak is thrilled" (nudges her)

Khanak: Hmmmpff! (steps away)

Shaan: Thrilled is not the word for it! (referring to the private exchange a minute ago).

He straightens, walks in casually. There is stuff every where, shopping bags, newspapers, clothes, books, CDs... Khanak has gone into the kitchen, to lower the heat, on the stove and...

Ritu: Don't mind haan! Jisko under dressed hona chahiye who space suit mein hai, aur main aise! (sheepish, looking down at her shorts and tee)

Khanak brings water and sets it on the 4 inches of space on the coffee table, as she bends down, she can feel his eyes on her neckline.

Shaan: The space suit is not bad at all! (leaning on the wall by the window, as there is no room to sit)

Khanak coolly walks into the bedroom and picks out the burgundy cotton supatta and swathes herself in it, looks at the mirror and winks, before stepping out.

Ritu: Achha sun, I am going to go take a shower, I am going to Mamiji's

Khanak: Kyon? (her heart sprints at Olympic speed) Ghar kaun clean karega? Kahin nahi ja rahi ho tum.

Ritu: Samjha kar yaar

Khanak Busy chopping curry leaves in the kitchen " Kyon?"

Ritu: Mamiji is inviting a guy, SOME GUY for lunch Ahem! (winks)

Khanak looks at her in shock, she signals her that Shaan is in the room and if she should be sharing such private news publicly.

Ritu: Don't be silly (whispers) Its OK

Shaan is checking messages on the phone, looking out the window every few minutes.

Khanak: Why do I feel you made that up in the last 5 minutes?

Ritu: (dialing) Yeh le phir talk to Mamiji.

Khanak: No! (softly)

She busies herself making poha,

Ritu: Off to take a shower.

Microwaves some peanuts, when she senses him enter the 5*10 kitchen, stands by the gas, watches her do one task after another. Being quiet is her forte so it does not bother her. He is learning the art also, he just observes. She bends down to get a serving bowl from the shelf under neath the granite counter, her dupatta falls off one shoulder, he drapes it, back chastely.

Shaan: If that's not good enough, I can wrap you in it! (mocks)😆

Khanak: Oh! This is just PERFECT! (smiles)😃

Silence

Khanak: aap khaayenge? (softly)

Shaan: Sure! (simple, "Yes"s and "No" s)

He reaches for a spoon by the side of the serving bowl, his forearm grazes her bare arm.

She drops the serving spoon with a clutter.

Khanak: you need to be in the living room (whines)

Shaan: There is no room to sit! (complains back)

Khanak: this kitchen is tiny!

Shaan: Seems fine to me! (stops her from picking up the filled serving bowl, by placing a hand on her left hand, she sets the bowl back on the counter, and withdraws her hand, his hand is still holding hers, thumb on the ring)

Shaan: I want to taste some first! ( scoops some with the spoon in his left hand)

Khanak watches the food travel from spoon to mouth. Waits in anticipation'.

Shaan: Delicious! Khanak...Looks like you've heard of the "the way to a man's heart,..."(mocking)

Khanak: Oh! I just strive to get to his bed! (casual, without blinking an eyelid, sassy, feisty)😉

She feels the grip tighten on her left hand, and the smile wiped off his face to be replaced with something very disturbing.

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Posted: 14 years ago
What an early morning treat!! Wow! 👏
Now that is what I call a spunk in a girl! She knows exactly how to handle & what to say to bring an almighty from 9th cloud to earth that too with a big THUD! 😆
She was happy to see him alright & that wink of hers in the mirror said it all. And u know when u described y'day about her plunging neckline I knew Shaan will have something to say about it. 😃 Or if not say he will definitely notice with his usual hands in the pocket slightly raised eyebrows his attitude conveying he observed it! 😃 Here in front of Ritu he was civil enough. And I am loving this Ritu, she is so spontaneous & happy go lucky! Why do I also feel it was a concoction of hers about some guy after seeing Shaan there!! Too sweet to let the lovebirds alone!!
So finally Shaan Gujral is getting used to veg dishes! I am sure he will enjoy them more & more.
And that repartee of Khanak will be ricocheting for a long time now to Shaan. I am waiting for his response now! He might softly ask her with a warning tone if she wants to pick up a fight again or maybe his face induces the fighting hormones in her or maybe the facade of a fight is just a defence mechanism of Khanak's to withstand his charm & sex appeal or maybe she is too eager to find out the thrill to be in bed with him & thus is throwing such challenges!! 😃 I am dying to know now!
And that momentary pause of Shaan which showed the comment was not palatable kind of makes me wonder will he delve deep to wonder why he didn't like the insinuation of hers though she is absolutely right! Somewhere it didn't sit with him well, why?!! I know its too early for the realisation of 'love' & I don't want that but maybe a mere confusion as to why it hurts so much.
As usual a splendid update! Yeh dil maange more like always!! 😃
Have a rocking day! I will now for sure with this goofy grin pasted on my face. 😆
Edited by lghosh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Off to work!
Shaam ko milti hoon
The next part will be steamier than a pressure cooker! (Ya Right!)
Crazy busy weekend
Love you Souma!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay.. first the bold blues.. now the florescent pinks too getting bold...
Love the way Khanak tells Ritu, Kahin nahin jaa rahi ho tum.. clean up!! gosh... I hope he is as messy as Ritu!! Will wait for that line... again...😉
Sigh.. yeh love aisa kyun hota hain? 😳
W&W for more...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aditee, you need to make this your full-time job. jk! Brilliant as usual. Oh and I like the 'sassy, Feisty' Khanak. 👏. Atta girl!! x
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Aditee...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

amazing update...

loved it...

but you have tendency to make us wait at the wrong line...

but loved the shanak...Ritu wow she just want to go away from here...she can't handle these two hotees... together...😆

loved the kitchen part...amazing description...
update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Aditee,

I haven't really appreciated anyone's updates formally due to work and exams...but I wanted to let you know that I love your style!!!
I love the story too! I thought it would be the typical saas bahu style but u made it ur own!!!
even though it is a bit predictable ending, the way you are going with the story is unpredictable...
I can't wait for the next one!

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