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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Hailaaa....

Itna chota sa part...!

Nice one ......Soo typically SHANAK !

Continue soon !!

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

thanks Guys...I know this one was short, but next update shall hopefully make up for that...😃

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adeelaanwar

@adeelahuju

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

excellent dear.....
loved the every single line........i enjoyed my self to read it......
update it soooooooooooooon..
can't wait for the next part..........

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purvi08

@purvi08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

saaz this is so short😡

but it was very nice🤗

Edited by sayni - 14 years ago

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Yasharanrocks

@Yasharanrocks

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

its too short.but gr8.plz cont soon with a longgggggggg update..................

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Saaz,it's beautiful.Very well written and I loved the ruler's involvement.Great to see Shantanu's imaginations of Khanak and his angst.How great it would have been if we got to see this,instead we got a delirious Shan for few minutes lol.Loved it so much.Please do continue soon!

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dtu

@sampar

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

loved it again saaz👏👏👏......at least ur showing a repenting shantanu ......shaan imagining khanak,😳.....hope gopi kuch kare for these burthals.......Bhindi , haila my favorite....mooh main pani ai gaya.😆😆😆... i want some right now 😆

continue sooon but with longer parts plzzzzzzzz😃

cheers

shai 😉

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Aditi S

@aditee

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Wonderful Saazy

Buildup is great!

Zaara aur lamba likhiye aap, yeh kya, Star One ke promos ki tarah, shuru hua nahi ki khatam bhi ho chala?

Zara agla part 10-12 pages ka kariye

Very nice!

I am happy, this Shaan is remorseful, and thinks so much

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Wow!!!!
dis is really nice.....🤗🤗
u hv written it so nicely.....😃😃
hope shaan brngs khanak home jaldi jaldi
n d title is jst 2 gud.... i luv dis song
continue soon.....