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@The_May_Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Sorry for not commenting earliar, but I am seriously busy with work and home at the moment😳😆...

Anyway...Another fantastic part and I loved the nork-jork between Ansh and Anya...Another burthal couple, as if one was not enough...Poor Shaan is going to pay for Ansh and Anya plans, Khanak sees through all this😆...

First of all I liked how you showed Shaan's reflection and him looking at Khanak's world, or her point of view...I wonder if he has ever considered the contrast before...He knows their love crossed all that, but I am glad he is thinking more about it 😊...Khanak knew his world, but did he ever look into her's before?..Loved seeing him appreciate it now...

I also loved how Shaan just looses all sense around Khanak...I can just picture his face😳😊...Tohri betabi dikh rahin hai😆...

Ofcourse Khanak would know about Anya's plan...She is ismart girl after all😉...But she still let him ride on the scooty, just to see how far he would go😆...She cannot ignore him and glad to see her be happy for a short while...Loved the scooty scene, Shaan taking full advantage of this golden chance and even Khanak was affected...But then Shaan ne phirse koi galti kardi ...I think he will surprise her by getting the stole back...Hense building her trust in him 😊...

Navrati scenes were blissful Shilli!👏.❤️..I am worried that Khanak will blame Shaan though...Anya and Ansh are getting closer, but still obssesed by Shantanu and Khanak😆...

I am so glad that Khanak actually told Shaan exactly what was in her heart 😊❤️😭...Shaan reaction to ShaNak in the rain, these scenes played vividly in my mind...As all your writing does...Shaan's worry for Khanak, the lift scene and the rain scene were perfectly them and so romantic...Khanak's declaration and Shaan's apology had me glued...Bitter sweet and once again your heart goes out to the two love birds...It hard see them hurting like this, want them to to be free of the past...

I don't know how Khanak will react next, but atlaest they are starting to ment...ShaNak are moveing back towards eachother...I think now Khanak also needs to understand Shaan's POV too 😊😳...

Edited by The_May_Rose - 13 years ago

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

lovely update
the trio planning is super fun to read
i loved the shanak moments... was waiting for it
though in her drunk state but she tolds him all abt past
i loved the way he says sorry and em lukin fwd to many shanak moments
penned amazingly
update soon

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

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Edited by The_May_Rose - 13 years ago

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ktymfan

@ktymfan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#554

🤗hugs...next part jaldi plz::::..::::::-saroj

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#555

update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!😭😭😡

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Chandana. H

@chandu8881

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Awesome update Shilpa!!😃
Loving their plots in making Khanak to come back to Shaan!!
Waiting for next one eagerly!!

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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#557

Note:

I came back to continue this FF just for d sake of u guys. I am sincerely thankful to all those who read each and every person who reads every update and bothers to comment.

I know i am lazy, am always late in posting, my FF stry might not be dat interesting as oders, my writing skills might be bad.

But still, atleast for those who used to read and comment, who even used to ask me for updates, whom i even pmed, could have atleast bothered to read and comment.

Neways, ur wish. Honestly for a writer, feedback is more than anything. Lack of it, really deminishes the interest.

So, this delay might continue and even then after 4-5 updates, d FF might end!

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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: The_May_Rose
Sorry for not commenting earliar, but I am seriously busy with work and home at the moment😳😆...

Anyway...Another fantastic part and I loved the nork-jork between Ansh and Anya...Another burthal couple, as if one was not enough...Poor Shaan is going to pay for Ansh and Anya plans, Khanak sees through all this😆...

First of all I liked how you showed Shaan's reflection and him looking at Khanak's world, or her point of view...I wonder if he has ever considered the contrast before...He knows their love crossed all that, but I am glad he is thinking more about it 😊...Khanak knew his world, but did he ever look into her's before?..Loved seeing him appreciate it now...

I also loved how Shaan just looses all sense around Khanak...I can just picture his face😳😊...Tohri betabi dikh rahin hai😆...

Ofcourse Khanak would know about Anya's plan...She is ismart girl after all😉...But she still let him ride on the scooty, just to see how far he would go😆...She cannot ignore him and glad to see her be happy for a short while...Loved the scooty scene, Shaan taking full advantage of this golden chance and even Khanak was affected...But then Shaan ne phirse koi galti kardi ...I think he will surprise her by getting the stole back...Hense building her trust in him 😊...

Navrati scenes were blissful Shilli!👏.❤️..I am worried that Khanak will blame Shaan though...Anya and Ansh are getting closer, but still obssesed by Shantanu and Khanak😆...

I am so glad that Khanak actually told Shaan exactly what was in her heart 😊❤️😭...Shaan reaction to ShaNak in the rain, these scenes played vividly in my mind...As all your writing does...Shaan's worry for Khanak, the lift scene and the rain scene were perfectly them and so romantic...Khanak's declaration and Shaan's apology had me glued...Bitter sweet and once again your heart goes out to the two love birds...It hard see them hurting like this, want them to to be free of the past...

I don't know how Khanak will react next, but atlaest they are starting to ment...ShaNak are moveing back towards eachother...I think now Khanak also needs to understand Shaan's POV too 😊😳...

Oh My God!

Itna lamba comment!

Touched, Blessed and Overwhelmed!

Well, initially Shan was kind of a brat, who got everything he got. He never spared his mind to think abt things, but now he has changed, become more calm n composed. dats y this time he actually bothered to look into Khanak's world, her interests.

hehe, he is latto over khanak.

n for stole, toh lets c if he gets dat back or not