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Priyasree

@shonai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#571

read both updates...

ll comment tomo

but for now ... 1 word "FANTASTIC"

ll b back with my comment tomo

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#572

Beautiful Part Dear ...loved it 👏 👏 👏

Anya & Ansh both are too cute & stupid at the same timee 😊 & Shaan is trapped between these too cute lovers 😆 but they genuinely wantes to reunite shanak at any cost 😊

Shaan & kahank in a art galary loved the way Shaan scolded himself after Admiring his own wife 😆 LOved loved loved loved the way you have penned down the differnce between the two personalities... Shaan & Khanak 👏 two different individuals has different choices, lifestyle everything but Love always bonded them in Storngest relationship 👏 Beautifully Written 👏

Anya & Shaan's SMS chat was too good 👏 Anya is truly a Rock star wow scooty ride ...awesome plaannn i must say ...it immidtelt gacve me visual of Shanak HM in Goa 😛 loved the Super talented actors 😆 Anya was excellent She convinced Khanak to take her scooty 😆 & Ansh stole the update with him Charms truly ...he is sooo good. 👏 his convo with the gallery guy cracked me up he is aweosomeee 👏

Finally Anya & Ansh managed with heir acting skill & Shaan the actor is success in taking lift from wifey ,,,,,,,loved his noughty antics 😆 hawww he actually throw her stole 😲 but get punished too in return 😛 Ansh & anya were the limelight of this update .loved them both😃

Wohhhaaa Garba & Dandiya function Wow you made all the Gujju's including me Super happy. Ansh & Anay were busy drooling over Shanak & Superstar finally made entry. Ansh did his task 😛 he mixed alcohol in her drink & asked Shaan to handle her 😃 well done Ansh ///super cool Idea

ROFL aj khanak apni saara acting ka bandar khali karne meinbusy hain 😛 loved her hello & all the famous hindi film dialogues 😆 hilarious dear 😊 but yeh kya she slapped him 😲 loved the way shaan followed her & in dranken state she pour her heart out in front of him 😭 she is deeply hurt & Shaan too realised her state, loved the way he held her storngly & said soorry

Their togetherness ...Forgetting pain rested in their heart & the kiss under the blessing of soothing rain drops ...ufff you made it soo beautiful & Special dear

Sorry for the late comment ...Continue soon

Take care

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monika_aa

@monika_aa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#573

i read whole update in a row..if i gv detail comnt ..it wud b n OS...

update next part soon ..so i can gv brief review...

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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: shonai
read both updates...
ll comment tomo
but for now ... 1 word "FANTASTIC"
ll b back with my comment tomo

thank u

but ur tomm is already here

comment kahan hai madam? 😆

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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: -pranjal-
Beautiful Part Dear ...loved it 👏 👏 👏

Anya & Ansh both are too cute & stupid at the same timee 😊 & Shaan is trapped between these too cute lovers 😆 but they genuinely wantes to reunite shanak at any cost 😊

Shaan & kahank in a art galary loved the way Shaan scolded himself after Admiring his own wife 😆 LOved loved loved loved the way you have penned down the differnce between the two personalities... Shaan & Khanak 👏 two different individuals has different choices, lifestyle everything but Love always bonded them in Storngest relationship 👏 Beautifully Written 👏

Anya & Shaan's SMS chat was too good 👏 Anya is truly a Rock star wow scooty ride ...awesome plaannn i must say ...it immidtelt gacve me visual of Shanak HM in Goa 😛 loved the Super talented actors 😆 Anya was excellent She convinced Khanak to take her scooty 😆 & Ansh stole the update with him Charms truly ...he is sooo good. 👏 his convo with the gallery guy cracked me up he is aweosomeee 👏

Finally Anya & Ansh managed with heir acting skill & Shaan the actor is success in taking lift from wifey ,,,,,,,loved his noughty antics 😆 hawww he actually throw her stole 😲 but get punished too in return 😛 Ansh & anya were the limelight of this update .loved them both😃

Wohhhaaa Garba & Dandiya function Wow you made all the Gujju's including me Super happy. Ansh & Anay were busy drooling over Shanak & Superstar finally made entry. Ansh did his task 😛 he mixed alcohol in her drink & asked Shaan to handle her 😃 well done Ansh ///super cool Idea

ROFL aj khanak apni saara acting ka bandar khali karne meinbusy hain 😛 loved her hello & all the famous hindi film dialogues 😆 hilarious dear 😊 but yeh kya she slapped him 😲 loved the way shaan followed her & in dranken state she pour her heart out in front of him 😭 she is deeply hurt & Shaan too realised her state, loved the way he held her storngly & said soorry

Their togetherness ...Forgetting pain rested in their heart & the kiss under the blessing of soothing rain drops ...ufff you made it soo beautiful & Special dear

Sorry for the late comment ...Continue soon

Take care

Aww!

I just love ur comments

hehe, thank u so much for loving Anya and Ahan. They are stupid yet cute.

Glad u loved Shanak scenes 😊

Next time, post comments jaldi

btw, dat wasnt SMS chat.

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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: monika_aa
i read whole update in a row..if i gv detail comnt ..it wud b n OS...
update next part soon ..so i can gv brief review...

no kanjusi madam,

i am eager for ur detailed comments, even if its an OS 😆

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Priyasree

@shonai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: sweetsute

thank u

but ur tomm is already here

comment kahan hai madam? 😆

sorry sorry ji😆... went for a movie & was watching sa re ga ma pa...😊

just came to post comment...😆

& m going to give you some gyan too..wait😆

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Priyasree

@shonai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#578

Part 14

lovely update

Awww baby Shaan was giving a tough time to her mamma...that's cute.

Anya!!! aghhh!!!! she is such a spoil brat ... how could she talk like this with Khanak???

loved how Meghna told anya abt Shanak story... one particular time, my voice choked, when Khanak was seeing Shaan & her pics & bcame emotional...beautifully penned.

Finally!!!! Anya ko thodi si akkal ayi...& she called Khanak di...hmmm, good. but still m angry with u Anya!!

Ansh is sooo sooo cute.

I bcame sad too when Shaan spoke about Khanak & his life...their love.

Ansh cracked me up...Gosh!!! I cant stop laughing. he fell flat on his foot... & his dialogues toh... let me quote some lines

" I am touching your feet sir. Aap mahan insaan ho, devta ho, mere bhagwan ho"

oh! Aapke is bhakt ka naam Ansh hai

" Nope! You deserve a hug sir"

" Aajse aap mere bade bhaiya and Anya pair chuo jethji ke"

actually Shilli, U deserve a hug...awesome writing.

ansh & anya r couple...really??? I mean so early...or r they going to pretend????

*Mission ShaNak* waiting for it.

part 15

cming up😳

Edited by shonai - 13 years ago

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Priyasree

@shonai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#579

Part 15

wonderful gift on Navratri😃

Anya & Ansh r planning to bring Shanak back.😉

loved their scooty ride😃...RBO ki yaad agayi he sang the song but forgot the actors😆 & what a way of Khanak to correct him🤣🤣

shaan threw her stole & she dropped him in the mid road.

Dandiya event...wow!!!!!

drunk Khanak...hailaaa!!!! "Khana Khaya? Kemcho"🤣🤣

Shaan ki shamat agayi... I got reminded of Bhang scene in RBO.

loved Khanak's anarkali avatar in the elevator🤣🤣... beautiful moments. u r awesome👏..can imagine☺️...OMG!!! she slapped him with her sandal.😲😲

her pain was visible in her talk😭😭... he said sorry in the best way he could❤️...and it was simply *hayeee☺️*

all the shanak moment was fantabulous😃👏!!!!

the ending lines were superb!!👏

" hmm..yup, I would have said the same, but the thing is if you love some1 deeply and whatever stupid things or places, the person loves, everything seems like a paradise." 100% agree😃

"Gosh! Y am I ogling at my own wife?"super cute😊

"Khanak ki duniya? Meri duniya kya hai?" beautifully explained👏👍🏼

" Sun beta, teri role yahan khatam, tu ja apni gallery sambhal" 🤣🤣 ansh is so funny

"Whatever, marke bolne ki kya jarurat hai?" super duper cute😆😆

update when u get time😃

will wait.

🤗🤗

Priyasree

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#580

Originally posted by: sweetsute

Aww!

I just love ur comments

hehe, thank u so much for loving Anya and Ahan. They are stupid yet cute.

Glad u loved Shanak scenes 😊

Next time, post comments jaldi

btw, dat wasnt SMS chat.