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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: loveshanak

that was a sweet😊 and short 😡update Shiksha😆...but .loved it


especially the part where Khanak prays for Shaan and Shaan for Khanak.....lovely...

looking forward for d next part...


same here!!...
thnx for the PM shiksha!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh no shiksha..i felt the update as a short one..u shud hav written more 2 giv us some interesting twists..tat was bad of u..c v readers r too greedy so write a lengthy update next time..update soon..waiting for some shanak moments...

liked the part where they prayed 4 each other..n loved panditji's blessings..
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
so nice yaar...pls continue ASAP...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Hi Shiksha
Nice update 👏 please continue
Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Yes the updates are very good!!!interesting!!continue as and when u can..!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Nicely written and well thought of....
loved the premise.....praying for each other is cute !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ohhh!!!!!!!!!
dat was really nice............
continue soon.........😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
lovely update dear .........gud going plz update soon .....



luv zara
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks to everyone for appreciating me so much & to the silent readers also so here goes part 9 for u n i hpe u lyk dis 1 also & i am nt able 2 write long parts coz i hve my exams cming up so venever i m free i write it so pls forgive me for not writing long parts

PART 9

Shaan & khanak sat on the bench & talked for a long time. They were about to leave when khanak saw that at a stall there was a family in which there was a little girl of about 6 or 7 years & she was roaming & playing with her mother & father. The girl was holding her mother's & father's hands & was walking like a small baby walks & was enjoying a lot. Khanak stood still & observed them from a distance & tears welled up in her eyes & shaan kept walking because he didn't notice that khanak had stopped walking but after sometime he realized that khanak was not with him he looked at the back & saw khanak standing there staring at some people he went back to khanak & kept his hands on her shoulder & wiped her tears & both of them went & sat in the car

In the car

Shaan:- khanak tum theek toh ho na dekho please unke baare mein kuch mat socho, haan tum ek kaam karo tum mujhse baat karti raho theek hai

Khanak:- relax shaan main bilkul theek hoon bas woh us time pe mujhe mom aur dad ki yaad aa gayi thi par ab main bilkul theek hoon

Shaan:- pakka

Khanak:- haan baba pakka

Shaan:- promise na khanak tum mujhse jhooth toh nahi bol rahi na tum pakka promise theek ho na

Khanak:- haan shaan pakka promise main bilkul theek hoon aur bhala main tumse kyun jhooth bolungi

Shaan:- ok

Now it was 9 at night so shaan asked khanak if she wants to have dinner outside only

Shaan:- khanak ab 9 baj gaye hai toh ab hume dinner kar lena chaiye

Khanak:- haan

Shaan:- toh tum dinner kahin restaurant mein karna chahogi

Khanak:- mujhe problem nahi hai kaise bhi chalega

Shaan:- toh theek hai aaj main tumhe Mumbai ke best restaurant mein lekar chalta hoon & woh mera favourite restaurant bhi hai

Khanak:- cool

Shaan drove to his favourite & the best restaurant of Mumbai

In the restaurant

The waiter came to receive them

Shaan:- a table for 2 please

Waiter:- yes sir

Then the waiter took them to the inside of the restaurant where there were all romantic couples seated & the place was also very romantic. There were red & white balloons all over the place & it was dark with a little bit of moonlight coming & very dim light on the top of every table & the table had a candle in the center. The waiter made shaan & khanak sit & he lighted the candle which was in the center of the table & so it was shaan & khanak's candle light dinner. The waiter then left & firstly for some time shaan & khanak looked at each other & then the waiter got the menu cards gave it to them & left from there

Shaan:- tum kya lo gi khanak

Khanak:- mujhe kuch bhi chalega

Shaan:- bolo na khanak tumhe kya pasand hai

Khanak:- mujhe sab kuch pasand hai shaan tumhe jo pasand hai woh order kar lo

Shaan:- nahi

Khanak:- matlab????

Shaan:- arre mera matlab hai aaj meri pasand ka nahi sab kuch tumhari pasand ka hoga

Khanak:- and kya main pooch sakti hoon aisa kyun?

Shaan:- nahi

Khanak:- ab nahi ka matlab kya hai shaan

Shaan;- nahi matlab tum nahi pooch sakti

Khanak;- shannnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Shaan:- khanakkkkkkkkkkkk

Khanak:- shaan please

Shaan:- khanak please

Khanak:- shaan main yahaan se chali jaungi agar tumne mujhe aur irritate kiya toh

Shaan:- ok jao par yeh toh batati jaao ki maine tumhe kahaan irritate kiya

Khanak:- tum mujhe itni der se irritate hi toh kar rahe ho, mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi de rahe

Shaan:- kaunsa sawaal

Khanak:- shaan bano mat

Shaan:- khanak bolo na kaunsa sawaal

Khanak:- maine tumse poocha tha na ki aaj sab kuch mere pasand ka kyun order karna chahte ho

Shaan:- oh woh sawaal, aise hi

Khanak:- theek hai main ja rahi hoon tum akele hi dinner kar lena

Khanak got up to leave but shaan held her hand & got up from his seat.

Shaan:- khanakkkk, main toh mazaak kar raha tha, chalo ab yahaan betho

Shaan made khanak sit down on the place where she was sitting & sat on his knees in front of her & held her hands & said :- khanak, main toh tumhare saath mazaak kar raha tha aur tumhara question tha ki & shaan starts acting as if he is thinking what her question was & then khanak became angry & pouted at him & was about to get up but he stopped her from getting up by holding her shoulders & made her sit down by holding her shoulders & said;- haan baba yaad hai tumhara question kyat ha, tumhara question yeh tha ki main aaj tumhare pasand ke khane ka order kyun de raha hoon right

Khanak nodded her head in a yes & said

Khanak:- haan par ab answer toh karo mere question ko, khanak said in a very cute way making a very cute face

Shaan just laughed seeing her expressions & her way of talking

Shaan:- ok baba toh tumhare question ka answer yeh hai kyunki aaj tum pehli baar iss restaurant mein aayi ho aur usse bhi zyaada important baat ki aaj tum mere saath aayi ho tumhare shaan ke saath aur jab bhi tum mere saath hogi tab main tumhare liye woh time itna special bana doonga ki tum apni poori zindagi mein kabhi bhi mere saath bitaya hua waqt nahi bhoologi, shaan said in a very romantic & flirtatious way but with lots of intensity in his eyes

Khanak was just lost in his eyes & the way he was expressing his feelings

Khanak (held shaan's hand):- shaan tum meri life mein jo importance rakhte ho woh tum bhi nahi jaante , shaan ka hona khanak ki zindagi mein bahut ahmiyat rakhta hai aur shaan ke saath spent kiya hua har moment khanak ke liye waise hi special ho jaata hai shaan ke hone se hi special ho jaata hai aur shaan ko khanak apne marne ke baad bhi kabhi nahi bhula paayegi.

Shaan & khanak were lost in each other's eyes & in the background rang badalti odhni's title song was playing & after the song got over the waiter came & their intense moment was disrurbed

The waiter came & said sir aapne apna order decide kar liya hai kya

After listening to the waiter shaan went & sat back on his knees & told the waiter to come after 5 minutes so that they could decide the order. The waiter agreed to them & went

Shaan:- so khanak tum kya khana chahogi

Khanak told shaan what she liked to have & the waiter came after 5 minutes & shaan told their order to him.

The waiter took the order & left & shaan & khanak started talking in general about the life of Mumbai & delhi but shaan decided not to talk much about delhi as he knew khanak would be upset thinking of delhi.

The waiter then came with their dinner & served them.

Shaan & khanak started eating their food & after finishing their food shaan signaled the waiter to come & clear up the stuff & get the bill

The waiter got the bill, shaan paid the amount

Shaan:- chale khanak

Khanak:- haan chalo

They left from there.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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cute one... waiting for the next part

Edited by priya_cool_123 - 14 years ago

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