ShaNak new love story updated part 52 on page 99 - Page 7

hei y do u think of stop writing this FF.its nice.i used 2 read but not good in giving ideas as writer.may b u need 2 include some characters 2 give twists n 2 keep the story moving.but dont think of stopping it now itself.if not 50 definitely some members like me love to read ur FF.so keep going girl..we expect u to update it..

Hey guys actually I wnt b able 2 update till 16th coz I m going out of town W*H my family n I ll b back on Wednesday so I ll update it den Luv shiksha

shiksha awesome hun loved the way he carried her in so cute and the way he loks at her sleeping

wow!!!
it was really cute..........😃
continue soon...........

oye hoye loved it

keep writing dear

luv zara

ok guys i m back & i m updating d next part in 5 min n tanx a lot 2 all f u

hpe u lyk dis 1 also & pls do comment & criticize & pls bring in ur ideas so dat i cn involve dem 2

PART 7

Khanak smiled & went to get ready & even shaan went to get ready.

After sometime khanak came all ready in shaan's room but she entered without knocking into his room. Shaan was wearing his vest & had just picked up his shirt from the bed whistling but khanak entered & saw him in his vest & immediately closed her eyes & turned away & spoke fastly & nervously & she was even shaking while standing & said oh shaan I am sorry maine realize nahi kiya ki tum aise mera matlab hai main knock karke nahi aayi tumhari galati hai mera matlab hai main knock karke nahi aayi isiliye meri galati hai I m sorry shaan main chalti hoon thodi time baad aati hoon tab tak tum poori tarah ready ho jaaoge ok haan bye & shaan smiled all the way khanak was saying these things & the way she was saying all these things while shaking made shaan laugh harder but still he controlled his laughter but could not control his smile & then khanak was about to leave & suddenly shaan came in his mischievous mood & thought of troubling khanak & then shaan shouted in a loud voice khanak ruko so that he could stop khanak from leaving & khanak immediately stopped & started shaking & shaan laughed but did not laugh out loud because he was in a mood to trouble khanak. He came close to her & was speaking in khanak's ear

Shaan ( in his flirtatious & husky tone):- khanak kya hua tum mujhe aise dekh ke bhaag kyun rahi ho, mujhse darr lag raha hai, ki hum dono iss ghar mein akele hai aur koi bhi nahi

Khanak:-na… nahi shaan aisi koi baat nahi hai main…. Main bhala tumse kyun darungi, khanak said still not looking into shaan's eyes & shaking & nervously speaking & shaan noticed that she was still nervous & decided to trouble her more & came more closer to her & said:- toh tum mujhse nahi darti, toh phir mujhse bhaag kyun rahi ho aur meri taraf dekh ke mujhse baat kyun nahi kar rahi, mujhse nazrein kyun chura rahi ho khanak

Khanak:- shaan main main tumse nahi bhaag rahi

Shaan:- toh phir meri aankhon mein dekh kar mujhse baat karo & he turned her to face him & held her by her shoulders & she started shaking as soon as shaan turned her & shaan decided to tell khanak that he was playing a prank & lifted her chin up so that she could face him & said

Shaan:- khanak main toh mazaak kar raha tha, firstly he was saying this in a low tone & then came to his normal tone while saying mazaak kar raha tha & bursted into a loud laughter. ( rang badalti odhni title song starts playing-- & ok guys I don't know I ll b able to make myself clear in this song par or not so please jus imagine the actions playing with the song which I am writing)Khanak was fuming with anger after knowing that shaan was making a fool out of her & was playing a prank on her & just pouted looking at shaan & then turned her face to the other side. Shaan laughed at her reaction but then Shaan then went to the other side where she was shaking & held his ears & said sorry but khanak was very angry so she again turned to the other side but she was also laughing but hiding it from shaan then shaan again changed his position & again said sorry & khanak finally nodded her head & said its ok (now the song is over) then shaan said:- waise khanak tumhe manana toh padega ki maine mazaak bahut achcha kiya hai na & then khanak nodded her head in a yes & started laughing loudly full of happiness & shaan thought that finally he was successful in his task & he had made khanak laugh & he thought that after so many days khanak had laughed openly & shaan kept looking at her. Khanak saw shaan was looking at her & smiling & khanak asked kya hua tum mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho, she said this in between her laughter & then waved his hand in front of shaan but still shaan was in the same pose & didn't react so then khanak shaked shaan from his shoulders & he came out of his thoughts & said kya hua khanak

Khanak:- shaan mujhe toh kuch nahi hua par tumhe kya hua

Shaan:- kya matlab

Khanak:- mera matlab hai ki main tumse pooch rahi thi kit um mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe the

Shaan:- uhh………woh main aise hi…………..

Khanak:- ok ab tum ek kaam karo apni shirt pehen lo aur bahaal aa jaao main tumhara bahaar hi intezaar kar rahi hoon

Shaan:- ok tum chalo main abhi aaya

Khanak:- ok

Khanak went out so that shaan could wear his shirt & was standing in the dining room & shaan came after wearing his shirt. After shaan came in the dining room khanak saw him & kep looking at him. She was not able to take her eyes from him. He was looking like a greek god, she thought that she had never in her life seen a more handsome, hot, good looking guy & she didn't know what was happening to her but she felt a sudden attraction towards shaan & for the first time she noticed how good looking shaan was although she knew shaan was very smart & good looking but she had never felt that she was attracted towards him but today she was actually being attracted to him. Shaan saw that khanak was staring at him continuously so he decided to bring her out of her thoughts & waved his hand in front of khanak's face but still there was no reaction khanak was still staring at him so he clicked his fingers in front of khanak's face & finally khanak came out of her deep thoughts & then he went a little close to khanak & said khanak main jaanta hoon ki main bahut good looking aur handsome hoon & I know tum mujhe isiliye ghoor rahi thi

Khanak:- shaan tum……….tum apne aap ko jitna good looking samajhte ho na & before she could continue shaan stopped her in between by saying ;- correction khanak main apne aap ko good looking samajhta nahi hoon main good looking hoon & in his very own shaan style he said & in fact I think I am the most good looking guy in this world

Khanak:- ab agar mr good looking ki apne aap ke baare mein tareefen khatam ho gayi ho toh kya hum chal sakte hai

Shaan:- haan chalo na maine kab mana kiya tum hi mujhe ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahi thi

Khanak just blushed & went out of the house & shaan followed her. Both of them reached where shaan's car was parked & shaan opened the gate for khanak, she sat down & then he went to his side & sat down on his side, started the car & said chale for trip to Mumbai & khanak nodded her head in excitement & said haan chalo, he smiled & thought that he was successful finally khanak had at least come out of the shock of her parent's death although he knew she used to still become sad at times but now she was most of the time happy & shaan decided to keep her happy like this forever.

tat was a neat update..wat will they feel for each other when they roam around mumbai..waiting 4 ur next update..

shiksha loved it, very cute esp khanaks arkwardness when she walks in seeing shaan just in a vest and when she stares at him, aww even ive missed seeing khanak openly laughing hope she does soon on the show as well

shaan is a greek god!...pooja described him the same way in her FF!!..