ShaNak new love story updated part 52 on page 99 - Page 52

great update dear , keep it up!

i m not going to wait anymore...i will kill u yaar(not literally ha ha...)if u dont update quickly...lastly we want bigger parts yaar...thy r too small...n by the way which xams r u giving right now I dont think there r board xams going on...the update had less of shanak...by the way plz decribe khanak that much hot as u do it 4 shaan ...n also apply the jealousy streaks on shaan also...anywayz nice thank 4 pming me...update soon...

hey shiksha nyc updated but it was too short anyways i think shaan is going to purpose khanak????


i have to keep guessing till next update so plzzz update soon :)

thx for the pm

luv zara

liked the update...u were just great...= ) waiting to know what is the planning!!!!= )

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d next update vl b up by tomorrow

thanks a lot to everyone by showing their appreciation & liking towards dis ff by commenting & pressing like & hpe u lyk dis part also so here s d next part

Part 44

All 6 of them did a group hug & then sunil & madhvi left to greet d guests personally & khanak & khushboo went to the washroom.

Shaan & akshay were standing together & shaan thought to tell his plan 2 akshay so that he could also help him.

Shaan:- bhaiya woh mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi

Akshay:- haan bol na chote

Shaan:- bhaiya yahaan nahi garden mein chalein

Akshay:- par shaan sab log hain yahaan pe kisi ne humare baare mein poocha toh

Shaan:- arre bhaiya aap itni chinta mat karo bas 2 minutes ki hi baat hai phir wapas andar aa jaayenge

Akshay:- acha theek hai chal

They both went out in the garden

Akshay:- ab bol tu kya bolna chahta tha

Shaan:- dekhiya bhaiya mujhe meri baat mein pls interrupt mat karna

Akshay:- ok bol

Shaan:- bhaiya mujhe aapki help ki zaroorat hai……………..khanak se baat karne mein

Akshay:- arre tujhe khanak se baat karne mein meri help ki kya zaroorat

Shaan:- arghh……………..bhaiya bola tha na beech mein mat tokiye

Akshay:- acha sorry sorry chal continue

Shaan:- woh actually mein aur khanak………………….hum dono, he looked down & everywhere while speaking this & finally spoke in a flow bt not realy fast

Shaan:- main aur khanak ek doosre se bahut bahut bahut pyaar karte hain

Akshay's mouth was left hanging open & he looked at shaan wth an expression of shock

Shaan looked at akshay who was looking at him with his mouth open

Shaan:- bhaiya mooh toh bandh kar lo

Akshay closed his mouth & said:- tu sach keh raha hai

Shaan:- haan bhaiya bilkul sach……………………..main aur khanak sach mein ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hain

Akshay:- wow shaan I m so happy for both of u, he hugged shaan who hugged him back & then he broke from the hug & looked at shaan & said:- toh tujhe mere help ki kya zaroorat hai…………………….kya usse bola nahi kya abhi tak tune ki tu usse pyaar karta hain

Shaan:- arre nahi bhaiya woh toh hum dono ne ek doosre ko bol diya bt mujhe aapki ek baat ke liye permission chaiye thi

Akshay:- kya baat

Shaan:- woh actually bhaiya main khanak ko propose karna chahta hoon

Akshay:- kya sach mein tu khanak ko shaadi ke liye propose karna chahta hai

Shaan:- haan bhaiya

Akshay:- arre toh isme meri permission ki kya zaroorat hai……………..agar tumhari aur khanak ki shaadi ho jaaye toh sabse zyaada khush toh hum sab hi honge

Shaan:- toh bhaiya mere paas ek plan hai

Akshay:- acha kya plan

Shaan:- dekhiya bhaiya main khanak ko propose karna chahta hoon lekin yeh baat uske liye surprise hogi

Akshay:- toh mujhe kya karna hai

Shaan:- bhaiya mujhe aapki help chaiye khanak ko propose karne mein

Akshay:- whattt……………………………shaan dekh mein kuch bhi kar sakta hoon par isme teri madat nahi kar sakta……………………………arre yaar khanak se pyaar tu karta hai toh main usse kaise propose kar sakta hoon aur vaise bhi meri shaadi ho chuki hai yaar

While speaking this akshay had started moving a little ahead & after he finished shaan came to him & said:- ughh…………….bhaiya toh main thodi na keh raha hoon ki aap khanak ko propose karo……………………….main bas itna keh raha hoon ki mujhe khanak ko propose karne mein aapki help ki zaroorat hai

Akshay:- acha theek hai main teri help karoonga bata mujhe kya karna hai

Shaan was about to speak when akshay cut him & said:- par ek baat bata tune yeh baat kisi ko bata rakhi hai kya

Shaan:- kaunsi baat

Akshay:- arre yeh hi ki tum aur khanak ek doosre se bahut bahut bahut pyaar karte ho

Shaan:- arre nahi bhaiya bas aapko hi pata hai

Akshay:- toh mom dad aur khushboo ko kab batana hai

Shaan:- bhaiya ek baar khanak ko propose kar doon phir mom dad aur bhabhi ko bhi bata dunga

Akshay:- acha cha lab bol mujhe kya karna hai

Shaan:- bhaiya aapko bas ek chota sa kaam karna hai…………………..aapko andar jaana hai aur khanak ko bolna hai ki main usse abhi bahar bula raha hoon

Akshay:- acha bas

Shaan:- haan bhaiya bas par yeh baat aur kisi ko pata nahi chalni chaiye aur aapko khanak ko chupke se bahaar bhejna hai kisi ko pata nahi chalna chaiye pls bhabhi ko bhi nahi.

Akshay:- ok chal ab main jaata hoon andar aur khanak ko bhejta hoon ok

Shaan:- ok

Akshay went inside & told khanak that shaan wants to talk to her something urgent & so he had called her outside in the garden & khanak had agreed to go.

The garden was a little far from the party & it was totally quiet in the garden & the garden was totally empty & not a single person was there in the garden except for shaan & since the garden was a little far from the party so nothing in the party could be seen or heard from the garden & nothing in the garden could be seen or heard from the party.

Shaan was waiting for khanak to come & as soon as she came he hid behind a tree & khanak came outside in the garden & saw no one there & shouted in a low voice:- shaan

Shaan came behind her & put his hands on her eyes totally covering her eyes.

Khanak was about to shout at first but then as soon as shaan's hand came on her eyes she recognized the touch & understood that it was shaan so she calmly & softly said:- shaan

Shaan:- khanak its me

Shaan's hand was still on khanak's eyes & then khanak said:- I knw shaan its you I cn feel ur touch

Shaan:- haaye aisi baat hai kya

Khanak:- haan aur ab kya tum pls apna haath meri aankhon par se hataoge

Shaan:- oh haan zaroor sorry

Shaan removed his hands from khanak's eyes & khanak turned towards him & said:- kya hua tumne mujhe yahaan kyun bulaya

Shaan:- woh mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai

Khanak:- haan bolo

Shaan:- yahaan nahi wahaan chale pls, he said pointing towards the end of the garden where no one could see them

Khanak:- ok

They moved at the corner of the garden & khanak looked at shaan & said:- ab bolo

Shaan:- khanak woh……………………………..main………………tum…………………..tumse

Khanak made a confused face & could not understand even a word of what shaan was saying so she said with a confused expression on her face.

Khanak:- shaan kya bol rahe ho mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai

Shaan was for the first time feeling very nervous though he knew that khanak would say yes but still he was nervous.

Finally shaan thought to just say it & so he went down on his one knee & took out the ring & put his hand in front of her & said in a very intense & caring voice

Finally he spoke what he wanted to ask her since yesterday & he said:- khanak main koi lambi si speech nahi dena chahta aur tumhe bore nahi karna chahta isiliye main tumhe direct pooch raha hoon

Shaan:- khanak………………….., after a pause he said:- will you marry me

Very nice shiksha !

hei shiksha,

awww myshanak r sooo cute...haaye he proposed her:)