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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: loveshanak

read the last two parts...they were great...waiting for the party...😊



thanks a lot rupali
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Erika95

hi!!!i'm new here...i read this story n it's very very very gud...i've no words to exlain hw wonderful is the way of ur writing...u should be a writer...n i think u r just great...congratulations!!!!!!!

waiting 4 the next party update soon...= )



thanks a lot it feels realy gud dt u like my update so much
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks a lot to all the people who pressed like

mitraraaja, pooja.88, _sweetshona, kiwu, minnu345, dishbhan, loveshanak, purvi08, AzaraA, sweetsute, RB81, -Manita-, adventure_gurl, shanakyasharan,

the next update vl hpefully b up by tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaa...plz update it quickly shiksha...nice n wonderful just one thing u named both shaan and natasha s brothers as AKSHAY wud have been better wid sum other name...plz pm me when u update...bye...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey shiksha...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

wow
awesome & lovely update ...

loved it...

khanak 's & shan's feelings wonderfully described...😍

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thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ souryachak- thank u & the update s cmn up

@ angel_9- thanks a lot angel

PART 43

Shaan & khanak reached at the party venue exact at 7 & when they reached there they were mesmerized as it was totally decorated with red & white & the hall was very well decorated. But still some decorations were going on.

Shaan & khanak had divided their work where shaan had checked all the decorations & khanak had checked all the food & beverages. They were constantly roaming here & there checking things & they were so busy that they cudnt even find time 2 spend wth each other because they ver so busy & finally at 8:25 everything was done & everything was done successfully.

Shaan & khanak were although a little tired but they did not let the tiredness show on their faces & so they brightened up their faces & now both of them were sitting on a table

Shaan:- thank god sab kuch theek se ho gaya

Khanak:- haan ab bas mom dad ke aane ka intezaar hai

Shaan:- haan ek kaam karta hoon bhaiya ko phone karke poochta hoon ki woh log kitni der mein pahuch rahe hain

Khanak:- ok

Shaan started typing akshay's number on his phone when his phone rang & it flashed akshay's name. shaan turned to khanak & said:- akshay bhaiya ka hi phone hai & then he picked up the call

Shaan:- haan bhaiya

Akshay:- chote wahaan sab kuch theek se hogaya na

Shaan:- haan bhaiya yahaan toh saare arrangements ache se ho gaye hain par aap log kab tak aa rahe ho, he looked at his watch & said:- 8:30 toh ho gaye

Akshay:- haan hum abhi ghar se nikal ne waale hain toh bas 15 minute mein pahuch jaayenge

Shaan:- kya…………………aap log abhi ghar se nikale ne waale ho

Akshay:- haan chote hum log abhi ghar se nikal ne waale hain……………………….kya karu ye khandelwal ladies itna time lagati hai ready hone mein

Shaan laughed a little & said:- ok bhaiya bt pls jaldi aana………………..thodi hi der mein guests bhi aana start ho jaayenge

Akshay:- haan cha lab main phone rakhta hoon mom dad aa rahe hai…………………aur sun thodi der ke liye tum aur khanak guests ka dhyaan rakh lena ok

Shaan:- ok bhaiya par aap log bhi pls jaldi aana

Akshay:- ok bye

Shaan:- bye

Shaan put the phone down & turned to khanak & sat back in front of her & said:- akshay bhaiyya ko toh abhi 15 minutes lagenge…………………………………woh abhi ghar se nikale hain mom dad ke saath

Khanak:- par guests toh aane waale honge

Shaan:- haan par thodi der tak hume unhe sambhalna hoga

Khanak:- ok

Shaan:- phir ek kaam karte hain…………………………………chalo gate pe chalte hain……………..guests bhi aane waale hi honge phir unka welcome bhi toh karna padega

Khanak:- ok chalo

Khanak:- I hope sab kuch ache se ho jaaye aur mom dad ko pasand aaye

Shaan:- relax khanak dekho saari taiyaariyan toh poori ho gayi hain aur sab kuch kitna acha lag raha hai………………………tum dekhna sab kuch bahut ache se ho jaayega aur mom dad ko bhi bahut pasand aayega.

He then leaned a little towards khanak & said:- after all meri khanak ne jo kiya hai

Khanak:- shaan pls yahaan pe nahi

Shaan:- agar itne pyaar se bologi to hiss dil ko tumhari baat manani toh padegi hi na, while saying this he kept his hand on his heart & then smiled & moved back.

Both of them went at the gate & stood there & started talking 2 each other in general & after 2 minutes the guests started arriving

They welcomed the guests very respectfully, gracefully & elegantly & now the party was full of guests but there was no sign on akshay, khushboo, sunil or madhvi.

Shaan & khanak were starting 2 get tensed now & so shaan dialed akshay's number

Shaan:- bhaiya kahan ho aap log………………..yahaan par sab guests aa gaye hain

Akshay:- haan shaan hum bas pahuch rahe hain…………………..in fact pahuch gaye bas andar aa rahe hain

Shaan:- ok jaldi aayiye

Akshay kept the phone down & sunil asked him:- kya hua beta shaan kya bol raha tha

Akshay:- jee dad kuch nahi woh bas pooch raha tha ki hum log abhi tak pahuche kyun nahi

Sunil:- acha acha theek hai

They reached the venue & akshay parked the car & they started walking towards the entrance where sunil & madhvi were walking a little forward than akshay & khushboo & akshay & khushboo were deliberately walking a little behind sunil & madhvi so that they feel surprised as soon as they enter the hall.

As per the plan shaan & khanak had switched off the lights & now the hall was totally dark & as soon as sunil & madhvi opened the gate they saw total darkness.

Sunil:- madhvi yeh itna andhera kyun hain yahaan pe

Madhvi:- pata nahi sunil

Immediately the lights came on & everyone shouted together surprise.

Sunil & madhvi were totally surprised & a huge smile came on their faces.

Everyone came & greeted them & shaan & khanak were really happy seeing such a huge smile on sunil & madhvi's faces & so were akshay & khushboo.

Finally everyone wished sunil & madhvi & now sunil & madhvi came to the place where shaan, khanak, akshay & khushboo were standing & said

Sunil:- toh yeh kiska plan tha

Shaan:- well dad plan akshay bhaiya aur khushboo bhabhi ka tha

Sunil & madhvi looked at akshay & khushboo

Madhvi:- acha toh yeh sab tum dono ko kiya karaya hai

Khushboo:- arre nahi mom maine aur akshay ne toh sirf socha tha aur humne bas catering ki preparations ki hai baaki hall ki decorations aur baaki saari cheezein shaan aur khanak ne ki hai toh major credit shaan aur khanak ko jaana chaiye

akshay:-aur toh aur yeh dono party shuru hone ke 1 and a half hours pehle hi aa gaye the taaki saari preparations ache tarah se ho jaaye so aap dono ko agar kisiko thank you bolna hai toh inn dono ko boliye kyunki inhone bahut bhaag daud ki hai iss party ko successful karne ke liye

khanak:- arre nahi bhaiya toh bas aise hi bol rahe hain

khushboo:- nahi khanak aaj akshay bilkul sach bol raha hai tum dono ne bahut mehnat ki hai iss party ke liye

sunil:- shaan aur khanak tum dono ne toh wakai mein aaj humein bahut khush kar diya…………………..yeh gift humein jo itne saalon mein gifts mile hai usme se best gift hain

madhvi:- haan beta thank you

shaan & khanak hugged sunil & madhvi & akshay & khushboo smiled seeing them like this.

Akshay:- arre maana mehnat shaan aur khanak ne bahut ki hai iss party ke liye par hum dono ne bhi toh kaam kiya hai after all idea kiska tha toh humein bhi toh hug milni chaiye

Sunil:- oh ho toh tum dono bhi aao na kis ne mana kiya hai

All 6 of them did a group hug & then sunil & madhvi left to greet d guests personally & khanak & khushboo went to the washroom.

Shaan & akshay were standing together & shaan thought to tell his plan 2 akshay so that he could also help him.

Shaan:- bhaiya woh mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Shiksha...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

awesome update...

i too want to know his plan...

love the description...sunavi r now happy as they got suprised...

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thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei shiksha,
that was nice..but shaan's plan is not out yet..need to wait for how many days yaar..plsss..update the next part soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww its os so so so cute i loved d update:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Shiksha
Read the last three parts 41,42 and 43 sorry could not post earlier
Beautifully written 👏
Awesome parts loved it ❤️
Really very cute updates 😃
Thanks for the PM 😊
Keep writing 😊


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