FF: An Innocent Vixen-Part 5A pg 24 - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
Rooj ..👏...loved it yaar.....awesome .....such a cute part ..full of shanakisms......aww man they are sooo cute.......Golden RBO ki yaad a gaye.........superb👏👏👏

continue soon

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shai
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi Rooj
i loved innocent vixen its very good n also lunch date b/w shaan n khanak.........😃
n shaan n khanak convo its just like old RBO loved it............👏👏👏
n will b waiting 4 next part..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well writtien Rooj👏, I could just picture the scene....Cute update😃.....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank You guys for the Comments!

I know it's been a while and hence I am updating the precap and soon I will be updating the new part!

Be ready for it!!!

Precap:

Part 1: Khanak drops off her little niece and nephew to school. She is described as a bubbly girl with a heart of a kid. She and her best friend Ruby owns a store together. They ride a bike to work rather than the car. Shaan has a dream about his dream girl and he decides to ask his Dadi for what it means. She tells him that it can be true. He sees two girls riding their bike and he hears Khanak laughs and he is immediately drawn to her. He wants to go to her but she leaves before he could call out to her.

Part 2A: At Shaan's office, he is having trouble finding an interior designer and an event planner in the same book. He is frustrated and to clear his mind and to look around he decides to leave the office. Khanak on the other hand has to deliver her painting to the K company so she leaves in a hurry. Both Shaan and Khanak collide with each other and keep moving w/o looking at each other. But Shaan decides to follow her.

Part 2B: Khanak reaches Sunil's office and delivers the painting. Sunil likes her right away. Sunil is bowled by her painting and her simplicity. Shaan on the other hand keeps searching for Khanak and then finally gives up and heads to Sunil's cabin with his confused behavior and dejected. As Khanak leaves the cabin, shaan is bout to enter when they both collide and share an intimate moment for bit.

Part 2C: Shanak were rooted to their spot till Shaan's laughter broke the reverie. Shaan wanted to wipe off the paint from her cheeks but she didn't let him coz he was laughing at her. They fought like 2 year old till Sunil stepped in. Khanak thought of Shaan as a lowly employee and thought that Sunil uncle had hired him out of the goodness of his heart. Sunil didn't bother to correct her and enjoyed the whole banter exchanged between the two. Khanak left and Shaan was miserable that his father picked Khanak over him. Sunil wanted to show the painting by K. Saraswati (aka Khanak but she hides behind that name) but Shaan refuses to see it.

Part 2D: Khanak rode her cycle to her store, all the while complaining about Shaan and having two minds about it. Shaan on the other hand had found his interior designer and event planner in one person and that is where he is headed. Even he thinks about her on the way there. Shaan reaches there first and is impressed by the paintings in the store. He approaches Ruby and makes his proposition on the job offer at his company and Ruby agrees and tells him that Khanak would be the one to come and help him. He likes the name and thinks about where he heard it. He tells the details to Ruby of the meet and leaves from there. On the way out he again collides with Khanak and this time they don't fight for long and he leaves her angry because she wanted to say sorry to him for her behavior but he didn't give her the opportunity.

Part 3: Shaan again has a dream about the girl and in the process he forgets to wake up in time. He reaches the office just in time to go over the project details with Khanak. He doesn't even acknowledge her till he has finished interviewing her and talking about the project. He looks up in the end when he has finally finished his talk. Him and Khanak are both shocked and again another misunderstanding starts between the two. Shaan has mistaken Ruby as Khanak and hence demands the "real" Khanak to come. Ruby comes and both the girls show him their ID and Shaan is shocked even more and decides not to work with her and same goes for Khanak. before the begin another battle, both Sonalika and Ruby made the see the way. Both decide to work together but want to kill each other.

Part 4A: Shaan comes home and find his dad and mom in the living room. His dad tells him about the little fight he heard about and ask who he fought with this time. Shaan tells him that it was Khanak and Sunil is excited and narrates the whole story again to Madz, while Shaan protests. Finally Shaan gives up and decides to leave. But before leaving, Sunil shows him the painting by K. Saraswati and Shaan wishes that it was her who was his new team member for his project and not Khanak. Khanak on the other hand complains to her jiju, Akshay, and her sister Khushboo about Shaan. Akshay predicts she will fall in love and Khanak refuses. next day Khanak is late and walks in late, while Shaan is waiting and they both collide again. They are almost about to kiss.

Part 4B: As Shanak are about to kiss, they hear someone and break apart. Sunil walks in just as they are about to have another war and shortly enough, Khanak poke another jab at Shaan. Again Sunil doesn't let Khanak know who shaan is and their true identity is left unsaid. Shanak work on the project till it was lunch time and it seems Shaan ordered the lunch for her on his own.

Part 4C: Shaan and Khanak finally eat their lunch. They enjoy their "lunch" date. they enjoy each other's company finally and almost have another WW but then they decide against it. They have rest of the afternoon in a comfortable silence.

And Now next part will be coming soon!!!!

Will PM after I update!!!

Enjoy it!!!

Rooj

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Posted: 14 years ago
he he rooji i want tindas and kerals first plzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
rooji u know wat i never read this...i hate myself for tht:( msn i just read d prologue wen u were new out here uske baad i disappeared n then never read this...

i just went through d whole thread n let me say yr an aweesome writer too n this shanak story of urs is just sooo cute i love it wen shaan khanak fight like kiddos n at d end of it r pulled to eachother..reminds me of sum ppl...lol

gr8 ff trooji n i so cant wait to read wats next i sooo gonna b a regular to this...pls add me to yr pm list:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
love your writing Rooj can't wait for more!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
@anki: bola na...Tinda and karela wud come later! lmao...

@Kari: awww yea u left right after that and i started working on this...im back now so will be working on this often...
u shud read my Tinda and karela one tho...its hilarious! lol
Anki can help u look for it. lol
and thanks re

@ Sonali: awww u remember? ok i need u to send me the links to all ur ffs so far. lol
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Posted: 14 years ago

he he ya rooj i love ur tinds and kerlas its hlarious and sensous...and hot and cute ...i can read it 1000 times 😍

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Posted: 14 years ago
i have read tinda karela one baby but this ones veryyy cute n adorable re...u can c it play in yr mind:)so this is yr surprise...indeed a gr8 one:)

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