THANX FOR THE FEEDBACK ..KEEP WRITING - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@wooster - yep, new locations wld be fun!!!....i think duck's cafe is one of the new (kinda permanent) ones!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good 2 hear that u wnt sideline shanak.but dnt think its easy 4 us 2 accept new entries soon.dey r nt up 2 our xpectations.really disppointng.wishng 2 c mre shanak scenes in cmng epis.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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love shanak keep da focus on dem wid da new enteries been gvn chance too bt shanak shud b da focus😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnx alot cvs =) we luv u nd we luk 4ward to the show =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Most of my concerns have been expressed by other members, I understand it takes time to for us to get aquainted with the new cast and for the story to be settled....So will wait for the track to unfold😃....But i just want to add something about some technical issues....

Please do not use a simulator for the car scenes as it looks fake and unrealist....You can easily portray a car journey by filming next to the car, if time & safty is an issue.....
Please take care while editing as the night and day scenes of the different characters seems out of sequence....Generally the editing of the scenes could be sharped a little....
Please use appropriate music at the right times....RBO sad dramatic music was unsuitable for Khanak's worry about Shaan lunch😳.....
Please, please, please address the dailogue, please give them strong clear and exact meaning....No need for suspense, double meaning, poetry or philosphey....Just give us strong lines that carry the story forward and doesn't keep going round in circles....
Sorry if the I have critised too much😳😊...Love the show and welcome the new characters and track....But if some issues were adressed things would be even better😃....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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may love u fr this
u cracked me up wid the car issue🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

may love u fr this
u cracked me up wid the car issue🤣

It was a pain in PKB....Spoiled my enjoyment of the PrSha scenes....Tried to keep my eyes on their faces and not the car😆....Wasn't too difficult because of Vivan😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

Please, please, please address the dailogue, please give them strong clear and exact meaning....No need for suspense, double meaning, poetry or philosphey....Just give us strong lines that carry the story forward and doen't keep going round in circles....

May i am with you regarding Dialogues.. the dialogues used to be so perfect .. meaningful and just right to the occasion. All of a sudden the dialogues just don't seem to link.. and make that impact that used to!
The smallest of the ShaNak dialogues were aww worthy.. I want that back.. for all the characters.
Sunil and Akki need to drop the 'immature Shaan' dialogues.. if they think he is immature.. hold him by the ears and knock sense into him.. sitting and saying that is not going to cut it.. LOL (did my parenting show !??) LOL..
In all good spirits CV's at the end of the day .. we love this show.. just as a child we are trying to knock some sense into it!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Creative_1 - I just wanted to mention, my favourite ShaNak scenes are those before the Kuch Khas Hai song seqeunce....

Great dailogue, cute nork-jork, mixed with serious talk about their lives and awesome chemistry between the two of them....ShaNak can still talk like this after they are married....Infact the power dianamic in this married couple is interesting and fascinating too watch😊....,
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Veena-

May i am with you regarding Dialogues.. the dialogues used to be so perfect .. meaningful and just right to the occasion. All of a sudden the dialogues just don't seem to link.. and make that impact that used to!
The smallest of the ShaNak dialogues were aww worthy.. I want that back.. for all the characters.
Sunil and Akki need to drop the 'immature Shaan' dialogues.. if they think he is immature.. hold him by the ears and knock sense into him.. sitting and saying that is not going to cut it.. LOL (did my parenting show !??) LOL..
In all good spirits CV's at the end of the day .. we love this show.. just as a child we are trying to knock some sense into it!!😳


May and Veena- sorry new here, don;t mean to jump in- but had to add...I completely agree...I kept wondering if there was any change in the show (other than the obvious addition to new charcs) then in another thread change in dialogue writer was pointed out-
CVs, if there is a new dialogue writer given that there are new characters, this may be necessary but don't move away too much from the way of writing which used to crisp strong and realistic- the real USP of the show!!! We want strong characters, they may be here for certain reasons- so if Rahul is here to avenge/ fight with Shaan - make his fight realistic - do not expect us to feel for him with just loud BG music and repetitive dialogues, if Sam is here to change her life (from tomboy to independent girl) - do not expect us to feel for her just because she throws kisses at Shantanu, has a catfight with Khanak but stands dumb with Rahul...Both the actors have lot of potential, just as you have given SHANAK that space (by great writing) the same should be awarded to RS too...they need it for us to accept them!!! At the same time, do not take it away from Shanak.....since Shanak is here to bring love in everyone's lives - which is what we are holding onto the show for!!!!!!

At the same time we know it has only been a week, we promise to be patient...we have a lot of faith in the team- writers directors and production who brought us RBO- lots...please do not let us down.

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