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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
thanks a lot adventure_gurl
@ vandu: shanak toh buss shanak heee rahay gay!
@ manju: LOL! i can so see him being desperate to make Khanak stay awake even in the show! oh and ermmm what PM? oh you mean that i have updated? yaar i didn't ppm anyone this time! lol i think i should have oh well.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tofeeees

@ vandu: shanak toh buss shanak heee rahay gay!


Nahi....psstt ...Dheere bol...
Waise bhi Star One is famous for its gay tracks on their shows...
Sun liya toh isme bhi daal denge...
Between Rohan and Shaan😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
suuuuuuperb beeni.
.I was worried kahin car mein shaan sab kuch kar dein toh hamara Jumbo bed ka kya hoga..aakhir woh hi hamara primary destination for SR tha na...
thankfully he waited or rather traffic cleared...
excellent yaar and I also love the way Khanak was forthcoming and interactive...so good keep it up...very hot romatic and vey good to read too...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lol Beeni, that time I read it, typed a long comment and before I could post....u know what..... :(

wow!!! Beeni....You can write soooooo besharam things...I mean nothing direct but all indirect things were quite meaningful ;(

I know it was difficult to write and you must be having more besharam thoughts in your mind....lol

Loved the "Dhat" part....typical Shanak....very cute
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: missfilmy

lol Beeni, that time I read it, typed a long comment and before I could post....u know what..... :(

wow!!! Beeni....You can write soooooo besharam things...I mean nothing direct but all indirect things were quite meaningful ;(

I know it was difficult to write and you must be having more besharam thoughts in your mind....lol

Loved the "Dhat" part....typical Shanak....very cute

LOL😆😆 yea ranju i am an expert at golmole stuff! kidding! 😆Directly toh i will NEVER EVER write yaar! and you know why! thanks yaar it's ok even this comment of yours made my day!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Beeni u know the trick...even indirect thing can be more besharam than direct ones....... lol.....I love your writing specially they are very much Shanak like :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Hi guys! Ermm i wrote something involving the four characters Khanak, Shaan, Sam and Rahul! LOL and can you believe it there is NO DUCK! Shocking na?😲😆 I'm posting a small fragment of what i am writing. As usual it was supposed to be an OS but it sorta became longer and now i'm thinking i'll post it in parts cuz i still have to finish the last part! 😆 and i really can't hold on to this any longer! so here goes :) It's based on the future as always and Sehju i'm sorry it's not called Fantastic Four!😆
Of Friends and Babies - Part 1
A heavy downpour greeted Khanak as soon as she stepped off the bus at the intersection of the street. Groaning, she took hurried and long steps to reach the shelter of her building before she got drenched. What a day to forget to wear a rain coat, she thought and then smiled inspite of herself. It was unusual for her to think that. It was also unusual for her to groan at the sight and feel of rain. It was unusual for her to be in Singapore.

Her apartment was just a block away from the bus stop, a five minute walk; seven, if she felt too drained. Khanak, sensing that the rain was getting heavier by the minute, gathered her dupatta and spread it unnecessarily over her head and walked faster. Even a year in Singapore was not enough for Khanak to get rid of her Indian attire and every day, as she routinely walked from the bus stop to her apartment, she felt hundreds of eyes staring at her. Not even after a year had she got accustomed to it.

Her blurred building came in view as she strode and so did Shaantanu Khandelwal, standing there at the pavement, dressed in shorts and a sweat shirt and carrying an umbrella in his hand. He looked at Khanak and smiled broadly. God, I missed seeing Khanak get drenched in the rain, he thought, and for a split second he felt the urge to throw away the umbrella and dance with her in the rain, right there in the middle of the road.

"Sam nay khana khaya?" Khanak asked, finally reaching up to Shaan and jolting him out of his day dream. Shaan made an extremely irritated face, thrust the umbrella into Khanak's hands and said "You're welcome!" Khanak looked on confused, then looked at the umbrella dismissively and said, "Oh Thank you' laikin Sam nay khana khaya?" She looked at Shaan's highly annoyed face, waiting for an answer. " Aray mujhay kya pata yaar! Main kya uss ka care taker hoon?" he said and moved to the elevator of the building, closely followed by Khanak, who hurriedly tied the umbrella. She said nothing in the elevator but glanced at Shaan sideways. The cute, annoying, infuriated expression that he had on his face made her want to pull his cheeks and then kiss them but she had more pressing matters to deal with. One was Sam and the other was Sam's five month old pregnancy.

Okay guys i really have NOT been to Singapore and i don't know ANYTHING about the place!😆 all i know is that it rains a lot there! LOL so please just ignore it if i misrepresent Singapore in any way!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Reserved! Yayyyy me first!
Woohoooo i havent been first in anything for like agessss! 🤣
Will read and edit soon! 😛 Although i love it already 😉😆


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Beeniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! I love it! I love it! I love it! ⭐️ Told you before even reading it 😆
Im so glad you've started a FF because i just love your work! You're such an amazing writer! 😃
Ooooh so it's set in Singapore! Cool! Ive never been there but id love to! 😛
Loved the description of Khanak in the rain and Shantanu watching her! Beautifully worded! 👏
Sam's pregnant?! 😲 Oh gosh intruging already!
Write more jaldi jaldiii! :P

Edited by .-BalleBalle-. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
ROFL !!
Nice one....post the latter half soon !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ hinna! i just PMed you a reply LOL! i'm so glad you liked it! yup she is! Cool na!? LOL you wait what i post now! you guys wil be pretty pleasantly surprised :)
@ Vandu: *rubs her eyes* you??!! *rubs her eyes aagain* LOL! see vandu i told you you wouldnt be able to stay away from it! LOL
i'm going now i'll post the rest later in the night :)

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