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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it Beeni, loved the way you ended it.....we are imagining what can happen next๐Ÿ˜

BTW where are you?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello *sob* guys *sob* *cries* and no i am not crying because Shanak have separated i'm crying because i didn't SEE them get separated! i didn't SEE yesterday's episode! *cries* i am in SUCH a bad mood! And i have a very heart wrenching story for you all :( (Nitya and Krishna ignore this story lol since you already know)
So on Monday evening i went to the ATM to withdraw money and guess what?! My ATM card got captured by the freakin machine! and so i could not withdraw money resulting in me not HAVING money resulting in me not paying the Intenet Bill reseulting in my Internet connection getting shut RESULTING in me not being online last night :( hence no episode for me! and NOWW i am in the office WITH internet but i still cannot watch the episode! :(
On the plus side though, I wrote an Epilogue for One Woman Man. So all those who are really excited about this can thank the ATM machine!๐Ÿ˜† well it's not REALLY an Epilogue it's just a continuation of the story since many felt that the ending was abrupt.
Lastly please pray my dad pays the bill today warna i'll miss today's episode too! ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Epilogue or Continuation (whatever you call it)๐Ÿ˜†

"Bhaiyya, there's a problem" Shaan said breathlessly as soon as he entered Akshay's room. Khushboo had gone to spend the weekend with her dad and Akshay was doing what he did best. Work.

"Okay Shoot!" Akshay responded, not taking his eyes off the file.

"I kissed her"

"WHAT?! Why would you do that?!!"

"Bhaiyya I just''.." Shaan hesitated "--- I".

"By the way-----who did you kiss?" Akshay asked casually.

"BHAIYYAA??! KHANAK!!"

"WHATTT?!! Why would you do that?!!"

"Bhaiyaa?" Shaan asked impatiently. "Are you even listening to me?"

"Ofcourse I am! You kissed Khanak. Did you like it?"

"Ofcourse I liked it!

"Did she like it?"

"Bhaiyyaaa!!"

"What? You can ask me if your bhabhi liked me kissing her too!" Akshay said with an innocent face

"Eww Bhaiyaa! Okay that's it I'm leaving!"

"What?? What's the 'Eww' about?! She's your bhabhi! Not your sister!" Akshay countered, paused, then said "Okay I heard that!" Shaan made a bhaiyaa-please-think-before-you-talk face.

"Errrrr-----so----yea where were we? YES'.did YOU like it?" Akshay recovered soon enough.

"God Bhaiyaa I LOVED it! Can we move on now?"

"Where the hell do you want me to move on to?! You liked it, she liked it, toh jaoo ja kar kiss her again and let me work! Sheesh!"

" That's the problem Bhaiyya!"

"You're only allowed to discuss one problem with me per day!"

" It's the beginning of the weekend " Shaan reminded him

"Okay fine then. TWO. What's the second problem?"

"I promised her I won't kiss her again!"

"WHATTTT!!? WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?!!

"Seriously Bhaiyya?!! Is that the only sentence you can use in dramatic situations?" Shaan asked annoyed, but got no reply as he quickly carried on.

"Because----because----Bhaiyya she seemed all uncomfortable!" whined Shaan, getting up and walking distractedly. "And don't tell me I'm a bad kisser because I know I'm not! It's just----maybe she's not ready to move on----I don't know bhaiyya----bhaiyaa?" Shaan's voice became soft "Bhaiyya, I----I think----no not think-----I KNOW----I know I've fallen in love with her bhaiyaa----I have!---but how do I tell her? Main ussay kaisay batao kay main uss say SACH main pyaar karta hoon! How do I convince her that I'm not messing with her like that guy in her class, what's his name? Rishi! I hate him!" Shaan made a fist.

"Shaan dude hang on? Is this because you're jealous of some random guy in her class because if it is then----- well----" Akshay said cautiously.

"No Bhaiyaa! It's not that and you know it!" Shaan said frustrated. " Bhaiyya jub Khanak meray saath hoti hain toh main----main dunya ka sub say khush inssaan hota hoon----jub wohh muskuraati hain toh aisa kugta hain kay meri SAARI problems door hogaee---- jub wohh baaarish main mairay ssatthh hoti hain toh mujhay 'baarish', BAARISH BHAIYAA baarishh Achi lugtiii hainn!!-----jub wohh udaas hoti hain toh mera munn bhareee hojataa haain----jub wohhh ----jub wohhhh meray saamnay nahi hoti, toh main ussay HAR jaga dhoondta hoon---aur bhaiyaaa jub wohhh mujhay mil jaati haain toh jee karta hainn kay ussay kabhee apnee nazron say doooor na honay doonn! In short I LOVE Khanak!" Shaan took a deep breath.

"That's it Shaan! The solution to your problem!" Akshay said excitedly

"What?" Shaan asked confused.

"This! All that you just said! Say it to her!"

"What? Bhaiyaa you think so?" Shaan asked worried.

"Oye Burthann! Go SAY it!!" Akshay said frantically shaking his arms in the air.

"I will I will!" Shaan said surprised at his brother's excitement "And by the WAY! It's 'Burthal' not Burthann!" Shaan corrected.

"Haan haan Khanak nay toh tumko bari Gujrati sikha dee na! Aur usko toh English sikhanay ka kaam Rishi karay ga! "

"BHAIIYAA!" Shaan's blood boiled.

"I'm joking, I'm joking" Akshay said hurriedly. "Now GO! Tell her!"

"Uskee koi zaroorat nahi hain" came a small voice from the entrance of the room. Shaan turned to see Khanak standing in the doorway, blushing profusely, wringing her hands and looking down. There was a silence. It went on for a minute. More than a minute. Akshay purposely dropped his file. That jolted everyone to their senses

"Khanak?" Shaan said still shocked, still standing in the middle of the room with Akshay. "Kya tumnay---mera mutlub hain---Kya tumnay" Shaan was lost for words.

"Mainay sun liyaaa---" Khanak said softly, not meeting Shaan's eyes.

Akshay cleared his throat loudly. "I think I'll just take this darn file downstairs!" He said picking it up and rolling it. " This room is getting too romantic for my taste----- Never happens when Khushboo is around " he added. Reflecting sadly over what he just said, he strode out of the room.

Khanak came inside, still twiddling her thumbs. Shaan looked at her cautiously and sighed with relief when he saw her smiling. He walked towards her too. "Khanak main----"Shaan started and looked at Khanak, looking down. Shaan took her hands in his and said "Khanak, look at me ---please" Khanak looked up. Shaan looked into her big beautiful eyes and felt the world shining upon him once again.

"Don't say it", Khanak whispered.

"Why?" Shaan breathed back, still holding her hands tight, moving closer

" Because----Because after you say it----You will have to break your promise" Khanak said innocently, but smiled.

Shaan smiled too. "Let me" His head touched hers. Khanak shivered.

"'Let you' what? Say it or break your promise?" she asked

"Let me 'both'! Say it AND break my promise!" Shaan's hand moved towards Khanak's waist.

Khanak turned red. "Alright!" She finally managed "Go ahead then"

Shaan's hand's held her face in his hands and finally said it this time meaningfully. This time he didn't have to hide his 'I Love you' in his appreciation for Khanak agreeing to use all his pictures for the karwa chaW*H or in the 'I love you' that he said to Natasha, looking into Khanak's eyes. This time the words were said all out in the open; face to face, eyes to eyes, heart to heart.

"There goes one! Time to break my promise now" Shaan said mischievously and grinned.

"I guess", Khanak smiled and attempted to look down before Shaan grabbed her face again and kissed her, much more fully and comfortably this time.

'That kiss wasn't my last kiss after all', thought Khanak elatedly.

'This one won't be either', Shaan's thoughts answered Khanak's.

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Posted: 14 years ago
LMAO๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Beeni...I just read your sad story and this is all I did๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Oh God this made my day๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Ok going to go read your story now๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaaay Beeni .. this was a perfect ending... Khanak & Shaan connecting with their thoughts .....
Wow So So romantic ........
Thanks for writing this epilogue/continuation ..... Awwww SHANAK & love confessions are my all time favourite !!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok I am back with my comments....superb Beeni! I loved it!!!!

Shaan's and Akshay's conversation was hilarious...U really know how to depict the characters!!!!!

Loved the following one the most:

""Oye Burthann! Go SAY it!!" Akshay said frantically shaking his arms in the air."๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Akshay Made Shaan Baingan ka burthann๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ and a utensil๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

anyways loved the ending...it was sooo hot!!!๐Ÿ˜

and the rest of the update!

PS: Your first siggy...that is not what they say to eachother. KT says "what is wrong with you" and Yashu then say that "main mazak kar rahi hoon" and then KT says that "main bhi karun mazak?" get your facts right girl๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 14 years ago
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Beeni darling....love you dear....*hugs*๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Awwww..I am praying that your dad does pay the internet bill for you so that you can watch yesterdays and todays episode....God Beeni....wonderful epi really....
Oh back to the epi....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†love love Akki I really do...and loved him here too...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Shaan the Burthal...and Khanak twindling her thumbs...had me...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Lovely ending dear....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† if only ....๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
So me waiting for a new one from you soon!!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
Your ATM Story.....at the risk of sounding super-mean....All I reacted after reading it was like this - ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Gawddddd.............I love Akki......He is just the most ADORABLE person on the show.......I soooooo LOVEEEEE the guy...!
And I think Akki being Akki wudnt have gone out of the room...he'd have stood there enjoying the nervousness of both and laughing....Then Shaan wudve had to ask him to go๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I missed Sunil here๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
I loved Akki ka one line reaction....What? Why wud u do that?.....Then he asks who he kissed and knowing that he kissed his own wife....he was even more shocked....And his line" U liked it...she liked it...Ja kiss her again and leave me alone..." Classic Akki !!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
And Burthan??๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Amazing re......I was laughing๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† all thru it - ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
what a cute part beeni .... thanks for the epilogue ...i miss akshay-shan convos in rbo.... lol@ akshay's "why would u do that?" ๐Ÿ˜† gosh shan's words abt his love for khanak are so beautiful... lovely confession ๐Ÿ˜ณ i loved the promise braking part ๐Ÿ˜†
i will pray u get ur net soon dear.... *a hug* for u for both the OS and the epi ๐Ÿค—...u will need it as shanak really made me cry yesterday....
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks everyone! i'm sort of in a rush again LOL! i'm trying to watch the episode by hiding the screen from the camera! urgh!
oye rooj! i KNOOWWWW woman! it's not the actual words he said! Ranju just wanted to make it a bit different! and i LOVE her for that LOL! i have ruttafied all yasharan interviews if you must know hmph! LOL acha gotta go
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tofeeees

thanks everyone! i'm sort of in a rush again LOL! i'm trying to watch the episode by hiding the screen from the camera! urgh!

oye rooj! i KNOOWWWW woman! it's not the actual words he said! Ranju just wanted to make it a bit different! and i LOVE her for that LOL! i have ruttafied all yasharan interviews if you must know hmph! LOL acha gotta go


๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ Mujhe laga tujhe abhi tak nahi pata๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

but it was a nice one tho...i still love the original๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰

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