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Sairaaaa

@Sairaaaa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#311

^^Beeni; I don't care if it doesn't rain in Dhulwadi,if RBO can be illogical for the last 2 months so it can rain in dhulwadi also.😆

OMG!OMG!😲🤣🤣 LM*AO! W*H! Tumhe ise achi jag nahi mili thi kya? in the desert infront of CHAMPAK!🤣🤣 'Bechare ko marne ke irada hia kya'? 😲He'll might dehydrate over Shanak himself 😆 yaar everyone was raging over making out in the rain infront of their apartment,the whole forum will go berserk if they're MAKE out,you mean out out na? 😕😆

OK; I understand yaar and I'm just hectic with uni right now,feel the pressure.😳 p.s sorry for spamming,we always end up doing this😆

Lots of Muah! Mauh! and huggiessss 🤗🤗Your're sweetheart and I know you can never say no yaar,take your time as long as you want BUT I will haunt you even after a year if you won't write it.

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isomers

@isomers

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#312

part1:
AWW!! I love Jealous Shaan, he's so adorably cute!😆
and Rishi BHA is awesome! A guy that can bring out hatred in Shaan has to be totally awesome.
Does Khanak not love him in the SS? 😲 She keeps talking about Natasha ji.

btw..this has got to be the best line in this part : Screw it, he thought; to pick up his wife from college, he corrected himself.

don't ask me why..it just is. 🤣 I can totally imagine Shaan saying something like this. Thinking, thinking..and then just giving up after a while!😆 Budthal is definitely capable of this!
Beeni, is this why you wanted to know what you call a channi is english?😆
and AHHHH. Khanak in a red lehenga? If I see her in it, I would defo start having a girl crush on her. 🤣 don't laugh, it's totally normal to think someone is amazingly pretty! Even if it a person of the same gender. 😆
You'd better have the karva chauth part written too! And Shaan better be in a white kurta.😲

*runs off to read part duex*
I shall be back to edit this after reading the second part!

part2:
GOD! Shaan is such an ass! 🤣 If I see someone going on and on about themselves like that, I would slap them in the face! 🤣 but then..this is Shaan we're talking about. Even the most annoying thing can look cute when he's doing it! 😆
I love how Khanak went on rambling about the picture and the vrath! *total Khanak ishtyle*

EEEEEKKKKSSSS!! They are so CUTE! Adorably cute!
and umm..did he actually mean it when he said ILU?!😲 I'm so glad I waited till you updated all the parts..that why, I don't have to bug you to update soon!😆😆

BEEEEEENNNIII! I love this SS! It's like cuteness to the max. And you know I'm a complete sucker for that kinda stuff. 😍
oh, and the fact that Khanak is going to college is amazing! I wish they could show something like that in the show but *sigh*

and now for part three.I shall be back to edit this...again.😆

part3:
OMGGG! this has got to be the best part. 1) because it was funny as hell and 2) because they kissed! and he realized that he loves her and cannot live without her. <3
I didn't know Khanak had OCD.😆😆 I got this mental image of Khanak arranging all of the pictures in order of height.🤣 Oh Shaan, the things he makes everyone do!
And I love how Akki(when I say Akki, I'm talking about Sahil😛) held up each picture for her..he's such a sweet bha!😆😆 and an airhead as well, I mean "My brother looks good in this picture" come on man!😆😆

So Khanak wears a red sari..man! if only she wore something like that in the show. ): I mean, I don't watch the show anymore..but I would definitely be willing to sit through 30 minutes of RBO to see her in a red saree!😆 such is my fanaticism! :D

Beeni, ILY for writing this! It's so cute, made my heart sigh! 😍

I have to go now, my computer is like running at snail speed and I'm afraid that it's going to crash on me or something(I have Vegas open, that's why I'm afraid).😆
I'll talk to you tomorrow morning..errr, afternoon.😆

AHA! I kept my piramise!😛 what now huh?😆
and btw..this is the longest comment I have ever written for an FF.

Edited by -Nitya- - 14 years ago

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#313

hey Beeni..............

loved the OS...........⭐️

u r awesome,fantastic writer............👏👏👏

loved the karvachaut.part..............10 pics of shaan khanak have seen...............😆

akshay , dadi n khanak convo........loved it...........😃

n also loved shanak part...........

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#314

Beenii baby it was awesomely written.....feelings pouring all over....!!

responding late as I read all parts together today.....and loved each of them

do keep writing SS and OS....both.....

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#315

Beeni...sorry for being late...

Ok so first of all: why did u make Khanak OCD? i mean bechaari pehle hi beemar hai aur uppar se aur...aur phir Shanak confusion!🤣

Kya item banaya hai Shanak ko...khulla baarish ke medaan mein Pyaar🤣

I loved this part...Khanak had to go through every single pic and then the end was Shaan himself and what happened to Dadi and Akshay bha...loved the Bha line🤣

ok chal next OS likh ya phir Epilogue...cant wait

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Hinna

@.-BalleBalle-.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#316

Beeeniiiiiiiiiiiiiii 🤗

Ok so commenting on the last part finally 😆

Well i know you said dont say this but im still going to say it....

I LOVED IT! 🤣

But yeah seriously this part was so good...romance, comedy, ahem ahem ;) 😆

I loved the bit where akshay is holding up all the photos of Shaan in front of her 🤣

And then Shaan coming from behind saying that not everyone's her bha! Loved that! 👏

And the kiss...aye hayee! ☺️ i loved how you described it all building up 👍🏼

Wonderful work wifey 👏⭐️

Write more :D

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isomers

@isomers

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: .-BalleBalle-.

But yeah seriously this part was so good...romance, comedy, ahem ahem ;) 😆

@excuse me, but would you please care to explain to me,the sweet and innocent little girl, what your "ahem ahem" is referring to.😳 *plays angelic music in the background*

🤣🤣

I agree with everyone else Beeni, you NEED to write more. Maybe an epilogue on this SS itself? I would love to know how the rest of their life went in this one story.😆

I DEMAND another OS/SS.😳

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Livelife

@tina2mina

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#318

Thank You so much for the OS..it was unbelievably cute and amusing. It was fantastic. xoxo

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Nisha

@Nisha2

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#319

Beeni, sorry for commenting so late, once again I was blown away by your writing, it really was amazing.👏

Awww Shaan and Khanak are so cute, it is soo sweet the way she used his photos, and even called Rishi bhaiya. 😃

I liked the fact that you also included Akshay and Dadi, but where did they dissapear to?😆

I am so glad shaan reached home on time, and he brought her bhajiyas too. How adorable is this guy? 😃

Love the kiss at the end, but Beeni I agree with the others you really should write an epiloge,😆 as would love to see what happens between them.

Thanks for writing such a fab OS honey, can't wait to read more, till then happy writing.🤗

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#320

Beeeeennnnnnnnnnnnniiiiiii darling,

*Muwah* loved it lvoed it lvoe it dear...mind blwoing infact...only if they had shown us something like that...then....😆😆😆 if only Rucha wouldn't ahve gotten married so soon....😆😆

We still can have her go to college after the Dulwhadi track and have Shaan all jealous ...😆😆😆😆 because hes way way too possessive when it comes to his Khanak....😆😆

Aww...no me can't wait to read another one from you soon....so get writing woman!!!!😆😆😆😆

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